Naruto: Dream to Immortality by HolyJoker

3.5 out of 5. It's not bad, just go into this knowing that this novel can be extremely edgy at times, giving you some cringe moments(alpha/beta talk, "asserting dominance", treating everyone as disposable conveniences,etc). That's ok though, i already knew what i was getting into and just read this novel for fun, which it is. However, since the mc treated everyone as tools to grow his power, it was hard to care for the characters at all(mostly relying on naruto nostalgia to keep me interested), or care for the mc, since he was pretty much a high functioning sociopath who barely cared for anyone. The mc was basically a dislikable bastard whom you read about just for fun. Reading the comments on each chapter was also a great part of my enjoyment, many funny edgelords.

Couldn't read past 33 chapters. MC is trying to be Mr. cynical EDGELORD with all his heart inside his mind while acting "calmly", making girls fall over heels for him (while MC shits on the said girls in his mind) and making others in awe of him. At the same time author tries to portray the world and its inhabitants as dark and cynical as well (the characters that weren't made cynical by author, were made idiots. So it's either this or that, or something from both worlds). If you compare both visions at the same time, all the points of this look funny from the mature perspective and I really can't get serious while reading this novel because of said points.

Actually, all of that before was just my opinion, but what I know for sure, it's that author is really bad at writing psychopath main protagonist. This is really important and not that easy if you want to make good protagonist for your book while making him psychopath at the same time, and by the 33 chapters I read, I understand that author really failed at this. There's so much more to get this interesting and entertaining to do to make such protagonist that I would need to write at least 20+ comments for this while reading 20+ tabs about psychology that it's overwhelming. And what do we get instead?

Yeah, right. Anyway, maybe it's somehow solved in later chapters but it's not my problem anymore.

This is top tier novel man it's gold thanks #itisme# for awesome recommendation

Here by the recommendation of #itisme# ... Let's see how it goes

Best Naruto Fanfic with a psychopathic mc. Loved it

Chapter 8 and I cant bear to read anymore. Theres just so many misspelled words and grammatical errors and its just painful.

For example, and this isnt even the worst one.

I think he has a high score. It will be at most 3.
I don't like the writing style, there is a lot of time jump. Also, I hated the MC. He has a very stupid and disgusting personality. I didn't like the finale, it's a ridiculous finale.
Frankly, this novel has no readability, I didn't like it at all. It's a terrible Fan Fiction

Soon... Soon... Everyone will go on a strike together less he separates them and make them compete against each other.

So yea... Less he does everything by 'himself'... As in, his creation. So basically one day everything will be his cradle.

And he'll be bored to death. Because there's nothing else that's outside his expectation. Since that's the reason why people love Gambling so much. It's the uncertainty and challenging the odds... That makes it 'fun'.

(Suddenly I wanna read a naruto fanfic where the MC has no talent in ninja. Only focused on the economy side and the R&D.)

What's the MC's special ability?

It’s a good novel but the mc is a real bastard