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Chapter 1488: The First Plague

Sunny felt a headache approaching. Something was very wrong here. How could the Six Plagues exist? The Great River was a time loop — just like Aletheia's Island had been, but also different. On Aletheia's Island, time moved in a circle. A single day endlessly repeated itself, and a new cycle started each time that day ended. The Great River, however, was a bizarre place where time and space were one and the same — it flowed from the future into the past, and so, those who traveled it were also traveling across time. The cycles of the Great River did not start once a certain period of time passed. They were both a measure of time and a measure of space — to reach a new revolution, a person had to travel all the way to the Estuary, which was also the Source, and cross the boundary between the past and the future.

Then, they would be sent to the point in time and space when they had first entered the Tomb of Ariel. So, if the Chain Breaker sailed past Verge and braved the Source, the members of the cohort would be sent to different places on the first day after they had entered the Nightmare. Sunny would find himself on a piece of flotsam, Nephis would be stranded on the corpse of the Black Turtle, Cassie would return to Fallen Grace on the day the other sybil succumbed to the Defilement, and Jet and Effie would be back to living the harsh lives of the River Nomads. Sunny shifted slightly.

Still, it did not explain how both the members of the cohort and the Six Plagues could exist at the same time. If their version from the previous cycle had braved the Source — on purpose or by accident, while searching for the entrance into the Estuary — they would have disappeared.

More than that, the Plagues had been rampaging across the Great River for decades, perhaps even centuries. How could that be?

'Well, why not? There's all kinds of weirdness happening with time in the Tomb of Ariel. Do I really want to doubt that something like that is possible?'

Especially now that Sunny knew about the Source — a misty place where the past and the future met, and where the meaning of time lost all reason — he could not be surprised by anything. What would happen, for example, if someone entered the Source, but then turned back and left the way they had come instead of crossing the boundary of the future? What would happen if they left from a different point than where they had entered? What would happen if they stayed inside the Source for a while, allowing the current to move past them?

He did not know.

Sunny did know one thing, however. The method of starting a new revolution might have been different from Aletheia's Island, but its effect would be the same.

Once someone returned to the past, their memory of the previous cycle would be erased. Their soul would be restored to how it had been before. No signs of them having traveled the Great River in the past would remain. Which meant…

Sunny shivered. 'Not again, please!'

The words he had shouted while waking up, on the first day in the Nightmare, echoed in his ears. 'H—how… how many times have we challenged this Nightmare?'

The existence of the Six Plagues proved that there had been at least two cycles. But there could have been more. Ten cycles… a hundred cycles… a thousand cycles…

There was no way to tell. Since no one remembered the previous revolutions, nothing would change when a new one started. They would repeat the same actions over and over again, just like Jet had fought and been killed by Undying Slaughter over and over again.

Until Sunny arrived, and became aware of the loop.

Suddenly, he felt his heart beating wildly.

'Wait…' Despite being trapped in the time loop of Aletheia's Island, Sunny had eventually gained the ability to remember the previous revolutions. He did not know how long it had taken, but at some point, he was assaulted by a persistent sense of déjà vu, and then became fully aware of the loop. That was because the Sin of Solace was stuck in his mind, and the loathsome sword wraith was somehow immune to the effect of the repeating time.

Sunny felt that he was on the verge of realizing something extremely important. 'The Sin of Solace…'

The Mad Prince was haunted by the odious apparition, as well.

So, if the cohort was trapped in the infinite loop, didn't it mean…

That he would have gained the ability to remember the previous cycles of the Great River, as well?

'D—damnation!'

Sunny's eyes widened. The Mad Prince… no, perhaps even an earlier versions of himself… would have realized the cyclical nature of the Great River. And from that point forward, each cycle would have been different. Because Sunny had become a variable. He must have tried to change things. He must have tried to conquer the Nightmare desperately… and in such a way that none of the members of the cohorts died. And Nephis survived till the end.

...But, for some reason, he had failed. Or maybe that mission had been doomed from the start. Had he become aware of the grand loop before and after becoming infected by the Defilement?

