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System Break by Skully

System Break
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What happens when you have nothing to lose, so you agree to become a subject in a sketchy... Read more
What happens when you have nothing to lose, so you agree to become a subject in a sketchy experiment.
What happens when this experiment ends up being a game and you’re an alpha tester.
What if the game wasn’t in a computer but (spoiler free)
What if the Alpha testers are helping create the system the game is based on.

I was a brash kid and after getting a war wound I became a bitter bastard. I was given a second chance at life because of something called a high qi-count. I could die, but it’s all good cos my current situation sucks.

I am Benzhi and this is my story. Collapse
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    hungar
    hungar
    11 ⋅ 1
    Too abstract for me.. just simply not enough info about everything , you get it all in bits here and there , while an info dump isn't good , some info chunks are needed sometimes . Idk if i missed something but wtf is "lump" he keeps referring to himself as a "lump".

    Feels raw

    Also if author reads this , change that description it's awful .
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      SirC
      SirC
      2 ⋅ 1
      I thought the "lump" was his body ha ha ha 😅 idk... like "lump of flesh"...
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      schloan
      schloan
      0 ⋅ 0
      the "lump" he keeps referencing is his body in-game.
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    lihkin
    lihkin
    2 ⋅ 1
    Dude becomes a hot wood elf and has to figure out how to use qi without assistance in-game. Irl he's a paraplegic special forces soldier who was wounded in a helicopter crash.
    4.5/5
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    Serial666
    Serial666
    21 ⋅ 2
    well, that's a 1-star description at least.
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