Limitless Evolution: The Path To Immortality by Animosity

"Will he succeed in his quest to bring prosperity and change to this world, or will his past sins come back to haunt him once again?"

this type of shit in the summary is a total turn off.

like it's the mc, what do you expect would happen?

Its consumable...

Can I get the discord link please 🙏
I really want to see the fan art

Am at Chap 85 currently. Its not bad, but there are definetly issues. The most noticeable being the increase in spelling mistakes alongside sentences that don't make any sense the further you read. It isn't anywhere near as bad as MTL level, but you definetly notice the mistakes as well as their increased frequency. Like it gets to a point where there are wrong/missing/added letters, wrong words used and weird sentences multiple times in a chapter - examples from just Chap 84:




In terms of the story itself, sometimes things happen or get told multiple times, though these are usually quite a few chapters apart, it's unlikely you'll have forgotten them. Example being that it's explained that MC uses Fire Channeling for Speed rather than wind due to giving him better bursts. This explanation is given both times he uses it.

This applies to the MC as well, not just the explanations. He comes to the conclusion that he should be getting stronger for himself and not rely on the safety of his family 2 different times.

Speaking of his family, they're pretty decent. But the way in which he leaves them just feels really rushed and just done to have him leave his village. He also blames himself a lot for what happened and feels guilty for some things that clearly aren't his fault at all, yet he is also randomly completely over the top and unapologetic as well.

His new place seems to be full of crazy people who just do things without any rhyme or reason. Think killing their subordinates for nothing etc.

Currently I will probably continue on to the latest chapter, since there isn't much left, but I doubt I'll be continuing it after.

The story is good. 3.7/5.
From what I could see the author had great idea for the story but not the direction, the story is trying to accommodate alot of thing’s. 1st there is the issue with Mc personally we are told from monologues that he was a 50 year old and ambitious person before rebirth.However his personally since he was reborn is all over the place sometimes he is acting like a child, then he is edgy lord. What finally give me a wtf moment was when he joined the darkness organization in chap 64.

This is because he goes on trying to say he loves his family then called them baggage holding him down from breakthroughIm like make up your mind.

That whole city invasion rack with darkness organization from chap 49 feels out of place like an excuse to leave the noob village and his family while being an edgy lord .Like I must join them to protect them ugh 😩

Still good though

Time lord is here.
After reading the novel, it's a solid 3.5 .

Read all that's available at the moment. It's not a bad novel but it feels all over the place. The author can't seem to decide on what exactly the MC's personality is. One moment he's edgy, the other, he's joking around. His mood is as random as a bipolar person during their period

imagine Supreme Magus but alot worse. first 10 20 chapters are acceptable but at 30 ish ones it becomes cringier as it goes people are basically npc's that mc Controls with his shity acting skills. even more illogical he Starts as Sorry for destroying humanity later he says who are you to kill me who destroyed hamanity i mean come on. Logic of magic system is Chinese (no one has seen diamond core for 500 years) guess the rest Yourself
also 2 things really bother me 1 he kills ppl for hitting his sister then he don't give a shit about her for the rest of chapters 2 he wants to hide his skills then he go up stage beat a 19 yours old at 5 while using a blood Lost second to none and no one cares what he has done come on pls dont be this bad i'm dropping

Fallos tan absurdos no lo tolero

Wtf is wrong with this guy? Is he even 50s? Child like inner monlogues and fcking chinese style pretending pig to eat tiger. Come on you should atleast show 1 element motherfcker if you have 4 and wtf with sword training. If you have no talent, you can try learning. I respect that but you makes other think no elements and no talent for sword and you told them to believe in you. Is your head kick by a donkey?