Herald of Steel by FerriticMatrix

I created an epub for this novel which you can find on my telegram group on my profile page, that aside here's the review:


This novel is engaging, fascinating and a fun read overall but has significant drawbacks, mainly its frequent inclusion of explicit chapters. Now I would have been fine with normal stuff, but these chapters explore fetishes rather than the standard content you might expect. The Author could've done better to either tone it down or simply offer a version where the R18 is stripped out.

The plot itself is fascinating and is a stickler for the details, which I LOVE, it has many similarities to Mediterranean Hegemon of Ancient Greece (MHAG), though this novel presents a more advanced technological tree. In terms of historical accuracy, MHAG might be slightly better, because unlike MHAG which throws the MC into the past this novel uses a parallel universe with "similar" countries, this did kill the immersion for me a bit I am not going to lie. But this novel attempts a more direct representation of history, talking about things like child molestation, extreme deviancy, and theological differences in paganism etc. Although the author initially copies parts from MHAG, they eventually create a distinct narrative of their own. But again, the R18 was a killjoy, especially since I didn't really appreciate the kinks all that much.



Sex tags:

Do not read this novel, the author has strange tastes where the women's past are prostitutes or have been with many men, two of his four wives are virgins and the other two were prostitutes, the story is set in a kingdom where nobles exchange their partners and have orgies..... The mc almost got engaged to the daughter of a ruler of a city, but he caught her having an orgy with her, her mother and the queen with nine other men...... mathematics Son!!!!!! three women nine men, but other than that I think there is no interest towards the mc, none of his wives after being in a relationship with the mc has been with another man

Is there another site for this story?

Stop spreading misinformation! MC is not a cuckold: he has 3 legitimate wives and all of them were virgins before they met him! MC also has sex with a lot of different women, most of whom slept previously with other men, but all these women are not MC’s wives! He gives zero f#cks about other women he sleeps with, you can’t call such a person a cuck!
Here’s a real life example: you go to a club or a party and get drunk there with a girl, you have casual sex eventually and forget each other the day after. This is normal practice and you can’t call such men cucks.
Moreover there a countless prostitutes everywhere in the world, even in Muslim countries. And normal men continue using such services even though they know that such women had multiple partners before. So according to the imbecile logic of comments below the whole world is cucks, which is total bullshit.

The more it goes on, the more it sucks, it seems that a group of imbeciles has agreed to give birth to this abortion of the world of novels.
At first I liked the concept but as happens with most of the few novels of this genre (KINGDOM BUILDING) the author suddenly decides to screw it up😞
And apparently this particular author was cheated on by his girlfriend but instead of getting angry like any of us would, he decided to stand by the door and jerk off in the meantime.
It's really true that some people are really weird🤢🤮

Brothers don't read this, it's complete shit, the MC is cuckold. This author must have serious mental problems to do that.I don't read this crap novel anymore.Title should read "Herald Cuckold"

Cambyses's marriage event made me drop this shit, the whole event contains like 80% info dump, 10% random shit, 8% MC praising sluts, and 2% of MC and Cambyses interaction. To finish it off the honeymoon was written with "and they f#ck all night" shit.


The whole event was at least 5 chapters long btw.

author watching everyone downvoted in ntr world so he got the "brilliant" idea to do a good job more realistic and fulfill his wish to be cuck, and all he needed is to call me

It should be named Herald of Cuck.

Irei começar a leitura!, Pela sinopse parece legal , espero estar correto:)