Fate Online: Shadow by ApocalypseX

Pretty average shit mc is way too cringe ngl. I feel like this is a solid 3

Hahaha... Pensei que ele iria se vingar, mas decidiu virar uma pessoa normal..?
Qual a graça disso? Eu passo.

Dropped it ......
The mc is a real life assassin but his in game class is a herb hunter ??????? ......wtf

The story is of extremely poor quality. Characters, world, events, logic - everything is just at the elementary school level. The whole story is screwed to ass and hiatus.

Caught up, ch 412. For me, the real-life side is more interesting.
The game pace is just too fast.
The game is so real like, they can do almost anything, but the equipments have restriction only for a specific class(es), it's stupid.
The author likes to use references from famous things (other novels, tv shows, artist's name, etc.). And sometimes feel like he tried to make some scenes look cool or funny, but it cringes instead.
Overall it's good or at least okay (like the review said). "the author needs more experience in writing" this is what I feel while reading.

not harem?

needs a "Game" tag... so I can filter it out!

translation takes the piss man

I think the story both in the real world and game are good or at least ok, but the grammar just makes me want to puke because it ruins the story by making it seem silly and childish