The Defilement, after all… was knowledge. Terrible knowledge that corrupted the souls of those who possessed it. So, even if Sunny reached the Source and returned into the past after being infected by the Defilement, the infection would have returned with him. Had he gone mad under the mental strain of endless loops first, or had he found the true Estuary and been driven insane by the Defilement first?

Had Sunny been the first of the Six Plagues, and the one who had infected the other five?

In any case…

'So why do I not remember anything? If my version from the previous cycle was corrupted by the Defilement, why is my soul free of it?'

He flinched. Wasn't the answer obvious?

What could cure the infection of cursed knowledge?

…Oblivion could. In order to be cured, he had to forget the cursed knowledge before returning to the past. 'The Key of the Estuary.'

A mysterious Memory that had been there, in his soul, when he found himself in the mist on the first day of the Nightmare. A Memory that possessed a passive enchantment that did not seem to have any effect on him. An enchantment that consisted of two parts — one directed outward, one directed inward. And which had something to do with the Sin of Solace. Sunny took a deep breath as the truth of the Estuary Key finally revealed itself. 'It's... a muzzle.'

The purpose of the mysterious Memory… was to prevent the Sin of Solace from sharing any knowledge of the previous cycles with Sunny. So that he never remembered what had happened in the past, and therefore never learned the cursed knowledge of Defilement. That was one part of its enchantment. The other, much more burdensome part… was meant to make the Estuary Key immune to the change of cycles. To make it remain in Sunny's soul even if he crossed the boundary of the Source and was sent into the past. That was why the Mad Prince had been so interested in the Great Tyrant slain by the Serpent King in Aletheia's Tower. Because the Tyrant remained dead no matter how many revolutions passed… its death had been made permanent, carrying over from one cycle of the loop to the next.

Back then, the Defiled madman must have already been trying to create the Estuary Key. To cure himself of the Defilement… and make another attempt to conquer the Nightmare. No, not just conquer it, but do it in a specific way.

To erase the mistake he had made... or maybe the crime he had committed. 'Murderer...'

Sunny gulped for air. At that moment, he realized something else. There were only three of the Six Plagues left: Soul Stealer, Torment, and the Dread Lord.

The Mad Prince… was gone. He did not exist in the Tomb of Ariel anymore. Because he had crossed the boundary of the Source and sent himself into the past. He had become Sunny.

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    rekicchi
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    I think this knowledge might corrupt me.
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    Kuma
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    I might be a little stupid but can someone explain this a bit more?
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      Awybin
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      This nightmare works in loops, Sunny is the only one who crossed the border and reset the loop
      The Mad Prince created a memory to block the memories of the previous loops.
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      Camalao
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      I can try but don't think too much about it, there is quite a few plot holes still there as is expected everytime there is writing about time. (Some Sunny aknowledge himself and might get an explanations later on, probably related to the source of corruption).

      Loop 0 - Sunny and co enters Nightmare, do stuff. Somehow Sunny (at least) manage to enter the estuary, find the source of defilement, probably becomes corrupted and ends up going through the mist area between current time and past. Going through this put him back where he first entered timewise, ending the loop 0.

      Loop 1 to X - Same shit happens again.

      Loop X - Finally Sunny realize he is stuck in a loop thanks to the Sword (as happened on Flower Island). This allows him to remember past loops, but also gives him knowledge of the source of defilement, making him instantly defiled becoming the Mad Prince, becoming the 1st Plague. Because he is mad he shares the knowledge with the other members of the cohort by giving them knowledge and they kill Nephis because she can't be defiled/corrupted (we don't know the exact reasons, could be anything ), anyway Kai (defiled) becomes Mad Prince new master apparently. Mad Prince becomes even madder because he lost Nephis.

      Its unsure if the Plagues continues to go through loops and Mad Prince kept repeating his actions always ending with Nephis death.

      The Plagues do stuff and somehow manages to naturally becomes "Corrupted" (Saint level for corrupted beast if you remember).

      And now this is where the story becomes full of plot holes.

