NTR Crush: I Will Steal Every Girl by Whatsawhizzer

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This had one proper review but i doubt even they read it properly


so the book revolves around each volume by each volume starting and going to bad and ending up happily (for the first 4 volumes)

in the first 3 volumes, we are thaught next to nothing and is focusing mainly on the sex and netorare and then on revenge to the one who did the NTR,
so its lacklustre in story and is bad in plot development its point all about getting girls

volume 4 is where the story starts to improve and is the first actually enjoyable for the sake of the story, and the characters are set we already at this point understand that this game they have was supposed to be friendly until foreign gods came in and sent their own champions
volume 5 is chaotic and it ends in mc completing the game while having the goddess formed from Netori,Netorare and netorase go back to her EX

in volume 6 as a solution to this problem of unable to become god in time to help
he is sent to past by Netori as a last solution to let him find a god whos virginity to take for him to ascend into godhood


volume 7 is about him preparing for the revenge and learning about gods and their powers and Powerleveling where we are introduced all the main gods that are also in my opinion the best characters in the book

all in all I liked the story and if you get past the 3 first volumes and can bear him being backstabbed in the fifth then the story is very enjoyable

there was one comment in the authors site that made me able to read past all that happened it was

(friends, I will tell you the truth between reading this novel knowing that I would suffer a little for ntr, but the truth of this novel hit me harder than it has ever hit me, I think it will take weeks to recover from all the events, never consider me a fragile man but from person to person I recommend that you never get attached to anyone in this story. I repeat with nobody just worry about the protagonist, do not trust absolutely anyone or you will suffer)

Man, with all the shit the protagonist must go through for the women he loves... I would end up surprised if readers like some of the girls after reading the reviews or worse... book.

I really pay my respects to those who have read up to volume 2 after reading the reviews, I do not want to know about the monster that is finishing the novel...

I would give him a chance if the protagonist ends up crazy in some way or if the girls regret even a little in the last volumes.

In my opinion this story is trash. Let me explain:

*Hakaru from Volume 1 to Volume 5 has no overall character development. He is always in the back foot never to be able to get ahead of anything. This problem is on the author as he purposefuly makes him like that. It is impossible for a man of his ambitions (Hakaru) to not learn from his mistakes.

*There is no overall plot development. Hakaru gets Netorared --> Tries to Netorari --> Has initial success --> gets schemed --> fails --> repeat. This is a huge failure from the author. We were told this is netorari but what we got is a masked Netorare. No matter what the ending is when your women repeatedly betray you , you have already lost. Even though i haven't seen the ending as long as in his "harem" are women like Netori and the like , my point stands.

*The suicide part is the next topic I will talk about. When a person like Hakaru can't find joy or purpose in life , continuing to live is meaningless. Choosing suicide is a natural action. Continuing to torture yourself for no return holds no meaning and is laughable. Hakaru from a small age was in a living nightmare. Getting tortured without even knowing ( sometimes he knew just the tip of the iceberg). When you were born just to get tortured is natural to be resigned to that. Him choosing suicide isn't giving up. Merely the last try of a man willing to have a good life.

* The only good thing I have to say for this is that the author had planned out everything from the start and was able to express his story as he intended to ( this nowadays is rare so I appreciate it).

- To sum everything up if you don't really like netotare , looping plot , no character development for a long time , whatever else I mentioned on my above points, don't even bother with this.

If you don't like Japanese-MC type, then it's not yours.

I have read this novel on its official website and I am warning all of the new new readers , there will lots of ntr in this novel , mc will ntr other people and mc will also be ntr'ed by other people , don't trust any girl , I repeat don't trust any girl in this novel all of them will be f#cked by other people and leave mc , I repeat all girls (including netorare who is the support system of mc ) mc will be betrayed by every single girl there , he will get back his girls and then he will lose them again , all the girls are hungry only for sex , at some point the girls will love only mc and it will feel like the mc has won , but don't be deceived ,he will lose the girls again , the only person you should connect and feel sympathy is the mc ( hakaru) and no one else , literally no one else , and brace your heart for depression , if you have a weak heart don't read this , there are 7 volumes in total and the author has realeased only 5 volumes for free reading , and at the end of volume 5 mc gets ntr'ed and betrayed big time , the biggest betrayal and he loses everything , I repeat brace yourself before reading , and the author realeases 1 chapter every week and it'll take around a year to finish this novel cos there are still around 50 chapters to be released , and if you want to read the novel completely ,then subscribe to authors patron site , that's all and lastly this novel is pretty good it deserves 4 🌟