12 hours ago

Mark of the Fool by UnstoppableJuggernaut

After his parents died, Alex Roth had a plan: become a wizard. Through hard work, he was accepted... Read more
After his parents died, Alex Roth had a plan: become a wizard. Through hard work, he was accepted into the world’s greatest university of wizardry—but fate had another plan.

On his eighteenth, he is marked as one of his kingdom’s five Heroes, chosen to fight the land’s great enemy. But his brand is 'The Fool', worst of the marks.

Rather than die or serve the other Heroes like Fools in the past, he packs up his little sister, his childhood friend and her cerberus, then flees for the university in hope of refuge, magic and to unravel the truth about his land’s evil.

There’s one small problem: The Mark tries to ruin magic while enhancing skills outside of divinity, combat and spellcraft.…

…that is, unless he can learn to exploit the hell out of it.

*****

This the first time I am writing a web novel type story, and I hope you like it. I like progression stories and I've always wanted to try and write one like a few of the web novels that inspired me.

Updates Tues-Wed-Thur-Fri-Sat.

There are currently 20 advanced chapters on my patreon as a thank you to patrons.

Join us on discord! https://discord.gg/A4M3CzfWBn

Chapters will be roughly 2000-2500 words.

[participant in the Royal Road Writathon challenge]

***

Rating: This story is kind of like a PG-13 movie. There'll be gore and some swearing but not much beyond that. If that changes, I'll warn you.

Tone: Tone will be a mix of some action-adventure with excitement, comedy, slice of life elements and mystery. I won't be going too dark with this story. There will be mentions of war, some death, grief and violence.

MC: MC is analytical/rational with emotions. He is mostly in control of those emotions. MC will progress in power, eventually becoming very strong. When that happens, I'll add the Strong Lead tag.

Fights: Fights will be detailed.

***

Stuff this story won't have:

- Extreme grimdark content

- Murderhobo plots

- Edgy, anti-hero MC

- Pacifist MC

- Harems Collapse
  • Views: 57 157
  • Total views: 1 037 934
  • Comments: 60
  • Total comments: 451

Links

Information
Users of Guests are not allowed to comment this publication.

Comments 60

  1. Offline
    NotSoAmazing
    10
    As of chapter 800. Great novel with a great attitude to character growth. The mc is prohibited from his goals from the start and has to work his ass off to overcome them in creative ways. Characters are varied and interesting, and for the most part actually draw the reader in. Allies grow closer and villains have different motivations for how they behave.
    There is very little stubbornness seen in characters and no-one is black or white. (Edit: black or white in terms of morality not skin colour xD, just realised how that could seem)

    In terms of worldbuilding there hasn't been a huge amount of exploration but what has been shown has been detailed and interesting.

    Unfortunately there are sections where it feels like the author is just doing it for word count of the plot just slows down which can be painful.

    Overall very good novel, unique, entertaining and logical. 7.5/10 in my opinion.
    Read more
  2. Offline
    IftaherAhammed
    10
    Can anyone guve me spoilers
    Read more
  3. Offline
    unknown007
    110
    LOTM fans see the word THE FOOL: troll11
    Read more
  4. Offline
    KING OF CHAOS
    43
    It's not bad, but it's not good either, it's average at best. It's a 5/10
    Read more
  5. Offline
    pepper
    116
    praise mr fool!!
    Read more
    1. Offline
      SilvaSteins
      80
      Guess he's expanding on the Sefirah domain, praise Mr. Fool indeed joy
      Read more
      1. Offline
        pepper
        40
        hes expanding his influence to other novels
        Read more
    2. Offline
      autumn
      40
      why so many dislikes
      Read more
  6. Offline
    Gott-höchste
    108
    Rank: C-
    Read more
  7. Offline
    Fast_sec
    87
    Novel is so so, nothing to brag about. I had to ignore some of MC's decision making and constant plot armor to even continue reading. His university life is pretty boring, so if you skipped a couple chapters here and there you wouldn't really be missing anything. There's a few things I have a beef with. MC should never have brought his 10yr old sister with him. Leaving her with the Lu family is the most reasonable and safer route. MC has been in a lot of life and death situations but when he gets interrogated by authorities his cool and calm attitude is gone, and reverts back to your average wimpy 19yr old. The only good trait about MC is he puts in the work.
    Read more
  8. Offline
    Vraken
    63
    As of chapter 330

    The characters are well done, story is great but a slow burn for major stuff which isn't bad, romance is believable and the mc is realistic.

    The MCs blessing has upsides but its downsides are near crippling and he has to find ways around it to be able to fight at all.

    Read more
  9. Offline
    SeriousReal
    20
    can we get a solid review here up to 300+ chaps?
    Read more
    1. Offline
      hillsidejohn
      81
      It's pretty decent, a cut above average western novels and is definitely a cut above the average cn web novel (to anyone with an opinion, before you express it, remember that there is simply MORE cn web novels both in title and in length and I hope you understand how average works)
      Read more
  10. Offline
    Kartik
    30
    Noice welldone
    Read more