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Immortality? Nah, I choose to marry instead! by Sheizzcoldasice

“There are chosen ones in this world, ones that are born with extremely-high luck and ridiculous... Read more
“There are chosen ones in this world, ones that are born with extremely-high luck and ridiculous talent, unlike us lowly ones who can only wait to grow old and die.”

Just like those popular stories he had read online, in this brand-new world where people pursue immortality, Shenshah thought that he too was someone destined to be great.

Sadly, years have passed since he transmigrated yet he is still an average person struggling to find his place.

Just when Shenshah was about to completely give up on his goals, a strange voice interrupted his thoughts…

[Create Family and Earn Rewards System Activated…]

“What?”

- Never in his wildest dreams did he expected that bringing a wife home would change his fate!

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For the first time on Webnovel, Sheizz’ presents you a story never seen before, belonging to a brand-new type of longevity genre with a mixture of Korean and chineese settings, a fantasy that shall leave you both excited and awed.

Additional tags-

(No dense mc) (no hidden pretending to be a big shot) (No Filler chapters) (crisp to the point plot)

(No useless mysterious backgrounds) (no beta mc)

(smart and observant mc) (Wholesome love) (regret?)

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    Srotoshinni
    00
    Why all chinese characters looks the same
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    Aneilyn
    50
    #panic# can you update this novel? It has a decent amount of new chapter already in WN.
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    Russ.james.58910
    10
    Quote: Matildas
    Quote: ricardo2
    As of chapter 29, here are my thoughts (do not expect a well structured review):

    The plot is fairly simple. You've got a cultivation world that's built like the Tower of God or Danmachi's world where you got a tower and different levels to climb as you get stronger.
    The MC transmigrated into this world and was lucky enough to enter a sect but his talent is shit and so, after 2 or 3 years, he left the sect to live in peace. Marry a few girls and live well.
    As he married the first girl he unlocked a system which gives him rewards based on his relationship with his wives and the number of them.
    Overall I'd say it's an ok novel, but the pacing is way too fast imo. He's already married twice and a third time is on the way, without there really being an opportunity for us to really get to know the characters, etc.
    It also has some childish and stupid conversations and plot threads, like the fact that his ex sect master, who was on the top 40 of the tower, is obsessed on taking revenge on him an can't get him out of her head simply because he stopped cultivating and got married.
    The novel really lack depth, as everything feels unnatural and webnovel-ish if you get what I mean.


    Oh, wow man. Reading your reviwe is worth more than reading the book. Ups to you, ma hero.

    Quote: Matildas
    Quote: ricardo2
    As of chapter 29, here are my thoughts (do not expect a well structured review):

    The plot is fairly simple. You've got a cultivation world that's built like the Tower of God or Danmachi's world where you got a tower and different levels to climb as you get stronger.
    The MC transmigrated into this world and was lucky enough to enter a sect but his talent is shit and so, after 2 or 3 years, he left the sect to live in peace. Marry a few girls and live well.
    As he married the first girl he unlocked a system which gives him rewards based on his relationship with his wives and the number of them.
    Overall I'd say it's an ok novel, but the pacing is way too fast imo. He's already married twice and a third time is on the way, without there really being an opportunity for us to really get to know the characters, etc.
    It also has some childish and stupid conversations and plot threads, like the fact that his ex sect master, who was on the top 40 of the tower, is obsessed on taking revenge on him an can't get him out of her head simply because he stopped cultivating and got married.
    The novel really lack depth, as everything feels unnatural and webnovel-ish if you get what I mean.


    Oh, wow man. Reading your review is worth more than reading the book. Ups to you, ma hero.


