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The Invincible Corruption Manual by The_handsome_fatty

The Invincible Corruption Manual
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A strange dark entity approaches the milky way galaxy. A new era was about to begin and it would... Read more
A strange dark entity approaches the milky way galaxy. A new era was about to begin and it would choose the fateful one.

Joey always thought that he was unlucky and hopeless. From an early age, he was brought up by the church and ended up adopted by a couple. From then on, his life became not so easy. Poor in studies, abused by his parents.

One day after school, he was hit by a car after saving an old man. «Am I going to die like this? " He thought. Then the old man suddenly hit his forehead with a strange stone. Collapse
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    SapienTelikos
    SapienTelikos
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    Quote: amanpratap1808
    Why the f#ck did you have to put such curse on her? Come on I got around that weird NTR part which was fine as I simply took it as roleplay but then the future mc comes and curses her and I was like WTF she didn't do willingly also you were the one who directed all that so no harm done and now you are spouting some man's pride bullshit but can't you have simply remove the bloodline I mean so what if she doesn't get that bloodline would it degrade her but no you wanted to be NTRed and now you have galls to say man's pride???
    Simply disgusting I didn't even bother to read after that.
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    Dakowten
    Dakowten
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    1.7 rating.

    Fair enough, the novel itself sucks.
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    amanpratap1808
    amanpratap1808
    13 ⋅ 1
    Why the f#ck did you have to put such curse on her? Come on I got around that weird NTR part which was fine as I simply took it as roleplay but then the future mc comes and curses her and I was like WTF she didn't do willingly also you were the one who directed all that so no harm done and now you are spouting some man's pride bullshit but can't you have simply remove the bloodline I mean so what if she doesn't get that bloodline would it degrade her but no you wanted to be NTRed and now you have galls to say man's pride???
    Simply disgusting I didn't even bother to read after that.
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    best username
    best username
    9 ⋅ 0
    wait, does the mc actually get NTR'ed in this or no? if so to what degree, cos i can't stand beta mc's that get cucked
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    Natsu-gildarts
    Natsu-gildarts
    1 ⋅ 0
    How is this?
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    Kash22
    Kash22
    0 ⋅ 1
    Is This Any Good.?
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    demante
    demante
    4 ⋅ 2
    It's so painful to read.
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      crazyimmortal
      crazyimmortal
      5 ⋅ 6
      Please, tell me in detail.
      I am author. I will learn from you.
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    Golden_Dragon
    Golden_Dragon
    5 ⋅ 2
    Is there NTR in the novel?
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      Aimzay
      Aimzay
      10 ⋅ 3
      Yes. Mc sorta gets cucked between chapter 111-115
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        Death panda
        Death panda
        0 ⋅ 0
        What? That far in?
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          crazyimmortal
          crazyimmortal
          1 ⋅ 4
          nope, only two chaps for smut. But already edited everything thrice.
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        pandadegenerate
        pandadegenerate
        2 ⋅ 0
        sorta or really cucked
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      crazyimmortal
      crazyimmortal
      0 ⋅ 2
      no, the theme has changed to couple role play
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    lihkin
    lihkin
    3 ⋅ 1
    Supposedly there was NTR, but the author was enlightened and removed it.
    Dropped for me. The story is really good, but the grammar is a bit subpar. Not MTL quality, but feels like Middle School English.
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      Death panda
      Death panda
      6 ⋅ 1
      From the things I’ve seen child 10th grade English is a miracle bestowed by our great unrivaled elder the perfect writer
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        lihkin
        lihkin
        5 ⋅ 2
        Quote: Death panda
        From the things I’ve seen child 10th grade English is a miracle bestowed by our great unrivaled elder the perfect writer

