Isekai’d Shoggoth by Cytotoxin

I made it all the way to the fourth chapter but in the end I could only get a rough outline of the story and honestly it wasn't that bad if the author could in touch with an editor this would definitely be a worthwhile read

How did you make it past the first chapter?
I have absolutely no drive to continue, it's all over the place. The explanations are too rushed, the thoughts are jumpy and everything is all up in your face.

why was this even taken its laterally on https://www.scribblehub.com/series/117113/isekaid-shoggoth/

The first chapter and my desire to read it immediately dropped to a minimum. Quick thoughts, words and texts, characters that appear incredibly quickly and the plot that began so suddenly. Usually, authors delay the beginning so that readers at least understand something, and quite often authors delay the beginning too much... But here... Here the author jumps and runs so fast in the text that I had a complete feeling that it was written clearly by someone who had just started writing books or just clearly unprofessional man. Too bad and too fast. I haven't read beyond the first chapter because this book just unreadable to me

Don't discriminate against we yuri lovers.even through i hate yaoi it another story
but female and harem i dont see any problem

The story feels like it was written by somebody with adhd while they simultaneously snorted a kilo of crack and downed several cans of coke... laced with actual cocaine.
[Fast paced massive text blocks, skips to thought to thought to thought to line and line of dialog]

Famale and Harem