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Demon's Journey by Virlyce

Palan is raised in the harsh world of the demons, depending on himself to survive while raising his... Read more
Palan is raised in the harsh world of the demons, depending on himself to survive while raising his sister. One day, his sister falls sick and he's forced to make a deal with an angel in order to save her life. Unfortunately for him, that deal sends him a world away from his sister.


What happens when a ruthless demon is thrust into the world of the heavens above?

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    FiltyIncognito
    10
    Ch66
    Decent story. A little too hasty but I wouldn't have minded too much if not for the other issues; the people, social relationships and situations just seem a little too absurd.

    The demons are justifiably evil, though it's a wonder how they'd service as a paired male/female reproductive species what with all the killing, cannibalism and sin-aligned personalities going on.

    But the angels? They're both enormous dbags and the worst renditions of the virtues they're aligned with. And how many of them would manage to procreate while crippled with their 'virtue', I have no idea.

    And how blind they all are to the blatant corruption and bad behavior around them is just... wow.

    And finally, I really dislike how chained everyone is to their alignment. It just feels like no room for personal growth, learning or intelligence. And the blatant suicidal drive of the MC despite also somehow being a long-enduring survivalist just feels stupid and bad. Baiting someone like that into death trap would be beyond easy.

    I donno. Maybe you'd enjoy the story. Give it a read. It wasn't bad at the start but over time it just became too much for me.

    Good luck bookworms.
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    Nova_Tressus
    00
    Если вам нечего читать и желаете что то хорошое, то это то, что вам нужно. Только конец кажется немного поспешным, но не настолько чтоб это было минусом.
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    Last Dragon🐉
    01
    Well it's a fun book to read but it was very short though.
    if you're looking for something good to read i would recommend it
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    Casvul
    10
    Its pretty good, it takes 4 days to read it. Another novell in my collection.
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    Star
    20
    Pretty good novel, tho it's very dark. Lots of killing and torture.
    Lots of funny moments, tho depends on if you like the comic relief characters.
    Overall an above average novel.
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    RaDiCSpHeRe
    10
    Pretty good story and plot. Kinda dark. Ending is not the best, but at least not one of those rushed ones. Overall would rate it 4/5
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    Mahr
    20
    Actually it does have a good plot and good characters, however i didn't like the end, that was not bad, better than average shit, but not my type...
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    LineDragonMark
    15
    Бан.
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    nobleSS
    45
    Boring
    I didnt like the MC very much, I didnt feel that the MC was special in the first episodes and she lost her main character feature for me.
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    Your maths teacher
    60
    Why does every novel have a 3-star rating?
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      MonarchOfMemes
      101
      Because you never take a leave 27
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      Keqing
      120
      The Admin did that so we don't have high expectation
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