Kill the Sun by Warmaisach

To make this brief the World development is 10/10 like so much of the novel the only problem the MC. The MC has the EQ of a new born. And there is no character development other than him getting stronger. As I’m sure many have read previously novels with a dog MC are unbearable to read.

Reading this left a really bad taste in my mouth, This had so much potential, but author just put 1 kilo of salt in a perfect tasting cake. Nick was the worst thing this novel had. The world building was top-tier, and the characters, aside from Mc, were all great, especially the Spectres. I just can't continue after MC made soo many mistakes but still acts like a manchild.

To be honest, the novella seemed to be composed strangely. The author very strangely describes the events and development of the “main character” and his unhealthy attraction to the “people”. His previous works were better than this one. I'll give it a rank of D

How does the author manage to keep making his works worse(i think this is likely still somewhat good but seeing the trend i just dont see reading it), youd expect that he learns from his past ones but somehow he does the opposite(first one despite some issues was very good second one was alot worse but still quite good, this one despite not even have read it is very likely to be worse than his last one which already had me almost stop reading it because of some issues(and from the comments i gather he not only didnt remove/improve upon them he at the very least still has them in this work (likely worse than before from what i can gather)) all of this makes me basicaly stop having any interrest in ever even starting it despite being very fond of his first novel and to some extent his second one. [Just some rambaling from someone who is dissapointed after having read a very good novel only to read a worse one(i read it from like ch 300 while waiting for updates) which makes the same mistakes and makes them worse to than stacking ch for the third story only to see that it likely has somehow gotten worse]

Readers feel this LN went down the drain and isn't worth reading at all. On top of this the MC was given a wish from a very powerful monster and used it on something utterly stupid. The MC could have asked the monster to train with him (this is how cultivators cultivate and become higher levels) and the MC just ignores that fact, a fact that the Monster said in internal dialog he was happy about because he wouldn't have to waste time on the MC. The LN was written poorly.

author straight up felt that the story was moving too slowly (which i assure u wasnt) and threw everything out the window.

The character has a very weird attachment to one of the other male younger characters not sexual just a weird as if the other guy was his kid and he was a frantic overprotective mum and it just makes nor sense.

Indeed he did.

But I wonder why grass won't grow in the outer city.