        ...
        CHILD????
        You DARE look down on THIS EMPEROR!? I decree your cultivation stripped AND NINE GENERATIONS of EXECUTIONS for your Clan!
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          Death panda
          Death panda
          14 ⋅ 0
          Indeed a child it’s been far too long since I’ve been part of worldly matters my clan perished and last of my generation what am my to give to you if all is gone I am but a mere mortal strapped to this strange addiction you and I share
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            Dream Drifter
            Dream Drifter
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            I see you are a man of culture
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              Death panda
              Death panda
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              I am but a humble man in my path out of boredom
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      best username
      best username
      4 ⋅ 0
      idk about you but 10th grade english is the same as college level english in my eyes, but with a few less fancy words.
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        lihkin
        lihkin
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        Edited, ur right
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          Bookwormwithabook
          Bookwormwithabook
          3 ⋅ 1
          Hahaha Check the authours name
          Its like a sidekick
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            lihkin
            lihkin
            0 ⋅ 0
            tru
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            crazyimmortal
            crazyimmortal
            2 ⋅ 0
            lol, I really like the this name though
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          crazyimmortal
          crazyimmortal
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          yep, edited three times.
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      Aimzay
      Aimzay
      10 ⋅ 1
      It’s still there, he did the worst way to edit it. Basically, before he edited it, the mc uses a body transformation ability to change his appearance to the guy his wife wants to f#ck, and has sex with her under the disguise of the dude. Author edited it to make it seem like she knew but she didn’t. And he even left the part where she wants to know what the guys pp would feel like in her mouth. That left a really bad taste in my mouth so I’m not ever gonna read this book
      Edit: Nvm, this website didn’t change the edited chapters
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        SopitaCx
        SopitaCx
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        wow is it so bad?
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          crazyimmortal
          crazyimmortal
          7 ⋅ 9
          Hi, I am the author of this novel. Oh, yes my pen name is a like a sidekick The_handsome_fatty
          hahaha, I happen to find this site just now.
          Hey, I really appreciate your hate comments here going around here.
          I am learning from you guys.
          Oh, and my English is poor. I agree. I will keep that in my mind and try to improve further. Anyway this is my first novel.

          And about the NTR things, why are you all against it? If you don't like it, you can drop it. I totally understand.

          Everyone is okay, even with incest, why blame on NTR?....



          @AIMZAY, bro, I don't know what you really are trying here. But, man, I have done a lot of research in scripting this novel. You, all must have known that I am an Indian. This novel is based on the theme between Indian and Chinese mythologies.


          # Also, one more important thing, The MC of this novel is not cuck at all.

          Reason 1: It is just the sex between MC and Rose. There is no third party in that Cuck thing that you mention about. How will that even be possible? In short, no cheating at all. It is just the plot.

          Reason 2: It is a fantasy novel. So, anything can be happen.

          Reason 3: alright, I have changed the theme of ch 111-115 into that of Couple role play sex.


          Guys, please try reading this novel. Yep, I make a lot of mistake. But, the plots and the story in this novel, you will love it. One more thing ( If you want to read this book in this site., please skip from ch 111-115. )

          Hahahaha, I really like those comments. Give more suggestions and reviews.

          Thank you all.
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          crazyimmortal
          crazyimmortal
          2 ⋅ 1
          nope
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      crazyimmortal
      crazyimmortal
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      Bro, I don't even thought about NTR things in my mind at all when I scripted those five chapters.
      I kind of freak out when I first saw all of these comments here.
      But, now I like to learn more about all your reactions going on here.
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        lihkin
        lihkin
        5 ⋅ 1
        I get the vibe English ain't ur first language, so here are some tips to improve:
        1)Listen to TV shows, movies, etc. And I mean ACTUALLY listen to what they're saying, how they're saying it, and why they're saying it that way. Then go find some other friends(virtual or not) and talk with them. Like, a lot. Also, make sure to talk to a large variety of people so you can pick up some nifty words like "y'all" or "ain't".
        2)When you see an unfamiliar word, google it IMMEDIATELY. Most browsers/devices have this functionality available in them. Like on chrome in windows: select the word, right-click it, and press Search google for "xxx". Ex, stumped, confounding. perplexing(which are all synonyms too)
        In extension to this, try going through vocab word sets, and I know it's corny as heck, but use this method on those words if you haven't run into anything unfamiliar in a while.
        3)Get Grammarly Premium
        4)Get Grammarly Premium, it fixes ur mistakes and tells you WHY those mistakes are wrong. If you don't get why those errors are mistake, try googling them and if that doesn't work you can always ask a forum like reddit.