      Anyway, the Plagues seemed to have wanted to finish the nightmare as to be free, but the Mad Prince disagrees and wants to finish the nightmare in a version where Nephis is alive.

      The Mad Prince then somehow put in places a lot of pieces to help himself/the cohort go through the current state of the nightmare. Setting up the plank with his writing for Sunny, trapping the Plagues on the island, sending the boat for them etc...

      (Boat could be there in the nightmare because someone from the future entered the actual river, as if i remember correctly Cassie said it was their boat with their modification, and the river has a weird relation to time, or it could also be related to the fact that they probably have been in the nightmare for years now, each loop easily being 1-2 years, hard to tell)

      Anyway, i disgress, after all his planning done, the Mad Prince went through the border on a floatsam with a lot of writing on it "be careful of what you wish for" and sent himself back in time by crossing the boundary, somehow the state of the beginning of the loop changed to include everything the Plagues did in the nightmare, so his changes/preparation too and because he is the one who went through the boundary Sunny thinks he doesn't exists anymore, which include another plot hole for now as Sunny had a dream of him earlier on... (Another plot hole, is just how Sunny survived without the floatsam in the loop 0, but w/e)

      Thanks to the key memory working as intended he doesn't remember shit from before this loop and doesn't become corrupted but the state of the nightmare is insanely different from when they first entered apparently, with everything having been destroyed by the plagues.

      Basically thats as best i can explain i think, as i said, still a lot of plot holes (notably related to how the beginning of nightmare/"beginning of loop" point changed so much but they still somehow all reset together), there is a lot of theory that could be said, but pretty sure Author will have one during the end of the Nightmare revealed probably related to the Defilement source, even though i doubt all plot holes will be covered.
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        Cabbage
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        Can they truly be called plot holes in relation to time when time itself no longer functions linearly as we know it? It seems to be a fools errand to try and explain what is clearly meant to be a “enjoy and don’t think about it moment” as since the logic of time is no longer static you can’t really question the logic of how it all works
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        LordofnoHarem
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        El professor
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    Pro100zver25
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    1495: Still Water.

    Sunny had begun the Nightmare under the pure azure sky. Then, he traveled to Fallen Grace, which was bathed in the crimson light of an eternal sunset. Now, he finally reached the waters where the soft twilight of nascent dawn suffused the world with a gentle glow.

    The flowing waters of the Great River were like a calm mirror that reflected the dreamlike palette of the vibrant morning sky. As such, it seemed as though the graceful vessel was sailing on heaven itself.

    It was a beautiful sight that soothed the soul and took one's breath away... if not for the dangers that lurked beneath the splendor of the wondrous current.

    Cassie had long used the Guiding Light to point the way to Kai... the fact that the sacred staff still responded to his True Name filled Sunny's heart with hope. It meant that his friend was still alive, at least.

    Now, they were traveling downstream in search of the lost city of Twilight, where the charming archer stranded. The problem was that instead of distancing itself from the Edge, the Chain Breaker was instead drawing closer and closer to it.

    So, they had to be wary not only of the Nightmare Creatures hiding beneath the waves, but also of the current itself.

    The closer they were to the Edge, the more violent the currents became, trying to pull the ship into the endless waterfall. Even now, a few days of sailing away from it, it was almost impossible to keep the Chain Breaker on course. In the end, Cassie had given up on struggling against the current and raised the flying into the air.

    They were staying low to the water, flying along its surface, to avoid being attacked from above — or at least have more time to react if an attack came.

    Of course, such a strategy also left them more vulnerable to the enemies lurking below the water. But after witnessing the dreadful swarm of monstrous butterflies, Sunny extremely wary of the boundless expanse of the dim sky.

    Days slowly passed.

    Sunny continued to advance in his endeavor to turn the Covetous Coffer into an Echo. Gradually, though, his mind drifted away from that riddle, turning somber and grave.

    His companions wore similar expressions.

    It was as though they were sensing the approach of a violent storm... a storm of blood, perhaps. Of a battle that was going to test the very essence of their resolve, and maybe find it lacking.

