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Unfathomable Senior by Kuropon

It all started after I received that weird email…

What? Click the boxes to select the... Read more
It all started after I received that weird email…

What? Click the boxes to select the body type?

Want me to select a starting point?

Let me put in the name and be done with this, it’s getting late…

I always was bad with Chinese names… how about… Zhang Dong … Hehe…

Wait why is everything going dark…

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Author: I don’t own the art, first time writing anything and English isn’t my first language… so plz no bulli… Collapse
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    Diarkis
    70
    After reading till chapter 123 I think I've had enough. I might still visit this book sometime in the future. Judge for yourself whether you'd like to read it or not-


    The narration is good and those who are okay with Japanese light novels can read it without any problem. This story is all sunshine and rainbows.

    EDIT- I decided to read all of it in one go. This becomes better in later chapters. Its readable and a good choice if you want to pass time. 3/5
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    Reecerandom
    12
    It was all good till Vol 1 but after that it's totally going downhill i mean he's a strong guy and the leader of his clan why does he goes around being a busy body looking for trouble every where he goes
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    Dorbrim
    01
    Есть романтика кто нибудь подскажите пожалуйста?
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    Kelly45
    55
    Bad writing bro trash mc cowardly to the extreme annoying and shitty he's OP but he has no guts does nor like blood and some shits
    We know you are a beginner but man put some vibes in that shit there's no sense
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    Zareth
    30
    I enjoyed Runesmith but I wonder if this one was written prior to it? Will take a look at some point anyway...
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    ZaragozaNreal
    66
    Compared to xianxia novels, this book a bit superior.

    The progress of storyline is quite slow. With the author focusing a lot on character development, rather than suspense and action stuff.

    If you're looking for tension and fighting fantasy, then throw away your expectations. It emphasizes inter-character dynamics more than world-building.

    And, the MC has a cowardly character (typical of Japanese isekai protagonists). But, after 50 chapters, MC development starts to pick up, so bear with it.

    Don't expect to find a ruthless, cruel, and calculative MC. But this book gives a positive vibe to moral values and healthy interactions of the characters.

    3/5.
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      hungar
      41
      I'll put it at 2.5/5 since i don't think it's superior , the entire 60ch. I've went through were the same old cliche stuffs
      and what really brings it down for me is the very cowardly mc , especially his interactions with women , Jesus Christ it's bad. It doesn't help the fact he keeps in stuttering every time he talks even tho he has

      Ah yes and
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        lihkin
        00
        Ig everyone's dumb, but author does fix that "flaw" with a meta-explanation. As for MC, he becomes more ruthless as the novel goes on. As for your first problem, it's explained that
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          hungar
          00
          Yeah i know , throw fodder to weaken the behemoth strategy , but it still feels stupid. And it annoyes me , for the fact that mc could've just taken his entire clan and try to live elsewhere , or just his close family( which he has none)
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            lihkin
            00
            Pretty sure he couldn’t do that bc his main system is the faction system and it’s super hard to build a solid faction while on the run
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              hungar
              10
              Well , i definitely wouldn't be going to a death trap , but i also don't have mc status so there's that..
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                lihkin
                00
                Agreed, was a shitty situation, but MC did a good job then
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    Abhimanyu
    50
    Pretty good for time pass but as the author himself says he ain't a pro and going with the flow so a bit novice but kinda funny if you have experience to induce scenes anyway okish boast
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