        Anyways, that's all of my advice for you. Your novel has promise, but I have to constantly break immersion in the story to try and figure out wtf you were trying to say.
        As an example, I'll edit your original comment to show you some of the things you need to start with:
        Bro, I don't even thought about NTR things in my mind at all when I scripted those five chapters.
        I kind of freak out when I first saw all of these comments here.
        But, now I like to learn more about all your reactions going on here.
        -This is the original comment

        Bro, I didn't even think about NTR at all when I scripted those five chapters.
        I kind of freaked out when I first saw all of these comments here, but now I'm interested to learn more about y'alls reaction to my novel.
        -This is the edited comment

        If you don't get why I changed certain things, lmk. Also, my English isn't perfect either so I could've made a mistake interpreting the last sentence. I'm still a bit perplexed as to what you meant there lol

        Also, this comment on reddit really spoke to me:
        It's easy to write a novel. It's difficult to write a novel well. And by difficult, I mean time-consuming. Most people don't have the patience to grow their novel-writing skills to respectable levels as they write their first novel.

        Popular reddit advice actually goes contrary to that. "Just throw words down on a page and then fix it a hundred thousand words later." And then when they later figure out its irredeemable, they scrap it, try it again. Maybe after a couple or many tries like this over a couple or many years, they figure out decent plot structure, prose, themes, and all the subtleties in between. And finally find some bit of success. Then they tell others, "Don't worry, it takes several failed works to write a decent novel, so just write out books as quickly as you can so you can eventually figure it out!"--or, maybe you just weren't patient enough to learn to do that over the course of writing and figuring out one story, versus over the course of failing at several lol. Holding L's isn't a badge of honor; it's a badge of working harder instead of smarter.

        Nothing encapsulates the silliness of this running-before-learning-to-crawl mentality, like writers who haven't figured out active vs passive voice, write out entire draft of poorly constructed sentences, and then go "Oh, I'll just take out all to-be verbs and ing-sentences later and 'fix' it through that shortcut"...Or, maybe spend as long as necessary, construct sentences as slow as necessary, for you to figure out how to write in active voice by default, instead of having to fix 90K words worth of sentences?

        The way the majority of people write novels seems incredibly inefficient to me. And then the way it's socially spread among hubs of amateur writers brings a certain level of irony to the fact that 98% or so of writers do not matriculate to successful authors... because, far as I can tell, writing communities literally bring that upon themselves.

        All in all, it's ur novel and ur life, but if you want people to actually read AND enjoy it, you need to get better grammar. Ur plot is good, sure, but it's not worth me using my valuable time to keep trying to decipher what you're trying to say. Neither I nor anyone else have an obligation to suffer through bad grammar for a good plot when there are tons of other stories out there that have good plot AND amazing grammar like "beware of chicken" that's also on this site(I highly recommend you read that just to see what a true wordsmith is like, it blew my mind how they used the English language)
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          crazyimmortal
          crazyimmortal
          4 ⋅ 4
          Point taken.
          Yours word really meant a lot to me.
          Hey bro, check out my 2nd novel, ' The Supreme Hybrid System'

          Bro, I tried reading 'beware of chicken'

          At first I really enjoy it, but eventually I became bore with the plots. The plots are so bad and boring.
          The grammar in this novel is good. I can give you that. But, It gets overhype after reading more chapters later for a light novel.

          My conclusion, it is overrated.
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