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Fourth Scourge of Star Wars星球大战之第四天灾

Take over a《Homeworld》Mothership and then travel to the world of《Star Wars》?

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Take over a《Homeworld》Mothership and then travel to the world of《Star Wars》?

Tang Xiao: “This world is so dangerous, Mom, I'm going home.”

Wait a minute, the Mothership database actually has various science fiction game technologies, 《Sins of a Solar Empire》,《Halo》,《EVE》,《Starcraft》,《Stellaris》 ??

And there are still Jim Raynor, Master Chief, and Archbishop Artanis sleeping in the freezer?

Tang Xiao: “Humph! They will all bow down at my feet!!”

The Fourth Calamity… ah no, long live the Fourth Empire! Collapse
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    Mæxîmœ
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    Siendo sincero es bueno, solo que no es mi tasa de té. 7/10
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    Omnis Ra
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    there are tooooo mmaaaaaaaannnnyyy franchise incorporations in this story
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    Kiti
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    Confusing, MTL translation.
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    Víteliú
    10
    Average work, not gold. But it's not rubbish either, you can read it to pass the time

    Rank C
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    God_Unknown
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    Warning: this puzzle doesn't require logic, but rather interpretation. Ironically, most adults get it wrong and children get it right. Whoever gets it right will hopefully explain why to the others.

    The spoiler TAG is so that new people can enjoy and try too, so if you are going to participate, don't touch them if they are not in your comment.

    What is it, what is it, I'm the one who makes the world go round, I make women fall in love, men envy, I make urine yellow and the earth round, there's nowhere I'm not. Do you know what I am?
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      Fickle as light
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      good looks, most likely not. or money
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        God_Unknown
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      Nobius
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      Word
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        God_Unknown
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      Nobius
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      human
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        God_Unknown
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      Nobius
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      The unknown
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        God_Unknown
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      MTL Ancestor
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          MTL Ancestor
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          The children getting it right gave away the answer.
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    Dark Phoenix
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    troll5 My Lawd...The Synopsis Is Already A Poison troll22
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    God_Unknown
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    Star Wars fanfiction? First time I see one, some suicid.. cough cough... I mean a great poison tester to delve into this?
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      Kolonelmine
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      Wish me luck, if you don't hear from me again it means i died.
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        God_Unknown
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        We remember you. I will place a QR code on your tombstone to remember your deeds. escape
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          Kolonelmine
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          I've only gotten to chapter 17 yet i'm already stopping here.

          I can only describe this novel as Wish-fulfilment. The author took the things he liked and trew them all together.

          At first i thought this novel was decent, maybe it starts becoming better later on, idk.
          The thing that trew me off is the lack of depth and constant switching.
          The MC is a surpreme commander of a Mothership with a really powerfull AI but it's just there to give explenations to the MC when he has questions.

          It's the underutilisation and dismissal of anything outside the authors interest that killed my desire to read this novel further.
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            Rhaelbarnes
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            I can only describe this novel as Wish-fulfilment. The author took the things he liked and trew them all together.


            So you have barely read 17 chapters of a 2k chapter book(ongoing) and you have already decided it is wish fulfillment. Please point me to a single thing happening in the first 17 chapters that can be labeled as wish fulfillment and not just the freaking premise.

            The thing that trew me off is the lack of depth


            So how did you reach the conclusion that there is no depth from just 17 chapters? Not to mention the author goes quite in depth considering he is a single individual with limited time.

            constant switching


            One of the first things we learn is that the MC is the Supreme Commander, in simpler terms a Manager. In other words, half of the focus of the whole novel is territory/resources management.

            The MC is a surpreme commander of a Mothership with a really powerfull AI but it's just there to give explenations to the MC when he has questions.


            What do you expect the AI to do? Do all the management work? Then what is the purpose of the MC. Besides who said that that AI is a true AI? Does it have free will or any will at all?

            Not to mention that the MC expressly mentions that he needs to accumulate management experience now that the colony is small. In this way, he can improve his management skills as the colony grows. Another important aspect that the MC starts getting worried about now and especially further down the line is the loyalty of his subjects and subordinates. Having direct contact with them is the best way to enhance loyalty. He needs to be necessary for the colony and further down the line the Empire so he won't get overthrown or have to deal with constant rebellions.

            It's the underutilisation and dismissal of anything outside the authors interest that killed my desire to read this novel further.


            Like what? The author goes in depth into various fields that are about managing a colony/country. Though he might not go super in depth, he does do quite a good job.
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              SeriousReal
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              its already 17 chapters, you can usually tell from just the synopsis. which is the point of synopsis, i think you read too many cultivation novels hoping that it gets better but never does. Ended up distorting reality and corrode your literacy.
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                Rhaelbarnes
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                its already 17 chapters, you can usually tell from just the synopsis.


                Most Chinese novels' synopsis are quite bullshit or really deceptive in both directions (good and bad). 17 chapters from a minimum 2k chapter novel are the equivalent of watching the first 1.2 minutes of a 2-hour movie.

                i think you read too many cultivation novels hoping that it gets better but never does.


                I have read 1.3k chapters from this novel. It is good from the get-go. I still haven't seen a reviewer pointing to single thing that indicates this is wish fulfillment or lacking in depth.
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              pranavisololeling
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              I ain't reading allat
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                Rhaelbarnes
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                Who are you?
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                  pranavisololeling
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                  I usually comment on ranobes
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                  Rhaelbarnes
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                  Dumb ass I didn't ask what you usually do. I asked who are you and why should I care about your opinion?
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      Rhaelbarnes
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      I have read till chapter 1306.

      I stopped reading till that point for two reasons.

      One, I didn't like how the author was about the theme of an evil dictator turning into a good person.

      Two, I felt that the MC wasn't properly training his powers and that was getting on my nerves.

      However, those two points are highly subjective.

      Plot-wise? It is quite good. Things take time to happen which is realistic. I hate the whole 2 years for world domination kinda plots. The MC has to ensure at the start that he doesn't get targeted by the other forces. He navigates political schemes as well as he can using his knowledge of future events. He isn't afraid of delegating tasks to experts like Frank Underwood and the political work.

      Him waking-up characters from video games (the Protoss), TV Series (Frank Underwood), original characters, and whatever else there is is quite interesting.

      I definitely recommend reading it. The author has put quite a lot of effort into this. The only thing that slightly put me off, now that I remember it, is how the author forces everyone related to the mothership to speak Chinese. Like all the colonists and the summoned characters are speaking Chinese. Lastly, the Chinese Captain America was pissing me off. It doesn't help that I dislike Captain America considering how Marvel was forcing him to be relevant.
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        changen4125
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        I always thought that the novel was about a good person that MUST do evil things to survive, and slowly realizing that he is changing for the worse along the way. And to return to good is a uphill battle.

        All the characters he summons ALWAYS stay in character, which is why I think it was good. The MC has to work around their idiosyncrasies and personal history, and have to develop the characters to create a working empire. I think the best example is one of his generals that became a pacifist and gets mega depressed from killing people, and he has to somehow make it work.

        pretty good novel.
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      changen4125
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      I read 700+ chapters already of the webnovel translation. It's pretty good if you want a star wars fic that focuses on the clone wars era but with a twist. It is slightly edited MTL though, so you are gonna have to turn off your brain a bit.
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