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New Eden: Live to Play, Play to Live by Galanar

In a world of constant competition, one man aims for the top. In this new genre VRMMORPG, he plans... Read more
In a world of constant competition, one man aims for the top. In this new genre VRMMORPG, he plans on becoming the strongest at all costs.

The classes, the races, the starting zones, everything is a mystery in 'New Eden'. This game is coming out without a shred of details. The only thing that was promoted was the freedom of skill choosing.

Our protagonist Alexander, gamer tag Astaroth, has always dreamt of becoming an E-Sports athlete. His parents supported his dream, but they are no longer of this world. He fully intends on making it in this new game, if not for him, then at least to honor their memory.

With no idea how he wants to play his character, Alexander chooses the most mysterious starting race. Will this be his road to success or his downfall? The game assistant certainly thought the latter.

"Do as you wish, young adventurer. I only wish to add this. Do not come back with complaints when you realize you have made the wrong choice," the elf said, looking at him with clear hatred.

"We will see about that," Alexander flatly replied. "I love challenges," he added.

"Very well!" the elf harrumphed. "Have the adventure of your lifetime, as short as it will last," he sarcastically added.

Ahead of him lies an uncertain path, filled with trials and hardships.

But one thing is clear in his eyes. He will become the strongest player in the game, even if he must step over mountains of corpses to do so.

Over are his days of working hard for nothing, it's make or break now!

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I now have a discord where you can talk with other readers and me. There are also channels to discuss new weapons; characters; classes; or monsters that you might want to design and see incorporated in the story. I will always give credit to the person that created said thing, rest assured. Collapse
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    John Smith
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    #panic# there are new chapters
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      panic
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      Fixed.
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      only we
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    Jayant Garg
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    this a good novel try witting a review after chapter 100
    boast
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    Rath
    20
    I'm writing this review after reading the latest chapter 538.
    As far as I'm concerned I like this story, and for me this was like a mix of two other stories I have read before White Online, Re: Evolution Online.
    That's all I have to say.
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    Smileyfacefrown
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    First off, my guess even though this is written in English it is not the author's first language. Saying that it isn't that bad and I have read a lot worse. Those commenting that the dialogue is forced and unnatural, I don't see it, not really sure some of it is bad, but I have paid for english books, with editors that is much worse.

    I rate this book a lot higher than 98% of the top 100 on web novel, and Ranobes. If you are looking for your usual cookie cutter novel, this is not for you.
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      kumb
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      I don't see how you'd think this novel is written by someone who's second language is english?
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    JellyB
    40
    Why is the dialogue in an English original 10 times more unnatural than MTL dialogue in a random Chinese cultivation novel? Nobody would ever talk like these characters do. I have no idea how good the story is, since the dialogue was too awful for me to keep reading.
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    Darkmoon
    20
    Made it to chapter 101, the idea of this has potential but it seems a bit forced
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    Devendra Ahirwar
    20
    Read a few ch. Dropped at unbearable Cringeness.
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    Nexzuss21
    30
    Shit.......
    That's all I could say.....
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    puke
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      Spiritcaller
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      Why though?
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    SuckDeezNuts
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    "Do as you wish, young adventurer. I only wish to add this. Do not come back with complaints when you realize you have made the wrong choice," the elf said, looking at him with clear hatred.

    "We will see about that," Alexander flatly replied. "I love challenges," he added.

    "Very well!" the elf harrumphed. "Have the adventure of your lifetime, as short as it will last," he sarcastically added.


    Why is the npc hostile right from the beginning?
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      Ashelia
      20
      The NPC was an elf no? Choosing an Ash Elf might be the reason as the two races of Elves might be on hostile terms.
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    Lucas H
    22
    I stopped at chapter 67 there, the dialogues and interactions with the characters are too forced for me.
    ethsky
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