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Just Deserts by Elbowsnapper

[MHA. OC. Sand Manipulation Quirk. Complete.]

Hisoka Higawara struggles to understand... Read more
[MHA. OC. Sand Manipulation Quirk. Complete.]

Hisoka Higawara struggles to understand those around him, but he's learning quickly. One day, he makes friends with a girl named Nanami, and his life will never be the same.

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    ErectileReptile
    30
    This is probably the best MHA fan fiction I’ve ever read, and trust me when I say I’ve spent too much time reading them.

    The characters are astonishingly well written, their interactions are detailed and realistic. The original characters are interesting and well constructed. The side characters from the original story are extremely well rounded and come across as authentic people; their portrayal and motivations are oftentimes even better developed than in the original story. That, along with the lead character are this story’s greatest strengths.

    The main character is compelling and someone you root for from start to finish, his personality and quirk are entertaining to say the least and his motivation enraptures you to the point where they become indistinguishable from our own. Hisoka’s wishes become ours and his emotions sway our own, truly magnificent writing.

    The ending is satisfying and while I hope Just Deserts will get a sequel in the future I wouldn’t be too upset (or surprised) if it didn’t as the storyline wraps up very neatly.

    Overall, an amazing piece of writing. Kudos to the author for taking us on this journey and I hope to read more of his work in the future.
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    mistvenom
    20
    oh man, I thought mc will have Bungee Gum quirk
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    Horizon666
    00
    Decent read, and the chapters are far longer than is usual here on Ranobes, so while there's only twelve chapters, it doesn't feel like it at all.

    That said, when I got to the end, it did feel a bit abrupt. I was expecting more story than was delivered.

    All in all, I'd say its worth a read, its engaging enough.
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    lynx
    00
    its great, but the story does not continue into MHA
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    Víteliú
    01
    What title

    Rank B+
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    BookEater
    20
    Buena novela, recomendada.
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      1justreads
      20
      I didn't know Spanish. But I still got it somehow 😆
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        Ambarish7
        10
        Because you have google translator
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          1justreads
          20
          Well actually it is because of the deep influence that Hollywood has had on my life and have watched many Spanish people talk but never met anyone remotely spanish. So i kinda inferred what Bueno means.
          But the next 2 just need a little common sense cus novela and recomondada are awfully close to novel and recommended. So that's that.
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            Ambarish7
            30
            Chill
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              1justreads
              10
              Sorry sorry pressure I got a little too enthusiastic explaining 😅 myself
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    Prince of Death
    10
    Hello FamilyGuy002
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    Eon
    Eon
    10
    That's a funny pun in the title. 10/10 Novel
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      MUE
      MUE
      00
      Am I stupid? Because I don't find the pun.
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        Eon
        Eon
        10
        Sand Manipulation ability. Desserts and Deserts sound the same. Just Desserts is turned into Just Deserts
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          Jovar
          10
          its actually "just deserts",
          its not spelt as dessert, but its pronounced as such,
          it works the same here regardless though welldone
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            Eon
            Eon
            10
            Oh. Thanks for the correction man! Words that sound the same are hard
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    Novel Addict
    70
    Author is talented at emulating the ‘feeling’ of the MHA verse, the MC seems to have autism of an unclear degree. His character is very interesting to say the least, literally. It’s been a good read so far, not bad.

    4/5
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      Deathseeker
      21
      Thank you fellow daoist for the poison testing
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      pranavisololeling
      30
      Autism and Mha are perfect companions
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