Marvel: Game Maker System by NunuXD

I read up to chapter 220 and I will say that the main character is Mary Sue, he has no problems. the events are very long, the chapters are very short, the content of the chapters is very minimal by the end, the last 40 chapters can be replaced with a few sentences. especially the Naruto arch, there is no significance in saying the Naruto world just exists and that's it. I will say that the semantic load is 3/10 the plot is 4/10 the characters are 4/10

Boa, muito boa mesmo, me divertiu muito ate o ultimo capitulo recem lançado, ai veio a tristeza de ter que esperar por mais, mas essa novel é realmente muito boa mesmo, umas das melhores do gênero fanfiction que ja li.

It's been a while since I've done one of those. I hope I won't write too much. Fingers crossed.
Never mind, I did it, lol.

I picked up this novel out of boredom, it turned out to be quite an amusing journey. However, I found that I had to completely switch off my brain, lol.

Here are my thoughts:

1. The novel contains a lot of numbers, but they are presented in a disorganized manner. Although they are comprehensible, the author has difficulty arranging them in a way that would make more sense or be easier to follow, especially when it comes to prices and other details.

2. The author seems to have limited knowledge of the Marvel Universe. While some elements and interactions are used for entertainment, it becomes clear that the author doesn't know the characters he is writing about, which hinders his ability to effectively portray them. This is a significant drawback when writing a Marvel FF.

3. The grammar is meeh (though readable), which raises questions about the originality of the work. It's not just the grammar itself, as I too struggle with that when I write, but the author sometimes refers to males as "she" and females as "he," a trait commonly seen in MTL.

4. The author's understanding of superpowers, anime, and shows appears to be limited, resulting in underwhelming and shallow depictions of superpowers. This is particularly evident in how the MC deals with abilities like Rogue's, and the limited variety of abilities and skills used in the novel.

5. The novel contains some rather childish themes, lol. While I don't mean to criticize this, as we were all kids once, I find it somewhat endearing. However, it's not quite my cup of tea. For instance, the main character's appearance, described as "White hair, red eyes, and pointy teeth like a little animal (whatever the f#ck that is, lol)," seems like something I would have created as a superhero when I was a child. I distinctly recall drawing something similar, hahaha. Additionally, his fascination with cars and attempts to "act cool" with a yellow car and phone, as well as the characters' reactions to his car, and how it seems to generate more excitement than his actual superpowers, which is quite amusing, lol. There are many other instances like this throughout the novel. This leads me to believe that the author is quite young.

I believe the last point may explain why the 1-4 issues are present in the novel, so it is either that or the novel is just a badly translated novel from another author.

Despite all of that, I found some entertainment in reading it. As I mentioned, I simply turned off my brain to keep going and enjoyed it for a while at least. Read it and make up your mind, this is mine.

.........................WARNING THIS NOVEL IS DROPED.........................

Sounds Interesting 🤔

Damn this novel is good

Es una novela interesante

The author's note in the description is relatable. Alas... I can't write...