Steel Waste by Niggross

It's a good game.

Well, here's my review after reading everything.

The work is quite decent at the beginning and in the middle, but towards the end, it goes completely to the west.

The author probably did not understand that it was not just battle events that were needed to make a story interesting. The story focuses too much on combat and the author always wants to find a new, stronger enemy for his MC who is becoming stronger and stronger. It's a waste of potential.

The world of Fallout is rich enough to do something else. The MC creates his own scientific faction but he barely uses it outside of battle, he doesn't act like a leader but like a gangster, which doesn't fit at all with the style of the faction he created. No politics, no management, no saving the world to put it back on its feet, the author got too stuck on the story of the game.

The ending is messy, important characters die out of nowhere and the reason for the final enemy's attack is bogus. Clearly there was no more idea. The MC's cheating gets too overdone towards the end.

The relationships between the MC and the other faction are too simple, and their reaction is sometimes stupid (The MC helps a faction enormously, but it turns against him when the enemy of this same faction spits on the radio that the MC was once part of the Brotherhood of Steel.) Seriously, who would believe their enemies, who would alienate a powerful ally just because he was part of an enemy faction when he has already left it. Especially when this ally has saved you several times.

The MC is also a big hypocrite who refuses to kill innocent people but on the other hand dismantling the NCR and letting its inhabitants suffer a civil war is ok.

In short, despite all my criticisms, the beginning and middle of the story are worth reading. This remains a fairly decent Fallout fanfiction, but with flaws. I advise you to read it to make up your own mind.

Did you survive?

So can I say the N word without getting Ban... So many questions yet no answer 😔