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A Soulsborne's Traveler System by Bronz_Deck

My name is John Moore and I would consider myself a relatively ordinary person.

So then... Read more
My name is John Moore and I would consider myself a relatively ordinary person.

So then why?

Why did I instead of dying, woke up in a decrepit prison cell with some guy in knight armor looking down me? And what’s with the screen in front of me?!

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    Jocom
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    Anything beneath 200 chapters not updating daily shouldn't be read. See you in a decade or so if you happen to have a thousand or so chapters or at bare minimum 500+ and have completed.
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    Zarackkk
    29
    Another "System" type novel and another 2★ from me.

    Don't waste your time.
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      Jocom
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      Don't waste your time you say? Why two stars though? Gives us something you liked about it.
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    INeedMoney
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    Ds novel :D i gona read this
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    Elfida
    21
    Is short synopsis a new trend these days?
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      Jocom
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      This story. You read?
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    Drasolth
    32
    Fu#k this shit
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    DepressedUniStudent
    40
    Quote: DepressedUniStudent
    Always hard to get into translated fanfics, they always feel off somehow.
    Synopsis makes me hopeful though


    EDIT: started pretty good. Has potential. Don’t like that they made the MC go insane so the novel could become a more comedic one. Starts out nice and serious, MC determined to practice and overcome his challenges, turns into references and that kind of edgy “I’m insane!” attitude authors who can’t write insane people use
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      Eon
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      So it's kind of trashy?
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        DepressedUniStudent
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        I mean, you could give it 20 chapters but even then it wasn’t anything noteworthy.
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    DepressedUniStudent
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    Always hard to get into translated fanfics, they always feel off somehow.
    Synopsis makes me hopeful though
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      Dertonel
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      I'm pretty sure it's not translated? It's on webnovel fanfic section with full English.
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      Jocom
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      Ah, I accidentally stumbled upon a fanfic novel of one guy and was like 500 chapters in and got bored flipped to another and realized these women they were collecting in their stories were real people who exist... Like it's one thing to find and make a submissive sex slave through magic in a novel who loves you and is totally cool with you collecting a ton of sister wives for her... But when that stops being a fictional individual... You just seem to be designing some sort of kidnapping plan and tbh that threw me.

      Spoken as someone who has 100% written multiple different novels with people in real life in them as characters. For instance I have one depicted my own childhood lived through from my current perspective and mindset. So many of my oldest childhood friends and siblings are in it. I also have my parents in numerous novels. Usually kill em off immediately. Not out of desire to harm them just... I don't want them in the story. I've also done a story with me and my ex in it at her request. That one was more of a romantic collaboration thing though.

      I exist as someone that has almost no interest in a harem but I'm very intrigued with the concept. I mean I am somewhat on the dom side of things and have a weird paternal vibe as well as being a straight up satyrmaniac. But I was a hopeless romantic looking for the one long before my sexuality developed. I'm not looking for submissive bitch I can f#ck whenever I want. If that's all I could get I'd totally just get a harem. No my standards are higher then that... So I'll probably die alone lol 🤣
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    Yober
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    A Dark Souls Fanfic??
    lshock
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      hanck95
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      hahaha yep

      edit:
      Sorry, correct me, it started with dark souls and continues with bloodborne after the "end" of the dark souls game.
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      Fickle as light
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      a what ????/, its a miracle if the mc didn't go insane
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