    Slowly but surely, the idle conversations ceased. The sounds of laughter that used to echo above the deck of the Chain Breaker disappeared, replaced by grim silence. An oppressive tension settled on the deck of the graceful vessel.

    Nevertheless, everyone remained calm and collected, preparing for battle with cold determination.

    "Ah. I can smell it..."

    The blood was yet to spill, but its scent had already permeated the air.

    Strangely enough, very few Nightmare Creatures attacked their ship — perhaps because even abominations struggled to stay alive this close to the Edge. As the days went by, however, their numbers dwindled even further, until none remained at all.

    That was definitely both strange and worrisome. No place in the Tomb of Ariel was supposed to be safe, and since even Nightmare Creatures were reluctant to venture into these waters, humans like them had to be wary, as well.

    ...On the seventh day, they finally saw something rising from above the surface of the river. As the Chain Breaker drew closer, and they could see the massive object more clearly, Sunny frowned.

    It was the carcass of an abominable leviathan, its body covered by a pale carapace. The flesh of the Nightmare Creature had long rotten away, leaving behind only an empty husk. A forest of arrows was rising from the cracked shell, and there were broken harpoons floating in the water around it.

    There were gaping holes littering the carapace, as well, as if someone had torn through it with sharp teeth, ripping out huge chunks of flesh in the process.

    Sunny thought that he recognized the marks left behind by those monstrous fangs.

    "...Did Daeron kill this abomination?"

    It would make sense, considering that they were close to his city. There was something eerie about the dead Nightmare Creature, though...

    "Why is it still here?"

    This close to the Edge, a powerful current pulled everything into the abyss. Judging by the look of the carcass, the abomination had been slain countless years ago. And yet, it still remained, somehow floating in place. Even the broken harpoons surrounding it had not been carried away by the water.

    As he frowned, Nephis spoke to Cassie, her voice carrying a hint of unease:

    "Don't approach."

    The blind seer gently pushed the steering oar, sending the Chain Breaker around the massive carcass.

    Jet studied it silently for a few moments, then asked:

    "What do you think happened here?"

    Sunny pursed his lips.

    "It must have been killed by the Twilight people, before the city was lost. I am not sure why it remains in this strange state, though."

    They were going to find out sooner or later.

    Leaving the troubling carcass behind, they continued to follow the Guiding Light.

    It wasn't long before they encountered more signs of the past battle.

    There were more dead Nightmare Creatures, each more terrifying than the previous one. All kinds of horrors seemed to have attacked Twilight once, a long time ago, only to be slain by the warriors of Daeron's city. And these were only the ones who had resisted the pull of the current, for some reason. Who knew how many dreadful abominations really participated in the harrowing siege?

    The corpses were littered with all kinds of wounds. Some had been delivered by crafted weapons, some were clearly delivered by powerful Memories. Some seemed to have been dealt to the Nightmare Creatures by the Serpent King himself, or perhaps one of the Saints in his service.

    They also saw fields of flotsam left behind by shattered ships. The sight of floating debris was both sorrowful and ominous.

    After traveling across the ancient battlefield for several days, they saw relatively intact ships, as well.

    They were different both from the alloy behemoths of the waking world and the graceful wooden ships of the River People. Their frames were built of wood, but the hulls were plated with armor crafted from bone, shell, and hide from corrupted leviathans.

    Most were severely damaged, tilted, with gaping breaches in their hulls. Their masts were broken, and the plates of armor covering their sides bore terrible scars. Some were scorched, some seemed to have been partially dissolved by some unknown liquid. In other words... these broken ships looked no different from the corpses of the Nightmare Creatures their crew had fought against.

    Dead, abandoned, and forgotten.

    If there was one thing in common between all of them, though, it was that there was not a living soul aboard. Only bones wearing shredded armor. Everything was dead and silent... even the waters of the Great River grew strangely still, the current almost disappearing.

    Watching the current stop made Sunny feel a deep sense of unease. He had seen the ceaseless flow of the Great River halt only once... all those months ago, in the eye of the time storm. Witnessing something similar happening near Twilight made Sunny wary.

