Harry Potter: The Ring Maker by Loskro1

story is ok, chapters are as short as a bathroom run on tts.

Solid work. The fanfic is obviously set in HP world but takes elements of other fictions and introduces it here as well. The system is important but not prevalent, I personally like it but it might be something others might have a problem with. This is definitely something worth checking out. If there's a problem I have with it, it's that chapters are pretty short, that being said, it's not like it's filled with filler either.

Not actually a system novel, the author drops it after he redeems his first set of points as far as I can tell (im on chap 168). Disappointing way of retconning.

Story was ok at first, but why bring in stuff from LOR and Oblivion, and other stuff. It got stupid really fast

Im a few chapters in, where's Hermione? Did Author not want her?

I’ll be honest first ~50 or so chapters are barely passable 3.5 star (70%) work. It’s awkward, has pacing issues, and quality is all over the place. Some early chapters make me want to throw a 1 or 2 star at them. Yet it does get better.

Past ch50 and after the author’s rant it gets that little spark of magic and past ch100 it starts to open its wings and a does more of it’s own thing in interesting ways while the chapters get more substance. Almost all the awkward shit is worked out, the author gets their shit together, and the world building starts getting good. I’d definitely bump the quality up to 4 stars or even a bit more where I’m at at ch 200(I have caught up to 396, quality is still slowly rising). Past that we get introduced to a lot of new original content with some themes we will all find familiar but rarely applied to the HP world.

It’s no legendary novel, but after MC gets to hogwarts and settles in it becomes evident why the novel is still alive and getting to ch400 soon, if it stayed as bad as it started or got worse it would have died long ago. If you get past the author’s noob starting phase it is a decent novel to pass the time.

I’m 130 chapters in and the mc has used his system twice. He has a system shop which he can use to buy pretty much anything he’d ever need not even exclusive to the HP world but he’s only used it once and it was to gamble. If u ignore that one glaring issue this is a pretty solid fanfic. I just wish the author at least put a limit on how much he can use the system as an excuse in the beginning instead of having him just not use it.

Sigh Course It Harry Potter Fanfic.....When You Go To Fanfictions And Crossovers This Genre Of Harry Potter Has More Stories Than Actual Original Animes And Novels💀

Is it worth reading? And is the grammar and english readible?