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Apotheosis of a Demon – A Monster Evolution Story悪魔は異界で神となる【人外進化】

A back-to-basics (?) monster evolution novel.

A new VRMMORPG, «World of Yggdrasia», was... Read more
A back-to-basics (?) monster evolution novel.

A new VRMMORPG, «World of Yggdrasia», was recruiting beta testers from all over the world. Ten thousand testers began their journey of swords and sorcery in a new realm, one that was as large as Earth.

At the same time, a clandestine experiment was underway. Unbeknownst to the world at large, 100 secret alpha testers were given bodies of monsters and summoned to the same land.

The girl of white was one such tester. Despite the odds against her, she continued to evolve again and again. To rebel against the real world’s invasion, she would become a most terrible beast, the destroyer of worlds… the Bunny Girl!

«…wait, what? Me?»

Our protagonist would survive, unyielding, knowing no despair. Collapse
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    FELIX_FELIX_FELIX
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    Warning Humans here is super racist so if you don't want to see any racist content don't read it

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    shadow122
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    loved the book, I would love to see a continuation or spin-off someday
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    AstralFear
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    Well. Time for a review with my Pros, Cons and TLDR.
    Also, I'd like remind you that this is just my opinion.

    TLDR: I liked the beginning a lot, and it had a lot of potential. But I felt it failed to rise into something special. Overall, It was a decent book I guess. It's short, so I'd say it's worth a read.
    Really crappy Villains though. And wayyyyy to much child lust. Yuck.

    Pros:
    • The beginning of the story is great, the setting is engaging and the base premise is cool. Love it.
    • The MC is enjoyable, if a bit 2 dimensional. Wish we had more characterization of her.
    • In the beginning her monster powers are cool, though eventually they get uber-nerfed.
    • No romance! Though several adult men certainly try (She is 11).

    Cons:
    • 95% of the characters get really Rapey around the MC. Constantly. And she is 11.
    • Rape is constantly alluded to.
    • The MC's cool powers downgrade eventually and she only has like 2-3 abilities. They have big scary names, but kinda do lame things imo.
    • The characters are all bland and 2 dimensional. I didn't love any of them, except the MC (somewhat). The author has to constantly explain their actions in the notes, because they act so nonsensical and are so bland. Which is not a good sign for a character. Plus, most of them are just generic evil.
    • The villains suck. Really bad. Some of the worst I've seen. They're the type of pointless villains that have no real goals or personality, and just get stronger by being mindless babbling lunatic "geniuses".
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    krishna04
    21
    #Panic# the cover pic is wrong
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      CobraClaw
      10
      There is no official cover pic.
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    Law_venerable
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    No chap add ?
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    God_Emperor
    30
    A small review of this work.
    The first thing I would like to say is that the novel is pretty good, despite the fact that it has few chapters. The plot is not complicated, but it has its own twist, which is why the interest to read and find out what happens next remains throughout the novel. There are not many characters in the novel, but the author was able to sort them out more or less. Also, the novel is logically finished, but the author left something like "to be continued" (the last additional chapters).
    Also, there are no cheat systems or anything like that in the novel, which is undoubtedly a big plus.
    Secondly, what I would like to tell you about is the shortcomings of the novel.
    The novel is too short, only 100 chapters + additional chapters. Due to the fact that the plot is developing faster and faster, the closer the end of the novel is, the details of the world in which everything happens are not fully disclosed. Some characters also received too little "screen time", little is known about them except for a few mentions by the author of what they did in the past and what they are doing in the present. The motives of the main antagonist of the work are also not entirely clear. Who is he and why is he doing this?
    Result. The novel is good, but it has its pitfalls. It is short and reads quite quickly (this is both a virtue and a disadvantage). If you have an hour or two, you can read it.
    P. S. From myself I want to add that if this novel is finalized (add more details, slow down the plot a little, tell the stories of the characters, why they became who they became), then the novel would become a good representative of its genre.
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    Carvalhov
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    I really like this novel, because the plot is good, and simple. No romance, evolution and level system.
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    Nyruko
    40
    Dont hesitate and try it, its a heartwarming and actionpacked story with passion till the end
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    siccricc
    40
    Oooooh i remember reading a while ago. I don't have much to say other than while it might be short, it's pretty fulfilling, or . . . At least i remember it being that way. Idk anymore. If this sounds interesting to you read it, if it doesn't at least still try it.
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    Alpha Archie
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    I really enjoyed this novel, to be fair, it was one of the first books I read online, so I might change my mind if I reread it, but for me, the main downside was that it leaves a lot of pathways unexplored. It leaves you wanting more, but doesn't give it to you.

    In all, I'd definitely recommend reading it.
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