The Adventurous Gamer Ninja - Daichi Hekima by MonkWithAPen

Does anyone know why this isn't updating anymore?

Well, the good Naruto fanfics I've found so far,
Good - Wind calamity, Reborn with Tenseigan, and this one
Average - Strongest Kakashi, Kisame (nah this one is below, maybe top among trashes)
Trash - all of the ecchi/harem/r18 ones... it's pretty much MC OP af and doing whatever shit he feels like doing with no fks given to anything Naruto

Всё хорошо до 200 глав, дальше идёт херня с наукой технологий тупыми решением которые максимально растягивают сюжет, чтоб вы знали канон ещё не начался, и если честно потерялась эта романтика шиноби, какая технология? Какие путешествия во времени это абсурд, если хочется работать с технологиями то делайте фанфик по боруто, крч фанфик хороший но автор...

Почему нету фанфика где Кагуя положительный персонаж и она борется с МК против других оцоцуки , или чтоб Кагуя была например как дедушка в кольце, было бы интересно

Rank B
This is in all categories from story, character development, plot development and consistency renders it a rank of B as of 05/23/2023 chapter 215.

Gave it a second chance and my god it is boring, the mc is a soulless puppet

I have a quetion for people who like this novel; Don't you feel annoyed with chapter long status notifications? I feel like 80% word space is wasted on system instead story progress, It wont be a problem for me if the chapters were long but they are so short yet author waste so much on reapeating the same info. I just couldn't deal with it and had to drop this novel. How are you'll dealing with it?

Are you bored with Naruto using Talk-no-jutsu???
Introducing No-Talk-no-jutsu... The story will go exactly the same as the cannon, except Author being a parasocial so MC hangs around important characters without making any changes
and replace Naruto when he use talk-no-jutsu in every crucial moments
with the MC using no-talk-no-jutsu.

Okay perhaps not that overboard...

Chapter 12:
'Status' /// took almost half the chapter
(Keep it up Author... Soon you'll be able to maximize the cheese status panel gives to the word count. Soon it'll be something like...)

Chapter ???:
'Status' MC muttered.
-- Next Chapter --

Chapter ??? + 1:
Skill:
-- Next Chapter --

Chapter ??? + 2:
Equipment:
-- Next Chapter --

Amazing novel... *throws book at the Author's head AGGRESSIVELY*

Oh- Nvm, it might come sooner than I thought... Chapter 18 Status panel took 3/4 of the whole chapter.

Note: Jump Straight to Ch 24 after reading Ch. 1; u won't miss anything.

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Okay I start to understand the actual value of this novel now... Author is actually proficient in making Fighting Narrations (Ch 62-63) this is geniunely good; really well thoughtout .

Too many useless notifications. This novel is literally the embodiment of System to the point of cancer. I just wish Author toned down the notification instead simply showcase it in fights, or testing, or anything but the notification format; It's too repetitive.

Those skill names, cooldowns, +%, etc... It doesn't hold any meaning if Author doesn't show its' actual difference in combat/testing. And most of the skill ended up never being shown the difference; cause there're simply too many... and they change too rapidly. All the Author end up doing with those notifications are, literally, creating FILLERS to get more word count; as if he didn't have enough from calling up the status back to back.

Ch. 66- 67 -- when Author narrates cannon flashback... the quality of the narrative soar to the roof. But when it's something Author made on his own it plunge back down to sub-par.

Ch. 71 -- this is what it mean by a 'Forced Plot'. MC literally has a skill to influence ppl's thought to aggree to his suggestions.
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Overall:
Author is only good when full fighting narrations, and narrations when it's full summary of the cannon flashback 1 to 1. Everything else? 3/5... I'm gonna bash it too hard. Cause once u get used to skipping and ignoring the obvious flaws... It's actually a pleasant read. (I mostly write this review after seeing how sloppy the uchiha massacre was handled by the MC and was writing out of spite... Literally if u read it u would understand. But starting from Chapter 75 things start to become 4/5)
Another Noteworth Naruto Fan-Fic: "Reborn with Tenseigan"

system novel without harem, big yikes.

The story is too slow, 121 Ch but still at the academy. If the aouthor keep writing with this pace. I higly doubt he will finish the story. Not to mention it is just fanfiction. So if you dont like slow pace story, this is not for you my guy.