I Became a 6★ Gacha Character6★ 가챠 캐릭터가 되었다

Well the concept for this novel is unique then many other VR novel as other mostly multiplayer VR but this is like single player VR like gensin impact. Now if like gensin impact if other players can join other players on there world it would be nice

#panic# chapters 41 to 43 missing

actually nice, albeit a tad plain so far

I was going to do an evaluation but the guy below has already done it.

Rank C.


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Exam season, so here's a quick five-chapter review.

The tag isn't there because the scenes aren't anywhere but the author's patreon, but this is very much an 18+ novel, so let that realign your expectations before diving in.

The premise is alright so far, and the MC's okay; bland in my opinion, and he doesn't really seem the type I'd enjoy reading about, but he has a distinct personality and that works, even if I feel he's a bit dull.

The writing is- choppy. There's lots of exposition and the prose doesn't flow so much like gentle water as it does like pebbles tumbling down a cliffside. It's not bad per-say, but I can imagine it getting grating the more you read. There's lots of telling with very little to break it up, and the narration itself isn't entertaining enough to make up for that. Still, it's a lot better than I was expecting, with readable sentences and decent descriptions.

The dialogue is just fine; the usual sorta messy banter that probably reads better in the original language. The characters themselves are distinct so far, which makes up for that, but whether or not they remain one-note stereotypes or are improved beyond that; it's honestly kinda impossible to tell.

We've seen the premise before and the world is your standard VR thing, so this is a story that'll probably depend on the actual plot development and how that simple idea is developed. I'd say the characters would carry this, but I can't imagine any of the characters introduced thus far being able to do that.

Overall, a lot better than I was expecting it to be, but sort of hampered by the writing style and the boring main character. Give it a shot, a solid high-6ish out of ten, might reach a 7 if it improves.

My synopsis;
NPC-VR novel with the MC's main goal being escape. Strength development probably won't play a big part for the MC himself and there is some sort of system that hasn't done much except give him quests and rewards. Seemingly might give him access to more and more 'player' abilities. No consequences to turning the system down so far. Smart-ish, powerful MC, plus a tower to climb except they aren't stuck inside it.


Give it a shot if that sounds like your thing!

Anyone up for the sacrifice to read this

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All I would say is that this story is good, with our companion who could be called the Goddess of Fortune, our MC may not lack any well-endowed female companions.

Any pioneers?

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