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The Mage of Primordial Chaos by Cyclxne

The Mage of Primordial Chaos
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From the moment Xuan Kai was born, he was fated to suffer. Devoid of any magical powers in a world... Read more
From the moment Xuan Kai was born, he was fated to suffer. Devoid of any magical powers in a world where arcane power rules all, no one could protect him after his parents were assassinated. Betrayed by his friends, cheated on by his fiancee, and humiliated by his own family, no one would’ve blamed him if he ended his own life.

However, he remembered his mother’s final words as she passed him a stone pendant — «Live on.» And as he held the rough rock in his hand, unbeknownst to himself, a never seen before magic element began waking in his body…

«If fate wants to make me suffer, I will defy fate itself. If destiny wants me to die, I’ll kill destiny first. If the heavens want to crush me, I will stand up against even the heavens!» Collapse
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    LEDIG
    LEDIG
    3 ⋅ 0
    I couldn't even make it past ch 4. Every two sentences " this doesn't compere to the insults and humiliation i get Every day from the day i was born" like dude enough is enough when will the story begins?!!
    I'm not really asking since I'm dropping it.
    Sahh, i though i found a good one for a while.
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    galacticrize
    galacticrize
    1 ⋅ 1
    I think around a month ago I spent 3 days of my life reading this god awful novel. Sure, connections are great and all, but when we get around 20 females with the same personalities and a 'heaven-defying' physique, the world this novel takes place in becomes black and gray; boring and uninteresting.

    1.5/5 since the start was quite good
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    KevinConde
    KevinConde
    6 ⋅ 1
    I avoid these novels like a plague.
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    har123
    har123
    13 ⋅ 4
    Ch 2 and I'm already bored the story is written in the first person which the story one can stupid when the dialogue its just followed closely

    Example: I tell myself in my thought "I'm in pain" when I didn't bump into wall.

    This is exactly how history is presented And the fact of making the story in the first person prevents us from seeing the environment around the MC because have read what the MC sees hears and feels this kind of story I called it "diary novel" it's like the novel monster integration even if the story is good is there writing method is too childish
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      Madara
      Madara
      3 ⋅ 4
      True, I can't read novels where it's written in first person perspective cause it feels amateurish and lazy writing
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      dcd83
      dcd83
      0 ⋅ 4
      Yea, after reading 15 chapters, I agree that the writing style makes it annoying to read sometimes.
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    HackerSoS
    HackerSoS
    0 ⋅ 3
    https://discord.gg/uDcNn3QBrf

    Link author
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    Omnis Ra
    Omnis Ra
    6 ⋅ 4
    If the story didn't have all the time jumps it would probably be around 3 stars but all I can give now is a 1
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    DARKB3A5T
    DARKB3A5T
    12 ⋅ 14
    The story is amazing in my opinion MC actually thinks with brains has the personality of what most men in this world should have. Although in harem girls are pretty basic in terms of personality they still are distinctive enough for me at least , story plot is what I expected when I started reading this and it's good.
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    TheOneAbove
    TheOneAbove
    13 ⋅ 9
    The story is good but instead of focusing on MC's efforts to become strong and powerful, the whole story is focusing on MC's harem. It is really really annoying, honestly.
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      TheOneAbove
      TheOneAbove
      14 ⋅ 5
      I am going to drop it. It had such good potential. But fed up with the harem
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    ID:entity:Kelvin
    ID:entity:Kelvin
    17 ⋅ 6
    The story is good but
    So many chapters is wasted on the harem or annoying tsundere girls progress is so slow every chapter has an annoying flustered line you know what I'm saying.
    (So I'm gonna stop reading this. It's your choice if you read it or not)
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      GameContentReader
      GameContentReader
      7 ⋅ 5
      Thanks bro I hate that too, so much for unnecessary scenes (for me)
      and the plot is moving sooooo slow
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