Reincarnation Paradise轮回乐园

I'm up to chapter 757.
The translation and editing are terrible and inconsistent.

There are also some seriously stupid parts where the author adds things just because "it could be cool".
For example, any 'scene' where the 'wire' is used makes no sense whatsoever.

Overall an entertaining story though.

Is this MTL? the translation and editing is horrible

im kinda cringe reading this but i relly want to read this, so i have question, answerr please ??


-are other hunter from same world? or not? like "Earth is main supperior world" or some shit?
-are the world mc visit only plagiarism-world? (anime etc) not a new world?
- what about the author of those world? like one piece creator Oda? are those author exsist in MC world? what conection those author have with system? why mc not go to the majestic country name japan to visit those author?

Despite how absolutely horrible the first chapters are, this is actually decent. I'd say a 7/10.

It starts out as an infinity-genre type novel based on anime, but it phases out the anime worlds over time and focuses a lot more on original worlds. There is a decent mix of different tactics the MC uses in different worlds that somewhat reduce the amount of repetition (getting rid of it completely is basically impossible in a novel with so many chapters). Progression is moderately rewarding, you can feel him getting stronger and being able to face things he couldn't before. Action scenes are good, although they're a bit limited by the MC's focus on a few abilities. The side characters are relevant, distinct, and consistently involved in the plot. His pets are mostly standard comic relief but they work pretty well, and they're functional enough that it makes sense he takes them with him.

Notable cons:
- The beginning. Everything about it. It's borderline unreadable, nothing makes sense, and all of the rules it establishes are thrown away later because they're nonsensical.

- Progression is only moderately rewarding. In a novel like this which depends on it, that's notable. A lot of the time the upgrades he spent an entire world building resources to buy don't seem like they make that much of a difference. The most obvious example is nerve strength/reflex speed. It's supposed to make a huge difference, and it does originally when he has active abilities that grant it. But when he gets it as a passive, it just doesn't really do anything. His basic class ability is also pretty underwhelming. It's supposed to burn mana and deal true damage, but it never seems to actually make a difference in combat. I think only once has an enemy he's fighting ever run out of mana.

- It has the standard flaw of all novels this long, abilities get forgotten (and later retconned) fairly regularly. Sometimes even right after the MC gets them, the author just kind of forgets they exist. This author is particularly bad with % chance to happen abilities, they just never seem to happen.

- MC is unnecessarily and unsympathetically evil sometimes. I get the character, and I get his personality as a 'violent no-nonsense' type of guy. But there are some cases where he could resolve a conflict with a single word of explanation, and he decides to chop someone's arm off instead. And then he has to waste time dealing with that instead of just spending a single second to say "Yes" or "No". It seems counter-productive and not consistent with his 'anything to get the job done' mentality. The chapters with Morey and her friends make the MC a bit unsympathetic too. You can only beat up a group of naïve girls and force them to work for you so many times before just coming across as a bully.

Everything is good, but get this man some romance...I like a little bit of romance in all this seriousness

pretty good, do you have any suggestions for a novel like this with a stronger or cooler MC? I'm tired of seeing the MC struggle and always be weak (with the genre entering the world of film/anime)

The tl for this is pretty trash, so I have used AI to improve the grammar and structuring of the chapters. All improved chapters will be posted in the comments below chapters starting from chapter 10

Edit: Apparently there's a comment cap, where you can only make 100 comments a day. Fu#k.

the big problem with the translation is the name of abilities and characters names change that happen every chapter after the vol.4 or 5 is really annoying especialy when the lntml version the name change does not happen so i dont really know where this change come from

The main problem I have with this novel is the translation quality is shit, some chapters even straight out MTL, it hurts my brain