    Oh,wow man. Reading your review is worth more than reading the book. Ups to you,ma hero.
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    Matildas
    20
    Quote: ricardo2
    As of chapter 29, here are my thoughts (do not expect a well structured review):

    The plot is fairly simple. You've got a cultivation world that's built like the Tower of God or Danmachi's world where you got a tower and different levels to climb as you get stronger.
    The MC transmigrated into this world and was lucky enough to enter a sect but his talent is shit and so, after 2 or 3 years, he left the sect to live in peace. Marry a few girls and live well.
    As he married the first girl he unlocked a system which gives him rewards based on his relationship with his wives and the number of them.
    Overall I'd say it's an ok novel, but the pacing is way too fast imo. He's already married twice and a third time is on the way, without there really being an opportunity for us to really get to know the characters, etc.
    It also has some childish and stupid conversations and plot threads, like the fact that his ex sect master, who was on the top 40 of the tower, is obsessed on taking revenge on him an can't get him out of her head simply because he stopped cultivating and got married.
    The novel really lack depth, as everything feels unnatural and webnovel-ish if you get what I mean.


    Oh, wow man. Reading your reviwe is worth more than reading the book. Ups to you, ma hero.

    Quote: Matildas
    Quote: ricardo2
    As of chapter 29, here are my thoughts (do not expect a well structured review):

    The plot is fairly simple. You've got a cultivation world that's built like the Tower of God or Danmachi's world where you got a tower and different levels to climb as you get stronger.
    The MC transmigrated into this world and was lucky enough to enter a sect but his talent is shit and so, after 2 or 3 years, he left the sect to live in peace. Marry a few girls and live well.
    As he married the first girl he unlocked a system which gives him rewards based on his relationship with his wives and the number of them.
    Overall I'd say it's an ok novel, but the pacing is way too fast imo. He's already married twice and a third time is on the way, without there really being an opportunity for us to really get to know the characters, etc.
    It also has some childish and stupid conversations and plot threads, like the fact that his ex sect master, who was on the top 40 of the tower, is obsessed on taking revenge on him an can't get him out of her head simply because he stopped cultivating and got married.
    The novel really lack depth, as everything feels unnatural and webnovel-ish if you get what I mean.


    Oh, wow man. Reading your review is worth more than reading the book. Ups to you, ma hero.
    Read more
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      PrinZNoiR
      10
      Mc of "Patriarchy is taking concubine again": Huh! Weak
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    Abyss Builder
    30
    if you have read Long Live, The Patriarch Is Taking Concubines Again then they know what the novel is about, it's basically the same just with a few different things.
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    ricardo2
    150
    As of chapter 29, here are my thoughts (do not expect a well structured review):

    The plot is fairly simple. You've got a cultivation world that's built like the Tower of God or Danmachi's world where you got a tower and different levels to climb as you get stronger.
    The MC transmigrated into this world and was lucky enough to enter a sect but his talent is shit and so, after 2 or 3 years, he left the sect to live in peace. Marry a few girls and live well.
    As he married the first girl he unlocked a system which gives him rewards based on his relationship with his wives and the number of them.
    Overall I'd say it's an ok novel, but the pacing is way too fast imo. He's already married twice and a third time is on the way, without there really being an opportunity for us to really get to know the characters, etc.
    It also has some childish and stupid conversations and plot threads, like the fact that his ex sect master, who was on the top 40 of the tower, is obsessed on taking revenge on him an can't get him out of her head simply because he stopped cultivating and got married.
    The novel really lack depth, as everything feels unnatural and webnovel-ish if you get what I mean.
    Read more
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      PrNe06harem
      01
      These type of novels were not made for that most of them don't even give the wife and children names in this type of novels they are just tools for his cultivation
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        ricardo2
        20
        Yeah i know which to me only gives me less reasons to read it.
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          Emynen
          00
          Thanks for the review, you are my hero. I'm not going to "blow out" my eyes with this shit. Yolks29
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    Aneilyn
    21
    It's actually not that bad.
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    God_Unknown
    10
    It's already the third system cultivation novel from this batch, I don't think things will go well with this one either.
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    MMA_SirOwlbie
    111
    Just from the first chapter, it's way too shallow to be entertaining.
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    Jadebeautyhunter
    30
    go forth pioneers!!
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