Warlock of The Magus World (FanFiction) by Keetarp

This guy most be unloved bastard of a person as only a trash bastard write such a trash novel, this shit brings shame to the original novel , this shit indirectly gives bad karma to the author Wen Chao Gong because of how bad it is

I should have just read the comments instead wasting my time .

GIVE ME BACK MY PRECIOUS TIME YOU BASTARD

It can't be worse than black onyx right?

Anyone who knows this trash writer, please tell him to stop writing. You are disgracing humanity, civilization, literary works, and yourself.

Rating 2.9 is too high for this novel. This novel deserves a rating of 0.

this novel is a fan fiction that basically follows the original plot but with an mc with a very different personality, at times it irritated me as the protagonist is lascivious, here he understands the importance of subordinates and does not betray and destroy every organization he enters or creates, and it was going so well, until it reached the arc of the god of slaughter, from there it became a generic cultivation novel, the mc became a shitty young master, extremely arrogant and hypocritical, and seriously the guy manages to contradict himself in two paragraphs in a row, he says that that character has no use as a pawn and that in the future she would only get in his way, but because it was a woman, he lets her go, it gets to the point where in the middle of the battles he is clearly more stronger than the enemy, but in this f#cking world where everyone has an ass for a brain, he spends a lot of time talking and humiliating the enemy, only for the next paragraph to say that the problem in this world is that people talk a lot instead of acting at once, he often stands still on the battlefield and lets the enemy hit him without him doing anything.

in summary, as long as the author followed the original it was pretty good, but when he started inventing shit, this novel went from a solid 7 to a 3.5.

Crap

Really God of Slaughter arc is still ongoing , I didn't read that one so it is hard to follow.

Trash 🗑️

Very good ff, the MC is cold but not a boring robot like the original.

Why was this accepted on this site? This fan fiction assumes to much, and the person who did this is just copy pasta'ing the original with minute changes. Just go read the original...