I Refuse to Become Scumbag in Tokyo by akikan40

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HeavenSage

HeavenSage 28 Nov 2021, 16:54

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From the very beginning you can see how trashy this novel is, a 20+ year old man (even if he is a 16-year-old teenager or whatever he is), he decided to go to school. Ok, the logic and the essence are also there, reborn, money is needed, education is there, all that. Well, this is where the whole essence of idiotic logic ends, not only does he have a system that will give him a lot of money, but he also made money on games himself. I'm not hinting at anything, but I have a question, why does he need an education at all? (Especially since he already graduated from university in his past life, so interpersonal skills are no longer needed). Just for the sake of what would have happened ... well .. the parents did not get discouraged there ... well ... the plot ... like ... well, ok, the author is very interesting.
As far as I know, you don't need education to start a business (well, if not economic), but he goes to art school. It’s interesting for me to look at a person with a lot of money who will go to school, who has already gone there, and in fact he does not need to worry about his future with the system. Just for the sake of an anime story with schoolchildren. At this point, I could not go further this wall of the author's logic.

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  0Phantom0
  
  0Phantom0 29 Nov 2021, 15:49 ➥ HeavenSage
  
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  Please post an 'honest' reveiw... You can't force your opinions on others. But I think its a pretty good novel although with some boring but informative fillers and a bit of a slow pace... Other than that there isn't any problems with it. As for education, it is mentioned in novel about its significance in that country...
  Btw his real aim is in politics
  
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  Apache
  
  Apache 5 Dec 2021, 16:25 ➥ HeavenSage
  
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  i think the logic here is, he couldn't start a business in kyoto since he didn't want his parents to notice the change in his mannerisms so he went to tokyo, but he needs a reason so school, but then he gets the system and could drop out anytime, but he'd need to have a good reason, but he can't tell his parents about his business cuz if he did they might question why he needed to go to tokyo since he was doing fine in kyoto.
  at least that's what i think
  sorry if there's a spelling mistake i can't be bothered to correct it so deal with it
  
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  Marlboro Red
  
  Marlboro Red 16 Dec 2021, 09:27 ➥ HeavenSage
  
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  Are you an idiot?
  
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0Phantom0

0Phantom0 26 Nov 2021, 12:08

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Quite a good one...
Except the fact that it feels like the MC is desperate to get ntr*d, though its in the first arc...

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Dorbrim

Dorbrim 25 Nov 2021, 20:07

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Как по мне роман хороший. Многие говорят что гг полный ублюдок из за того что якобы не принимает чувств красавиц. А я вам так скажу он как совершенно обычный человек не мог забыть свою девушку из прошлой жизни, и это б**ть совершенно нормально. Но в итоге он смог полюбить девушек. В общем это история о человеке которого перебросили в паралелльную реальность и ему дали систему которая даёт награды за то что он встречает девушек (первуя награду), и после даёт награду за то что он переспит с данной девушкой (ну или же поцелует, увидит голой, или же произведёт на нее сильное впечатление). Но в тоже время он не хочет это делать с каждой девушкой которую отмечает система.

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ZeaZ

ZeaZ 25 Nov 2021, 08:12

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he became scumbag in Tokyo

Edit: well someone edited it T.T

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  Arkanon
  
  Arkanon 25 Nov 2021, 11:25 ➥ ZeaZ
  
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  Noooo, you have to use the
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    ZeaZ 25 Nov 2021, 11:58 ➥ Arkanon
    
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    No.
    
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      Arkanon 25 Nov 2021, 15:28 ➥ ZeaZ
      
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      But you used it
      
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  Dorbrim
  
  Dorbrim 25 Nov 2021, 20:08 ➥ ZeaZ
  
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  Скажите мне где он им стал то??
  
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Исаак 24 Nov 2021, 15:24

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Посоветуйте что то годное на этом сайте

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IseCream 24 Nov 2021, 05:36

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This novel is better than the original sakurasou. Its point out some plot holes from the original, and the way this novel portrayed all of the original characters in more realistic point of view makes everything clear how weird the original novel was. And thus now I hereby declare that this is a canon story of Sakurasou no pet na kanojo.

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Fucktor 23 Nov 2021, 14:43

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Honestly this novel would be much better if author wasn't making such a long ass sentences. Also, I personally find it quite annoying when, instead of ending sentence, he inserts yet another "but" and continues.

