God Of Soul System神级剑魂系统

its a shoddy cultivation novel with names from familiar and popular anime. its made even worst by a TL that disrespects writing, TLs, hardwork, and readers. While the author is just as horrible he forgets to include background or even a setting into the novel... or location. Any references are not explained so knowing about one piece, bleach, other popular animes and third world social jargons just to initially understand this novel as a requirement.

Typos are everywhere unedited, (TL: comments like this all over, mid paragraph or between thoughts instead of footnotes), grammar is nonexistent with half asian half english sentence structures. missing nouns, words, names, no syntax. with TLs like these why do we need mtls?

Now, the cons for the author. everything, everyone is ooc; out of character, since its a fanfic its relatively important. you can mess with the events, abilities, growth, but not changing what known characters are without going through said change. cultivation grunt texts copypasta over marines and pirates, ignore basic logistics, reason or motives, or even common sense itself as long as it serves mc.

all women weakens to 50-100% compared to original work, men lowers maturity and intelligence to the same degree. mc growth is nonsensical, he kicks and jumps for a month and he learned to move superspeed and jump on air, athletes would all be overpowered just prepping for the olymlics. oh and cringefest blatant fourth wall jokes galore, throwing country names, and popular third world references to try to get a dig at readers while we stomach this novel.

sometimes words just not translated:
TL didnt even bother.

If you can bear all the above then you may surpass ghe first few vol. which is where iam roughly at my limit.

An extract:

Decide for yourself if you're willing to put up with this for a pretty ok fanfic

Edit:
Read slightly lower and found this gem, so I'm ammending this comment

Rank D+

Loved one piece arc didn't like naruto bleach was ok ok for me overall a novel to pass time nothing too bad if you can get past the translation mistakes.

3.8/5.0 review for me.

It could've been better if the rate of his progression wasn't so fast, so to me it's like he doesn't even work hard himself and only relies on what the system gives him which is really a turn off. The novel would be so much better as a fanfic if so, as it wouldn't be rushed, and you'd also enjoy the authors take on character interactions. The system does give you a fresh feeling as it's not as generic or basic like most novels (really wish other authors could also be creative in this department).

However it is still a decent book, despite some gramma issues in the beginning. If you can get over that, you'd still enjoy the rest of the book.... Maybe till chapters 400 - 500.

It's a decent read if you are bored but nothing crazy. If you have nothing else to read I recommand it

I have yet to read this but just by knowing that it's a One Piece fanfiction written by a Chinese author i already know it'll be shit. I'm not a fan of fanfics either for the most part.

Droppe at chpt 12. It is very hard to read. Dialogue, Grammar and spelling are all pretty bad so it's hard to stomach. I've read MTL that were better written. The system is clearly related to swords of some sort, but it did not occur to the MC to pick up a sword until he's literally handed a legendary sword.

Good novel in my opinion but the grammar is trash

EDIT:
Maybe u'd like it but turns out this one is not for me.
Compare to the other one this one is just bland... Maybe I got bored with the idea of One Piece verse.