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I made a game. When I woke up, I was in that game. When I was in confusion and embarrassment, the... Read more
I made a game. When I woke up, I was in that game. When I was in confusion and embarrassment, the one who brought me into this world appeared and said:

«Oh, Creator. This is a game only for you, but it is also a ‘duty’.» Collapse
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    Strange Dark
    30
    This novel is translated by activ translations
    Read at your own risk
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      Avulus
      10
      They are soooooo active…
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    Drsanders
    30
    Frankly, the novel ain't as bad as some chapter comments try to make it seem, I frequently defended the novel but it's still just a bit bland. I thought Gentia was a good addition but even then we could've seen more interaction between him and her. All other side characters are underdeveloped, which leads readers to either assume that the MC often casually speaks with them, or never at all. The largest part that contributed to my boredom was that there is little to no tension and I feel like there won't be even further in the novel. It goes back to me defending the novel in chapter comments because people would comment "why is he reading books and not training" like they didn't just read that just one of his abilities is to save and if he dies, return to that save point. I also dislike some of the ways things are typed out, some of it is just a bit goofy. I would've kept reading a bit longer if he didn't have to leave Gentia back home simply because she's too weak, I like when fantasy can overcome weakness in potential, but the power system in this novel is very rigid.
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      Mkviewer
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      Thanks for the info. So are you saying its worth taking a look at?
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    abdulfatah ali
    110
    I really don’t like harems but i want to try this is it any good
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      Krux
      20
      Yea
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    Kash22
    Kash22
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    Is This A Good Read.?
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    schloan
    172
    need. more. chapters.
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      Ekip667
      20
      I feel you
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        checkchu
        10
        Is this good.
        doesn't seems that popular
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          Krux
          290
          so it's like this y'all
          This is ten percent luck
          Twenty percent skill
          Fifteen percent concentrated power of will
          Five percent pleasure
          Fifty percent pain
          And a hundred percent reason to remember the name.
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            Zekke
            20
            Yow...Nice to see this guy here...XD
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              Krux
              11
              Not a lot of people think so, well the amount of dislikes I have on my profile should say so lmao
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                Zekke
                20
                Nah...I'm just surprised I saw you...XD

                Bruh 970...XD

                Also who the heck disliked me....Im not even that active at commenting...
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                  Krux
                  59
                  Half of dislikes are like that as well, I had 13 dislikes on one comment just because I asked if the novel was dropped or not lmao
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                  Zekke
                  10
                  Bruh ..XD
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                  Drsanders
                  30
                  Lol a lot of people will dislike for small reasons, but that's the internet. My most disliked comments though were sorta outta pocket or just dumb
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                  Krux
                  20
                  Nah I feel you, I be outta pocket all the time.
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            Strange Dark
            00
            Remember the name by fort minor ft styles of beyond
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            Matildas
            10
            I read "f*ck" instead of "luck"
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