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Rise of the Devourer by KrazeKode

Noah Brown had a gift for fighting. Unfortunately punching things didn't pay the bills, at least... Read more
Noah Brown had a gift for fighting. Unfortunately punching things didn't pay the bills, at least until he died and an Eldritch god found his soul. The encounter led him to a new world, summoned by bloody cultists, with nothing but the shirt on his back, and a strange item in his system menu.

[???] : A source of infinite potential.

Perhaps he'd finally get to put his gifts to good use. Collapse
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    nobleSS
    00
    It dropped in the first chapters. He asks everything, everything!!
    It even asks about abilities that can be easily understood from its name. But he states that he used to play a lot of computer games. He asks someone he just met about the skills that even a 10-year-old child can understand, and even explains what the skills are.
    People use accessories to observe others better, but
    MC: "Dont use something like that. Whatever you want to know about me, I'll tell you anything because I'm an idiot!"
    If you're going to put the devourer feature in the background so much, why did you use it in the title?
    Looks like shit for now, maybe I'll give it another chance when it's final or something, but I won't read it right now.
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    The_Lone_Writer
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    I haven't read it yet, But it looks promising. An MC who in the description says that He is only good at punching? Thats refreshing. Its a breathe of fresh air from all the scheming MC who has to be in every novel and somehow has to always have a big brain. Here? An MC who punches is Novel. (pun intended)
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    NecroanPyre
    10
    I love how everyone is bashing the mc for being idiotic and being emotionally all over the place. He is transported to a place he has never been emidiatly witnessing a cults activities which aren't anything pleasant and then being forced to fight for his right to live. Anyone in a situation even similar to that would be the same. If you give the book a chance he starts to come to terms with what is happening in the second "book" and his character develops alot emotionally. I'd give the first "book" a 3/5 good world and writing quality but leaves character development needed. This problem becomes better in the second "book", so "book" 2 would get a 4/5 for me. Trying to give a good enough explanation without giving any spoilers.
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    Son Of Chaos
    31
    A novel of disappointment. A fool mc with a hero complex. He isn't even in his own world but want to protect the weak. An extremely stupid decision. The novel had potential but got ruined in 17 chapters. An immature idiotic mc who is 24 years old.
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    The lazy one
    30
    Book has silly mc with hero complex, who defeat his enemy through power of friendship (probably). I didn't see any devouring, carnage and destruction, just mc solving quest upon quest or maybe it has a slow story and I didn't read that far.
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    Scofflaw
    00
    This seems to have been written by a fan of "He Who Fights With Monsters" with a similar system, powers, characters, and organizations. Unfortunately the author cannot write like Shirtaloon or whatever his name was, and delivered a piece of junk.

    It wouldn't be bad at all if the MC wasn't an immature idiot without self control. Any of us readers, placed in that situation, would act with dignitas rather than a jumping clown that can't control himself or his mouth. I don't find the MC funny, admirable, or relatable.

    It's like the author is trying to copy Jason Asano but lacks the skill and the character is wrecked.

    Kill the MC and write something based upon the world like "fights monsters" and I would want to read it.
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    Dark Phoenix
    40
    If You Want A Novel With Lame Idiotic Silly Mc swim Well My Friend Look No Further This Is Your Novel 3 Plus It Has A Lame Comedy Which Makes It More Garbage
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    OxOne
    01
    This novel has to be written by a redditor
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    Joaomafer
    31
    unfortunately this story is pretty rubbish, mc sometimes looks like an idiot teenager, but he's 24 years old.

    mc faints all the time, feels like throwing up, gets irritated easily, is a clown and wants to be a little hero, he only wins fights by luck and it seems he will always keep getting beaten up in fights.

    but I only read 22 chapter, maybe it will get better.

    some reviews say he's OP, it doesn't look like that's going to be it.

    mc who almost dies all the time, is not the op.

    I will try more, but I have little hope that it will improve
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      Dark Phoenix
      22
      The Guy Is A Classic Comedy Clown....It Seems He Will Keep Fainting All The Time
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    RafOhWell
    30
    #Panic# chapters being updated in doublons or triplons!
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      SirGuy
      00
      Can u send address for those pls?
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