The Rise of the Black Plain by RVN_1998

Hear ye weaklings! Quit whining about grammar.
What doesn't kill you makes you stronger.

How is the r18 in the novel, is it too often and does it hinder the plot much

I came here after reading the title as back pain instead of black plain

Have read only 30 chapters
Boring and bland.
CN Xianxia young master(s)
Vague cultivation techniques.
Vague cultivation knowledge.
Low variety of ways to get strong.
Nothing innovative.
LQ(Low Quality) Technique Descriptors.
Strength measured in levels(1-100).
Bad Grammar(Not the broken kind, but nonsensical-sometimes).
Doesn't seem to be much of a kingdom-building novel, even after 1 year of in-novel development.
Plot armor.
Enemies IQ reduced, so MC can seem smart, although he just uses common sense.
Probably in the future:faceslapping.
Cliches.

Comment if anything changes in the future(and what) so others know, but I will not be reading this anymore. If you find it interesting, you are free to continue reading. I only wrote my opinion.

Ps. The reason I didn't criticize grammar more is because I am used to nonsensical word structure from MTLs.

This is one of those terrible novels where the mc cultivates slow af because "muh god physique", just run away bro.
RUN!

this author needs a prof reader, it editor if he or she could not afford then grammarly is good enough...... reading this novel is really a challenge, my brain cells are almost dead....

Too many times I find the word "THAT" in a sentence that shouldn't have the word "THAT", which makes me uncomfortable

[Chapter 1]

Honestly, I usually never write any review before finishing the last, updated chapters —or... because I'm planning to abandon it— but this one... this one clearly needs some better translation.

I mean, from the get-go of chapter 1, I had to struggle to read and re-read, in order to maybe quasi-understand the estimated meaning.

Ex:

[Several explosions took place in a few seconds, along with the chaos generated by the people who passed in the area and were now fled in despair. Some students left the Spiritual Academy, several vendors, and many passers-by who would typically pass by this place almost any time of day.
...
As the crowd dispersed, five cultivators from the Spiritual King stage were fighting 4 of them were attacking the 5th with clear intention to kill.
...
etc.]

Honestly, even if the author use a translation program, he should have done a much better revision than this. Punctuations exist for good reasons.

So, this review has nothing to do with the story —that I have yet read and understood— but everything to do with the poor translation.

And that, is besides the weird dialogues.

Ex:

["Albert, you should never have had absurd thoughts of getting a mid-level spiritual region as a reward given by the kingdom. Hahaha, as if a newly created noble family like yours could do so."

Come on, the day I hear someone never-have-had me in a short conversation—with enough time to describe: getting a mid-level spiritual region as a reward given by the kingdom in-the-very-middle-of-a-fight—Well, that's probably the very day of the end-of-the-English-world as we all know.

In any case, I will still try to read this, and see how far I will go.

I don't like to do this, but it's about 2 months without an update. If anyone still doesn't know, you can read it here:
https://www.panda-novel.com/details/the-rise-of-the-black-plain(FN)-1179