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Abuse of Magic by Sdrawkcab

William woke confused. Why would the system say something like that? He already intended to give... Read more
William woke confused. Why would the system say something like that? He already intended to give his son the system…

In a world filled with corruption and death, a small boy is about to acquire a gift for this important birthday, that will change the entire world. He will have to persevere through many trials that will change the fate of the entire realm. Protected from the evils of the world, by the success of his father, Joseph has no idea what he is getting into, but the only way to overcome the trials he will face, is through the abuse of magic!

With the aid of a young girl, that he meets shortly after receiving the system, Joseph learns how horrible the world outside of his protected bubble actually is, and forms a lifelong bond with her, that nothing will ever break. Through the abuse of magic, they will have to overcome demons and gods, in their quest for Joseph to become the Mage King! Collapse
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    SomeoneRandom
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    I've heard it was a good novel, so why is it rated so lowly
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    Rootsyl
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    Very well written and is fun to read. Progression can be felt. Story is engaging. Characters not boring.
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    Abernath
    10
    Unending drama and angst from the mc as the story goes on.

    Mc gives his system to his girlfriend/slave so if that's a minus for you (like it is to me) then watch out.

    One of those "slavery is good and okay as long as you're NICEtm to the people you're treating as or worse than cattle not to mention depriving of every one of their basic freedoms and rights"
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    Wendel
    Wendel
    20
    Mc has 2 past life memories/experience but somehow he's still naive. Im guessing the memories/experience that he got is just about the occupation/job stuffs but its just weird for me how he acts like a kid then when its needed(e.g more ways how to cook stuff)its so serious. But then again there'll be a hole since he drew a sketch of an outfit which even the author said isnt his skill but still has memories of it so yeah..
    Its good tho. Ill try reading this again later.
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    Rootsyl
    11
    A quality read with little to no grammar mistakes. Story is great with good character development. The ending is on point and satisfying. 8/10
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    Neninho
    11
    Quote: Aqua

    I didn't read it yet, but you should use the spoiler tag
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    WaryBaconOG
    00
    i wish it was longer
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      1ntrovert
      00
      Можно вопрос, там есть романтика?
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    Aqua
    Aqua
    53
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    fen
    fen
    80
    Very decent read.
    Reads like a shounen manga in that the MC is "tested" but not really. He becomes OP very quick and stays that way. There isn't really any tension but that's pretty par for this genre so I'm not surprised.
    The plot isn't particularly new or interesting but the great grammar and decent writing keeps the chapters flowing along.
    The world building is nice and some of the character interactions are genuinely funny. The magic system is a fresh twist on an old classic.
    The pacing is all over the place though.
    I enjoyed my time reading this. I don't expect to re-read it ever again.
    Solid 3.5/5.
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    ID:entity:Kelvin
    410
    Nope
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