    "Just what the hell happened here?"
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      Pro100zver25
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      1496: Bygone Battlefield.

      They traversed the old battlefield for several more days. By the end of the second week, there were so many dead Nightmare Creatures and ghostly ships floating in the still water, surrounded by debris and broken weapons, that it became almost impossible to navigate between them. A strange haze hung in the air, limiting how far they could see.

      With no other choice, Cassie raised the Chain Breaker higher, and they flew above the scene of harrowing slaughter.

      The Great River was littered with rotten husks of massive abominations, debris, and shattered ships. Shrouded in the somber twilight, they covered the water like a horrid carpet. That carpet stretched into the distance, eventually disappearing in the haze.

      Sunny was appalled and shaken by this sight.

      "How many people died here?"

      He was no stranger to battlefields, but this one seemed especially somber and poignant.

      Although there were much less broken ships than there were slain Nightmare Creatures, this section of the watery battlefield alone must have taken the lives of countless warriors of Twilight. Not all of them had been Ascended, after all... desperate to escape a dying world and create an army of Saints to reclaim it, Daeron had led most of his surviving subjects here, both Awakened and mundane. Before the fall, they had been truly numerous.

      "What is this place?"

      Effie's voice was low.

      Nephis glanced at her, then looked back at the dreadful scene.

      "...It's the outskirt of a battlefield. This is where our predecessors, warriors of the Twilight Sea, faced the Defiled legion of Verge."

      The Serpent King had once led his people to besiege the cursed city of Verge, but was forced to retreat after failing to destroy the First Seeker. The forces of the Defilement must have launched an war campaign in retaliation, and this was the morbid result.

      Sunny studied the floating corpses.

      "No wonder the Defiled have been slow in obliterating Fallen Grace."

      The Six Plagues and their tainted army might have been the victors of the siege of Twilight, but the casualties they had sustained were immeasurably severe. Verge did not possess an infinite number of soldiers, after all. With how many of the Defiled abominations seemed to have perished here, in the haze of dawn, there would not be enough of them left to continue an aggressive conquest.

      "Was it different during the first cycle? I wonder..."

      Perhaps, without the Six Plagues, Twilight would still be standing. Same for Weave, and some of the cities ruled by the sybils. The cohort would have been able to travel across the Great River, slowly gathering allies and building a vast army to destroy Verge.

      Sunny and Nephis would have obtained the support of the Followers of Weaver, Cassie would have become the saint of the River People, Jet and Effie would have gathered the tribes of the River Nomads, and Kai would have earned the trust of the king of Twilight with Mordret's help.

      ...But maybe not. Maybe Twilight had always been destined to fall before the new challengers arrived, and the Serpent King had always been destined to descend into madness and become a mindless beast.

      In any case, that past was gone now, and there was no way to uncover its secrets.

      Instead, Sunny had to carry the weight of King Daeron's crown, and of Wind Flower's trust, to finish what the people of the Twilight Sea had started.

      He gritted his teeth.

      "I'll use your gifts well."

      "Let's proceed."

      Guided by the light of the sacred relic of the sybils, the Chain Breaker flew above the carpet of dreadful corpses, the broken ships, and the forests of broken weapons.

      The Edge was drawing closer and closer. They could not see far because of the haze, but the wind brought with it distant whispers — the endless waterfall was not that far, by now.

      Cassie had lowered the speed of the flying ship to a crawl, afraid that something would unexpectedly attack them from below. This way, at least, they would notice an approaching threat in advance.

      Sunny was peering into the distance when a swift shadow suddenly fell from the sky, and a black crow landed on Jet's shoulder. Her Echo had been scouting ahead, and seemed to have brought news.

      Soul Reaper looked at Crow Crow and raised an eyebrow.

      "What did you find?"

      The crow opened its wings and cawed:

      "Shai-nee! Shai-nee!"

      Jet frowned.

      "Shiny? You found something shiny?"

