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Beneath the Dragoneye Moons by Selkie

Elaine is ripped from this world to Pallos, a land of unlimited possibilities made real by a grand... Read more
Elaine is ripped from this world to Pallos, a land of unlimited possibilities made real by a grand System governing classes, skills, and magic.

An ideal society? What is this, a fantasy novel?

Adventures? Right this way!

A Grand quest? Nah.

Friends and loot? Heck yes!

Humans are the top dog? Nope, dinosaur food.

Healing and fighting? Well, everything is trying to eat her.

Join Elaine as she travels around Pallos, discovering all the wonders and mysteries of the world, trying to find a place where she belongs, hunting those elusive mangos, all while the ominous Dragoneye Moons watch her every move.

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Hey! Beneath the Dragoneye Moons is my first writing effort, so please be kind, but don’t hesitate to point out the flaws.

The story starts off slowly, more like a slice of life than action-adventure, but it gets there!

I’m going to be posting M-W-F

I do know how the story ends, and I promise if it ever gets dropped, or I stop doing this, I will post the ending. There will be no random “this is the last chapter” out of the blue. Collapse
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    FruitCake
    32
    Is this LN worth reading? I would so NOPE. MC swears a binding oath to the gods of the universe to "NEVER do any harm" and is only going to be a healer. This is a world where you people kill each other and monsters can come an wipe out towns and cities. So, doing no harm means that she will have to FORCE everyone else to defend her and protect her because she is just going to let people kill her or monsters rip her head off. On top of that this is a LN about women with no rights. They can't own anything and can't be a part of society and aren't considered citizens of their own countries.
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    Just_A_Reader
    00
    who f#cked up the chapters there are now like 100+ repeat chapters
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      Just_A_Reader
      10
      now there is 6 more repeat chapters
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    Marawak
    64
    Great novel. Amazing writing, great side characters and a very likable protagonist with a well established personality. Spoilers below this:
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    There is also a massive plot twist later on which is masterfully done, with clear foreshadowing. Common theme in this novel, the plot twists are always really good. The only issues I really have is that the story drags a bit around the parts regarding the elves and the dwarves, although they have clear highlights too. The brief interludes are a big miss too, as they have very little to do with current events in the novel, and only act as setup for a later arc.
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    Br0ken9
    63
    This Novel is completely magnificent, although it may appear slow at first, you will see that the story fully fleshes out a vivid image. Something that appeals to me personally is the amazing Foreshadowing, the amount of times you realize that something that is currently happening was mentioned in the past are actually astounding. Another aspect of this novel is the nearly endless possibilities that open up as the story goes on are numerous. And as if to complete a masterpiece, the characters are lively and seem realistic in many aspects. To conclude, although the story may not appeal to you in the first few chapters, I implore you to continue reading and see your mistaken view of the story.
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    ausilldan
    05
    MC seems to be naive and grounded to reality for a fantasy/system novel.
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      kiwi
      40
      you just contradicted yourself. Naive and grounded to reality are two opposing characteristics. Which one is it?
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        ausilldan
        40
        MC is naively idealistic and hopeful whereas its a fantasy genre but too realistic and it creates discord between the story and MC.
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          kiwi
          00
          ah. got it.
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    Rorolegros
    70
    I am 20 chaps in and this is nothing like I had thought it would be. I can't say if it's good or bad because this isn't the kind of novel I usually like to enjoy. I am totally discovering for the 1st time a non cold hearted, pragmatic and Scinic MC. I usually read novels where by chap 20 MC has already engaged in "cold hearted MC stuff" so this one really is a 1st for me
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    nobleSS
    21
    Mc kid.
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    astrobigobaldo
    207
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      FruitCake
      10
      Just sounds like a wish fulfillment LN of a "DO NO HARM" healer. Truthfully I don't know why anyone would read past chapter 19 where the MC swears a binding oath to the gods of their universe that they would NEVER do any harm. Your comment just cements the reason not to read this LN even more.
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    Gofic
    20
    Не знаю почему у этого произведения такой низкий рейтинг.

    Это действительно хорошо продумано и интересно написано. Без читов, роялей в кустах и влияния прошлой жизни. Главная героиня имеет свои ценности и убеждения, следует им, а так же растёт на протяжении сюжета, как личность.
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    меруэм
    18
    девушкам лучше не писать рассказы..
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