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  Arkanon 25 Nov 2021, 11:28 ➥ Fucktor
  
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  Lmao, reminds me of the essays in primary where I made sentences too long to read in one breath and my teacher told me to use more punctuation in them but I found it very hard to do so though I think it's gotten a lot better over the years and I wish I could show her how much I've improved my writing skills compared to all those years ago but I have to say I don't think it was that bad of an issue.
  
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    0Phantom0 26 Nov 2021, 12:04 ➥ Arkanon
    
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    Keep it up... such long sentence in review...
    
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    I m Sirex 4 Dec 2021, 11:42 ➥ Arkanon
    
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    You didn't change your typing lol
    
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      Arkanon 4 Dec 2021, 12:14 ➥ I m Sirex
      
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      That's the joke man
      
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        I m Sirex 4 Dec 2021, 12:36 ➥ Arkanon
        
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        I understand(actually no)
        
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Immortalyxssine

Immortalyxssine 22 Nov 2021, 17:41

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Wait let me do a review again!
( 2nd ever review on this site , and it's my personal opinion so don't get offended if you don't like the novel/ any point on my review! )

(btw anyone know of any domestic girlfriend good fan-fics? That novel was great but the ending f$cked it up , so this really is the only fan-fic I ever found that had Rui and Hina in it. Well ngl they deserve better lives than the actual novel.)

Before the actual review , the author always mentions he doesn't wanna be a scumbag but the mc actually treats the girls good! Which isn't like any other fan fic where he's like ( meets his fav waifu , waves at her , she blushes and falls in love with him and they bang! ) Well it's kinda similar ? But they're not being in any relationship, much less banging.
Anyway the beginning was good , it went through
him doing the Natsu beginning at domestic girlfriend where he loses his virginity to Rui
kinda lame , reminds me of a certain novel where the mc just transmigrated and then falls in love with a girl and then bangs (path to godliness or something , I don't remember it since I dropped it due to the repeated plotline)
But anyway if you don't like systems where I hey make you rich right off the bat , or gives stupidly op rewards for nothing then this isnt for you ( it's like becoming a mangaka , the other author's work).
Second is mc character development which is good ( in the later chapters ) where he doesn't forget his past life unlike some MC's , and then moves on.( Idk about the overall development but the recent one is good)
Thirdly the actual world background? His parents are in the other city and he went to Tokyo to study there .
Anyway Idk other elements of reviews so..

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  Aathil 22 Nov 2021, 18:38 ➥ Immortalyxssine
  
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  I usually don't like Japanese novels due to thry potray the mc or female characters after few chs.
  Hmm after reading your review, I think I will try reading it. Hopefully it's not a novel abt mindless banging.
  
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    Immortalyxssine 22 Nov 2021, 20:16 ➥ Aathil
    
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    I guess as I said it's banging first then mid-story I think then later(latest chapters)
    
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      Aathil 23 Nov 2021, 02:17 ➥ Immortalyxssine
      
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      Mhmm r-18 plots in limit is still acceptable
      
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        Immortalyxssine 23 Nov 2021, 08:53 ➥ Aathil
        
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        I don't think r-18 stuff is described though , just stuff like ' and they went to the room ' that's it.
        
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        Aathil 23 Nov 2021, 11:19 ➥ Immortalyxssine
        
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        Oh that's peace!!
        
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        fizbin 25 Nov 2021, 12:29 ➥ Aathil
        
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        I am not sure how far you are in, but around 235 it starts getting graphic (sexually: vanilla) in the story so buyer-be-ware...
        
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        Immortalyxssine 28 Nov 2021, 09:15 ➥ fizbin
        
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        I stopped at when he was at Riu's house , I'm waiting for when he visits her again , so I'm accumulating chapters
        
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    cepoterbang 27 Nov 2021, 16:12 ➥ Aathil
    
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    Actually its not jp novel tho, its english novel but the author love writing his/her novel in japanese setting and take alot characters and stories from anime, game, manga so it just like mash-up spinoff novel just like author other novels: Sis-con with Dimensional Chat Group, Start By Becoming a Mangaka..
    
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      Deep Pal 29 Nov 2021, 19:50 ➥ cepoterbang
      
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      Sis-con one is actually good...
      
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thenemesis

thenemesis 22 Nov 2021, 16:04

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I don't know why but this book reminds me of stealing spree. If we remove the system and the transmigration part. But also it also feels like it's done better.

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Vansh

Vansh 22 Nov 2021, 15:32

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best fan fic i have ever red,mc tries to not be a scum i.e does not goes f#cking every girl,he seeks a romantic conection,lovin it

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