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Yin & Yang Pleasures of Cultivation by CosmicPrime

Life wasn’t the best for Darcel. Just because of what he was born with. He was robbed of a normal... Read more
Life wasn’t the best for Darcel. Just because of what he was born with. He was robbed of a normal cultivation life by the hands of a strange and cruel Organization.

An Organization that treats human life as nothing more than little lab rats and Darcel got forced into their cruel experimentations.

For years he lived this way, only having a bit of protection because of his inborn powers. It wasn’t until a recurring dream of his unexpectedly had a slight change to it.

Be it luck, fate, or destiny, Darcel didn’t know and frankly didn’t really care. Because after that dream, his life took another dramatic turn to venture out into the universe and explore the pleasure of Yin’s Darkness… Collapse
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    Evil Hunter
    10
    Não é bom, é cheio de contradições e buracos.

    O autor criou coisas que se contradizem, por exemplo, o protagonista diz que não foi ensinado a cultivar, mas usa técnicas do poder da escuridão... Como usa isso sem se cultivar? Depois quando ele foge, ele diz que na verdade, acha que o cultivo é apenas um bloqueio mental, se ele pensar que consegue, então vai conseguir...
    Ele colocou isso em prática e realmente subiu de cultivo kkkkkkk
    Foi inacreditável! Mas claro, ele tinha devorado um inseto espiritual creio que foi devido a isso pelo menos em parte.

    Outra coisa, ele diz que não sabia de nada sobre essa organização ou o mundo de cultivo, depois de conseguir fugir, ele nem sabia onde estava, mas dizia que tinha que ter cuidado com o sangue para não atrair as bestas espirituais.

    Que bestas espirituais? Como ele sabe que existe isso nesse lugar?
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      rbprocks
      21
      I can see that you reviewed the novel just after 15 chapters and the stuff you said are not true, atleast you didnt pay attention enough while reading. And i can correct each of your "contradiction" but i just cant be asked and too lazy to do so.
      Although i dont like the novel much and there is not much r18 scenes even though the name would suggest it has lots of it and the author could have written it in better ways to attract more audience. But the things you said are not really true if you would have read longer you would have known.
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    xswordcrash
    11
    its kinda annoying to read since the names repeat on pretty much every sentence, I'm still on chapter 63. so i can't really leave anything about the story but its progressing okay for me.
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    Kwetzal
    151
    Loving this novel came to fap and ended up being too invilved in the story to nut
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      houssamdakira
      51
      i appreciate the review fellow cultured man !
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