Game of Thrones: Paladin of Old Gods by Duncan_Randar

Ohhhh no, I have no arguments!!!
Alright my brother, I have many arguments, but I don't write because the minimum chance of someone reading it or simply giving a negative vote just because it's a big text, is high. Not worth it.

In canon the adult age is 16 but you mention the jahaerys, It makes no sense, it's the south, not the north. The author took care of that, he put the religious and united society of the north plus the love of Duncan's father for Duncan to make his plans
And even if there's a chance Duncan won't be heard or the kid with silly ideas will simply be ignored, it wouldn't make sense to take that route, it wouldn't be a good story.

The author didn't take care of that, it was a naive and stupid explanation without any sense of how humans would behave. As if written by an autist or anti-social person. And don't even speak nonsense about some downvotes, lol. You care about some downvotes on a pirate site?! Plus you downvoted bro.

Each chapter is at least 3k words long, ASOIAF is about gray humans, Martin himself can't manage f#cking characters. Example is Robert killing the rhaegar with just 1 hammer blow and a few days later he laughs at the death of the rhaegar's wife and children.
Robert a hot blooded man seeing the man who "raped" the woman he loved,Only let rhaegar die with 1 coup de grace, without ripping rhaegar to shreds, per Martin's explanations: he's a man of honor with badass warriors
But later in king's landing, he laughs at the death of 1 woman, 1 child and 1 infant
Then you ask a fanfic author to try to create a story using Characters quoted on 1 page of a book, how he would react to having his son a genius blessed by the gods.
I don't care about downvotes on random comments, I care about negative comments on comments with facts, opinions from those who have read and seen plot errors in a novel,And because the person liked it too much because the MC just eats every hottie in the way, he gives a downvote along with other like-minded monkeys.

What the hell are you talking about? I mean power fantasy is fun once in a while. But are you actually saying this shitty powerfantasy fanfic is better than the real novel?

You know how to read?
Do you know how to interpret text?
I'm saying all the time, that people compare fanfic to the original, because the MC doesn't get f#cked every 1 chapter, Why would Martin do that, since his dad could disagree with him, Because his father had a gray personality, because in ASOIAF all the characters have a gray personality.
But damn you asked for this, when even Big George couldn't create gray Characters.
I'm explaining how people who don't like this fanfic because it's not the original
When not even the author of ASOIAF can control the world building itself

I'm explaining that people who don't like this fanfic because it's not the same, the world building is not the same as RR Martin's ASOIAF
They ask for a "world building control" when not even George RR Martin can control the world building itself

I'm intruding in the middle, but I'm already talking about the real thing.
"it's certainly more fun".
but with time it becomes nauseating? for sure
after all, human beings like to see new things, even if they don't want to leave their comfort zone.
so when an asshole like you comes along to say that the original novel is cooler than wish fulfillment fiction, you deserve to get a little more from life, after all, yours has been too easy for you to come home tired and, on top of that, find your life lacking in realism, I believe that both are good, and each has its role in human entertainment