The Martial Unity by Lord_Streak

genuine question, does the writing get better later?
I understand that the author has a very expressive, albeit novice writing style, but it gets hard to read through the scientific explanation when there is no real science involved in an isekai wuxia novel

#panic# update pls

A stupid child trying to write a smart adult. The result is as one would expect.

putting this on hold, not cuz it's bad but cuz my current vibes do not match, i was in a cozy little to no risk martial arts vibe (at least at the start, i was expecting things to ramp up at like chap 500 since its 1700+ long)

my ok vibes have been obliterated

i am now on sad boi vibes be back when

I saw that it had good reviews so decided to read it, am now on 600 chapters.

This Novel takes slow paced to a whole nother Level, I'm not against that but it's just to much.
500 chapters in the first realm is ridiculous.
The title might as well just be Martial Mercenary because that's the only thing he does, missions, gets money. That's it. Nothing new to the story just getting familiar with new techniques while doing missions.
In other novels some villain appears or other things that progress some plot or something but that's not the case here....just..... Missions.

The author tries to explain things like techniques in a scientific way but that makes it just more confusing because he mixes logic and science with another world. Some techniques cough cough "flowing air cannon" are basically just running up to someone and punching/kicking him, no need for some complicated explanation that explains their unbelievable power.
The bureaucracy is also crazy in this novel. Always some paper work to sign or something.
The World building is bad, that's it.

So I can't really say that many positive things about the novel, the mc is pretty good, always obsessed with martial arts.

Is there any type of cultivation or power levels in this LN? Or is this a light novel that is just about being a powerful multi striped black belt?

Chapter updates have slowed down?

I remembered liking this novel, and waited for it to have a bunch of chapters to re-read. Now I feel there's so much exposition.

alr this is the first time I put a review on smth so it will be a mess.

first the world building it's not that deep and at the same time although it's not much the author didn't explain it well enough.

the power system is more on the scientific side and ppl even call it relativley "rational" well it's not in my opinin the very simple beginning was not even explained they just have techniques that they use to get more power so what is the source of energy for all this maybe there's more details later but this is not how it should be introduced.

as for the mc again this is smth that idk authors maybe doing just to show a new or not really used side of an mc that doesn't have to be edgy all the time he's too naive to be a reincarnation unless he was an reincarnation of a 6 yo, the author keeps talking about politics but mc doesn't want to middle in all of that but "rationally" as the novel is supposed to be he will be draged into it then he keeps trying to avoid the clash with any higher up he keeps saying he gets theur intention and he's not easy to trick but why would it matter if u give it to them anyway, he refuses to join a faction so he wouldn't lose his freedom while actually the cons of that actually happens if he actually joined a faction he would have a better access to resources in exchange for how he actually treats the ruling system ut may even be better in a way.

side characters disappear once he leaves the academy he's only left with kane.

so yea what really attracts ppl and tbh is fresh about this novel is having more scientific side to it the author realky did his homework with data about matial arts and biology but other than that everything surrounding it is average.

I wrote this out of annoyance because as it looks the author put effort into this and it could have been much better if not for what I mentioned besides stretching the events across more than 1 chapter, I dare say that at this point there are around 1040 translated chapters they could be reduced to around 600 or even less with no damage to the story line or anything relevant.