Final comments
Final comments
Completed, please be happy, please be happy, please be happy~
Thank you very much to all of you who have been with you all the way.！
How do you say the book "Cultivating Immortality"... The author has not read much about the novel "Cultivating Immortality", which leads to the lack of fairy tale in the book, and even the immortals are not fairy-like and martial, which is a bit like a little bit.
To be honest, the author was also because the last book opened the door and hurriedly opened another book of Xianxia, so he was not prepared enough. Not to mention setting the outline, he didn't even understand the most basic worldview of Xianxia, and he completely followed his own. To write your ideas.
The final performance is also very obvious. It was fine in the early stage. After it was released, it was too many updates and was written in a hurry, which resulted in not much time to think about the plot. In addition, the early setting outline was insufficient, which was ridiculously collapsed..
However, when the author opened the book, he had already thought about completing the book, and he also agreed to his friends. In the end, he was still patient, pondering the plot, and finishing the work in a bumpy way..
The final ending progress is a bit fast. The author has thought carefully that the tides of the great way brought by Lu Yi every time he breaks through will affect the Jiuyou World. The Jiuyou Demon Gods are not fools. Although they don’t know that Lu Yi has the chaotic energy, they are also Knowing that Lu Yi is different from other immortal emperors, it is impossible to wait for Lu Yi to break through to the immortal emperor before launching a general attack. In this case, it would be very unreasonable for Jiuyoufang..
The original outline set by the author Jun was that after Lu Yi broke through to the Immortal King, he first entered the Jiuyou World, and met with the Immortal Emperor and the Immortal King in the Jiuyou World to tell their story in the Jiuyou World, but this is how it is. It's a bit like rubbing the IQs of the Jiuyou Demon God and the Jiuyou Immortal Emperor on the ground.
After thinking about it, the author still felt that not long after Lu Yigang broke through the Immortal King realm, the Jiuyou World launched a general attack to intensify the conflict and directly climax would be better..
Otherwise, the author would have a water of about 100,000 words (laughs）.
As for other things, there are too many problems with the book Cultivation of Immortality. The author must think carefully and take it as a warning. I hope that the next book can be prepared and written better..
Well... In the next book, the author has already had some ideas and is ready to continue writing urban fantasy novels. He has already started to prepare the settings and outlines..
Take a few weeks off, adjust the status, and prepare a new book at the same time. If the book starts, you will notify you in advance..
That's it~
Thank you again for your friends who have been with me and Lu Yi for walking over. Thank you.
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