      The Echo stared at her for a couple of moments, then clicked its beak and flew into the air again. Jet glanced at Cassie.

      "We should probably follow."

      The blind girl hesitated for a bit, then moved the oar, leading the Chain Breaker away from the direction where the Guiding Light was pointing.

      They continued to fly in the direction which used to be downstream, at the same time moving closer to the Edge. After some time, a towering edifice revealed itself from the haze.

      Unlike the carcasses of the leviathans, the structure was clearly made by human hands. A mighty wall rose high above the water, crowned with battlements. The base of the wall was littered with massive spikes, as if to prevent the Nightmare Creatures from reaching it. There were plenty of dead abominations impaled on these spikes.

      Several enormous chains stretched into the distance from both sides of the structure, disappearing into the haze.

      It was a floating fortress.

      Sunny studied the fortress, impressed by how imposing it looked in the dim twilight of the early dawn.

      However...

      For every spike that remained whole, more were bent or broken. Most of the massive chains that had been connected to the sides of the fortress once were torn and covered by rust. The mighty walls were breached and had partially collapsed.

      The battlements were littered with human bones, with tattered flags hanging lifelessly in the forlorn stillness.

      The ghost fortress stood empty and conquered, and only the rare rattling of rusty chains broke the hollow silence that surrounded it.

      Crow Crow was heading directly to the battlements.

      Landing on the parapet of a partially collapsed bastion, the black bird raised its beak and cawed loudly. Its caws echoed above the water, spreading far and wide. Frowning slightly, Cassie brought the Chain Breaker to a halt.

      The members of the cohort gathered on the bow, studying the breached fortress. The Guiding Light was still pointing away from it, so...

      Why had Jet's crow brought them here?

      Sunny was just about to speak when he noticed something from the corner of his eye. Out there, atop the collapsed bastion, something had just shined brightly.

      Turning his head, he narrowed his eyes with a frown.

      "What is it?"

      A moment later, there was a bright shine again, but it disappeared almost immediately.

      "There..."

      There was a skeletal corpse in polished steel armor laying on the battlement, its back leaning against the locking mechanism of one of the chains. As the chain swayed in the water, the corpse was pushed lightly up and down. When it moved, soft sunlight reflected from the polished surface of its breastplate... almost as if inviting them to come.

      Sunny tilted his head.

      "That armor..."

      It was mostly covered in grime, but some of it was clean, revealing lustrous, polished steel.

      That steel was so perfectly polished, in fact, that it was almost like a...

      "Mirror."

      He took a deep breath.

      ...It seemed that Mordret, the Prince of Nothing, was welcoming them to Twilight.
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        Максим Довбняк
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        Bro, you are the best 26
        Thanks
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    Om3ga Opiness😎
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    G3 cooked so hard🫡🫡 swim
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      Yog-sothsoth
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      He cooked my brain
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    Just another book wo
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    Wow WOW freaking wow
    This chapter was so just wow
    A plot twist as twisted as the great river
    Author u have outdone yourself cat
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    RedFox
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    Hi guys, the Shadow Slave is one of my favorite short stories and the best work in recent times, the ongoing comes out quickly, but the chapters are small. There is absolutely nothing to read, at least re-read the slave again, so can anyone recommend a good short story
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      MTL Ancestor
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        RedFox
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        thank you, Mother of Learning, i read it, a very good story, but short)
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          MTL Ancestor
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          welldone No problem.
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    ScratchFox
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    My IQ increased with this chapter. My mind expanded
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    Maquiavelis
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    Fu#k... I kinda saw something like this coming but not THIS grandiose plot twist... swim

    I agree with everybody here my mind too is blown... Damn good arc awesome chapter... Sighs my heart cant take this excitement cat
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    REN・DOVERঐ
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    This is the greatest piece I've ever read. Thank you. My mind is now totally blown. swim
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    SrgtLock
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    This was one helova chapter, put so many pieces together to make this art of a realization. Sunny is the G.O.A.T, he be playing the long long game in this nightmare. Also a thank you to this Author, my brain began to pulse with this chapter and this arc as a whole.
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