Spotted By Grindelwald And Went To Hogwarts被格林德沃看中的我去了霍格沃茨

If the Grammer is better and the errors was fixed it would be an alright Fanfiction

read to ch 90, it gets hard to read after so many things are changed. if you write a fan fic or you put yourself in a story, keep the story the same as the original.

Story Development: 2
Writing Quality: 2
World Background: 3 (not much is known as far as I read)
Character Design: 3

Chapter 39

The beginning of the novel. Mc transmigrates from 20XX to 19XX, and wakes up as a child of mugol family. It's an alternate world of HP where there is no Voldemort and Grindenwald didn't die and set his own school.

Mc receives 2 letters of acceptance, one for Grindenwald's school and the other for Hogwarts. Of course, there is some unnecessary fighting between stundents giving the letters, as thier schools compete for being the best.

From their discussion, it's clear, that Grindenwald's school teaching is better. It has more elites who can fight multiple opponents of Hogwart students.

Our protagonist of course chooses Hogwart for his school. He explaines that the environment in G's school is not favorable for mudblood students. He also says something along the lines of 'I can take advantage of things in Hogwart, as I've seen the movies'. Despite stating, he doesn't remember much of them.

Mc has a panel as a golden finger. It's features are not explained, but after a few chapters (like 40), you get what it can do.
Basically you do some missions, randomly generated, but fully achivable in your environment, which give you points. You can opem a gacha with these point and get some talents/items. There is also proficiency bar, but I don't really see a difference, between the time he had lvl 0 spell and lvl 1 spell.

If you want to know his good qualities, here are some: hard working, above average intelligence, calm(he is a transmigrator, so it's natural he is calm for his age). As there are good qualities, there must be bad ones too. So I would like to say, but everything he does, goes too smothly.

He's got no talent for alchemy, so Hermiona helps him. Some crisis? No problem, I've got god like beast taming abilities, even dragons fall to their knees in my presence.

The thing that hurts me the most is his untapped potential in dark magic. Like, he has it a level higher than his beast taming talent. I know, that in Hogwart they only learn those spells like in 3rd grade, but I still don't like it. Had he chosen Grindenwald's school, which specialises in dark magic, I would be very satisfied.

His dark magic talent is probably saved for later power ups. He will probably be transferred as an exchange student and get to study at G's school. Still, I hate the author for giving him the talent for dark magic and not something other than that. Altough his transformation magic talent rivals his beast magic talent. But these are not attack type talents!!!

Overall, story has some potential, but I don't like the writing.

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