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A Wizard's Secret法师奥义

Anyone who could construct a stable Spell Model could become a Wizard — that was the Wizards’... Read more
Anyone who could construct a stable Spell Model could become a Wizard — that was the Wizards’ ultimate secret! Having been given a new life as the son of an aristocrat and armed with a super quantum computer from his past life, Spell Models came as easily as breathing to Merlin. With this overwhelmingly huge advantage, would Merlin become the greatest Grand Wizard of all time? Collapse
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    PrinceCain
    10
    Dropped it. The longer the story goes the more boring it becomes.
    At first it has similarity to "The Warlock of the Magus World" with the "matrix" and the mage ring.. the only difference is he gave his father a successor not like leylin that have no regards with his father's bloodline. Also the difference in talent.
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      Timo
      00
      Leylin has a successor.. infact there two
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        PrinceCain
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        Sorry wrong wordings. What I mean is, He at least gave his father a successor before leaving on a journey. Leylin had a successor when he had snake serpent bloodline, his father long gone.
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    DrkAvalon01
    60
    Hello everyone, sorry if my English is bad.

    "A Wizard's Secret" is one of those novels with contradictory content, lack of human interaction, illogical elements and boring force progression. Let me explain.

    Contradictory content: The title of the novel is "A Wizard's Secret" "Wizard" because we will follow an MC who will use magic, and "Secret" because of the AI which helps him to become powerful. The problem ? Right in the middle of the story the MC will give up magic for something else, and his AI will become totally useless afterwards. In short, the novel is called "A Wizard's Secret" as the MC will no longer use magic and his AI in the middle of the story. Making all his efforts to learn spells at the beginning of the novel completely useless.

    Lack of human interaction: MC has no friends, leaves family behind, and has no wife. We often have MCs who abandon their family at first, but usually they try to make them immortal so they don't have to be alone. The MC is too lonely, the social interaction in a story is important, we like to see other important characters, it makes a novel more alive and deep, too bad there isn't any here. Secondary characters in this story are left behind in the MC's progression. As long as a romance is not invasive in a story, it adds a little sweetness to a novel, and humanity to an MC. All this is not present here, we have a solitary MC with all that is negative with it.

    Illogical Element: I was talking about the lack of romance but, where are the female mage in this story? Yes at the beginning they are present, but when the MC goes up in the higher dimension, no more trace. No, because the author says the MC can't find love because of his long life as a mage, but there should be female mage, right? Well no, no more trace. Looks like the author deleted all female mage in the upper realm without any explanation just to make the MC single.

    Boring Strength Progression: When the focus of the story is to make your MC stronger and stronger, you have to make that progression interesting to keep the reader going. Seeing what fighting technique the MC will create, seeing the MC experimenting to become stronger, seeing the MC having an enlightenment during a fight or even becoming stronger in desperate moments, all of these are elements that can make progress of an interesting MC. As a mage, one expects to see a protagonist creating original spells, playing with magic and doing cool things with it. Nah, the magic system of this novel is rigid as possible and allows little modification, and the only possible modifications are made without any effort by the IA of the MC. In short you have an MC who just has to find spells, let their AI improve them, all while meditating to increase his amount of magic, boring as hell.

    Conclusion: A novel with an overly rigid magic system and a cheat that makes MC progression too boring. The MC is too lonely and the story world too empty. The mysteries are cliché, the MC abandons his magic system and his cheat in the middle of the story. Not to mention some lack of response such as the reincarnation of the MC which is never explained. A bland novel for no real reason that pushes us to read it.
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    Amor Fati
    57
    Grading: D
    The concept is good, but the writing is horrible - but hey, what else can you expect from a Chinese author, their content is almost always sh*t and decent novels are too few. I like this whole church of the light cultivation thing and being a mage is being a heretic. It's an interesting concept as compared to the cliche of practicing dark arts being heretical. Though as I say again the only downside to this is that is written by a Chinese.
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    Ceaser
    20
    This story Has slightly less holes then a sieve.
    Feels forced here and there.
    The concept and storyline is pretty good.
    Overall ok to pass time, no more.
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    yvkreddy
    43
    All in all a web novel which is mediocre in almost all aspects. It has a very bland story, poorly thought out World building, bad story arcs, inconsistent and mostly stupid characters. It also not a good "popcorn" novel either. The mc is given a wonderful cheat but so many restrictions or nerfs are done to him that progression feels very unsatisfying.

    The cheat is very similar to the wmw. But there are so many restrictions like the mc can only use it for one single purpose only. As we go along the author might have felt that this is too op(which it isn't) so he nerfed it even more saying that you require a alot of "energy" to use it and linked the cheat to extremely difficult to find energy sources. Then he felt that the mc might have been too nerfed so he makes too many coincidences so that the mc can acquire the said energy.

    There is also this whole "six elemental" thing that the author adds to further nerf the mc. It doesn't increase the power of our mc at all but the progression becomes extremely slow. Even after 2-3 hundred chapters our mc was still a level 1 noob. It is very unsatisfying.

    MC's character is a mess. He ignores his family a lot. Says that he is too busy and all. But the things he is busy with is basically involving himself with things that he has no business getting involved with. Instead of staying in one place cultivating he wanders to random places with no purpose. The author then forces fortuitous opportunities on mc so that he can improve his power. Since he transmigrated from somewhere else he initially has a very "these people are barbaric" type of personality. After some time he becomes arrogant, greedy, and stupid and keeps killing people left and right for riches.
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    BELIZEAN_KOOLI
    60
    Cover art looks like the dad from Umbrella Academy.
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    nightmare_king
    nightmare_king
    40
    Kind of hasty endng.
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    Omnis Ra
    12
    Story is so drugged out. I made it to ch 21 and I couldn't finish
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    ozmu
    10
    yo leí esta novela como hasta el capitulo 600 y me gusto bastante, la recomiendo satisfied
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    Wendel
    Wendel
    33
    Somethig you can read if your beyond bored. Felt plain and repetitive 2/5
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