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First Demonic Dragon by AnathaShesha

Carter Williams was your typical twenty year old loser. After a fight in the street leaves him... Read more
Carter Williams was your typical twenty year old loser. After a fight in the street leaves him unconscious he wakes up in the body of a young dragon in an entirely new world.

Armed with a system to assist him and two beautiful wives to support him, Carter vows never to live his life hiding in the dark again as he seeks the title of dragon king. Collapse
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    wajk
    10
    This novel isn't Yuri. It's full of the author's wish fulfillment, and fetishizing 'his' women together seems to be a part of this.

    It reads like it was written by an incel, so I did not get very far. If you like unrealistic and brainless wish fulfillment, maybe this is for you?
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    Kash24
    00
    Where can I read the MTL version.?
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    DaoistAncestorQoyyum
    00
    What is this gooner shit? The mc tied his hair up and had the girls dripping

    puke troll34
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    DuelSeprent
    00
    Not the best but it's and interesting story. I'm at chapter 201 and it's got good parts and bad parts. I personally think that there's a little too much wish fulfillment, plot holes, and an annoying amount of "oh my god he is the most handsome" or shut like that. It's got cool powers and releams. Like the Abyss being different then hell. It seem more like Tartarus, the warp, and H.P. Lovecraft. I'd give it an overall score of 3.5-4. I'd give it read.
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    Lord of the Nine
    22
    Ignore the rating, the novel isn't that bad. It only has 2 main problems and a few other annoying things.

    1st problem, the wish fulfillment is on the level of my three wives are vampires but isn't as complex (In fact a lot of this story is inspired by (M3VW). The MC just keeps gathering op powers, keeps becoming more intimidating to other males, keeps becoming more and more attractive to females (which is weird since he was already the the most handsome man alive in the 1st 5 chapters but then evolved again 100 chapters later and somehow became more handsome), but he doesn't become more intelligent like Victor, so it's corny af. It's like a 16 yr old who had a dream to become the universes best male, but this one got lucky to have that wish be granted by a god.


    2nd and bigger problem, there is a lot, and I mean a lot of hate towards humans. The MC was bullied in his old world and gained a lot of resentment towards humans. He goes to a new world and woohoo he's a dragon prince surrounded by dragons and other beast people.
    Everyone else is fine, but Humans just so happen to always be evil in some way. The author keeps going out of his way to make humans do evil deeds just to justify the MC's hatred towards humans. Humans and Angels were the deceptive evil ones, but the cruel demons and the destructive dragons were honest creatures who were more trustworthy and honourable. A disgusting cliche. puke

    But besides all that cringy shit, it's not too bad and there's no problem with the writing skill. At least, it's much better than MTL. Also the powers are quite cool. Just mind the many plot holes welldone
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      Nargeon
      40
      "At least it's better than MTL" is not a compliment for an English Original novel.
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    Thirsty Reader
    71
    Genres:-Yuri

    Events:-Male Protagonist

    ???
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      Good_Night
      10
      Thank u; I'll see myself out.
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      Lord of the Nine
      10
      His girls f#ck eachother too obviously
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    Christopher
    20
    Im on chap 450+ and while its not the best its still worth a read in my opinion just read the 1st 10 chap and if you dnt like well u only lost 20ish min
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    OG-Buddha
    160
    1.5 star? Even ntr don't get ratings this low, nah we will avoid this one
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      Christopher
      20
      You should take into account that the 1.8 star rating is from 8 peoples where-as this site has 100s of 1000s or user/readers, don't let what 8 people think discourage you that's like skipping a movie because it got 3 bad reviews because only those 3 out of 100s rated it!
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        maximux
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        Yeah, but it still feels like a kid or a little girl wrote this novel. It's too emotional to my taste with a ton of sentimentality and love in every damn paragraph. Not worth it
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          Christopher
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          I only put this here because people tend to listen to the 5-20 reviews over actually giving the story a chance and I understand it's not for everyone but like my fist comment said give it a try and if you don't like it that's fine you only wasted around 20 minutes to figure that out.
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    Friehun
    10
    These AI pictures bruh…
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    Punit
    63
    Utter trash timewaste reader
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