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Ghost Emperor Wild Wife: Dandy Eldest Miss鬼帝狂妻:纨绔大小姐

Yun Luo Feng, Hua Xia Medicial School’s genius, died from an accident and her soul attached to Long... Read more
Yun Luo Feng, Hua Xia Medicial School’s genius, died from an accident and her soul attached to Long Xia mainland’s General family’s useless eldest miss. This waste of an eldest miss not only can’t read or practice martial arts, but is big chested, has no brain, is arrogant and self-willed. Since having the crown prince as a perfect fiance isn’t enough, she actually snatched a pretty boy in public, leading to the crown prince annulling the marriage.

But she couldn’t stand the annulment and hanged herself. Opening her eyes again, she is no longer the previous useless miss. She contracted a God’s puppet and carries a spiritual space. With wonderful hands that can rejuvenate and medical skills that overturn the world!

Both the the royal descendants and nobles above and the merchants below, all compete to curry her favor. Even His Royal Highness, the crown prince,who previously broke the engagement, came knocking on the door wanting to reconcile.

In regard to this, a mysterious man finally couldn’t endure: «Whoever dares to come and harass my woman, let them come but never return!» Collapse
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    LinnichG
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    [Review: C100 — Ongoing]
    This is an Initial and Incomplete Review. Mostly written as a Personal Note.

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    - The current Writing Style is a bit sub-standard; and my assumption is that the childish translation helped to make it so.

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    - Dialog.
    The Starting Dialog seems a bit childish. (Ex: thoughtless arguments, swearing for no reasons, etc.) And the language is simplistic and often vulgar. (Maybe due to the translation.)

    - Plotting.
    The Starting Plot seems a bit weak. (Ex: The MC just awakened in another world... where exactly she got all confidence without knowing things clearly, where does all her arrogance comes from? Just because of a Medical Code? How comes she fully trust all of sudden, something that she doesn't even really understand, while knowing that her family has Great Enemy surrounding her? Really inexplicable...)

    - Generic Characterization.
    It is common for light-novels to have faster-pace and poorer characterization than Standard Novels. That being said, this one seems to be quite the sub-standard characterization, typical of many C-LNs. The one difference being: Prota is Female. (Ex: No one questions the changes of the MC, Family trusts unconditionally without reasons, enemies needlessly arrogant, etc.)

    - Short Chapters.
    Cutting chapters of the novel so short —for me— is like opening a big bag of Lays... 3/4 filled with airs—disappointing. The whole Empty-Box strategy just to make more chapters is a bit deplorable.

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    My current verdict is that this novel is a bit disappointing.
    To be honest, I find this so hard to read, that I'm uncertain if I'll be able to finish it, and give out the Complete Review.
    I had some initial expectations due to the rather high review (Rating: 4 - Votes: 13), and yet, most of what I uncovered wasn't worth such a high appraisal.
    I already knew that the Rating System on this site was rather dubious, but after reading near 100 chapters, this thought was further reinforced.
    Currently, I won't talk about the story, since I did not read enough.
    But the way the novel was —written, translated, structured, and— characterized can only be summarized in one word — Deplorable!
    It makes the novel feel: childish, simplistic, and sometimes nonsensical.
    My current Biggest Criticism is mostly: how generic the Dialogs, Plots, and Characters are.
    Most descriptions are simplistic, and characters portrayed are so shallow, that one would think that they were simply born brainless or arrogant.
    This novel has barely any decent Foreshadowing, making some of the actions of the characters rather sudden and stiff. (Ex: Inexplicable Arrogance of some characters.)
    And the Morality Side of this novel seems inexistent. (Ex: The Inexplicably arrogant MC, repays others' inexplicable arrogance, by even more nonsensical arrogance...)
    My thought is that this kind of novel may hook less experienced readers, and isn't really constructive in any way. Though those who may enjoy childishly obvious and shallow face-slapping would probably enjoy this.
    Honestly, I the 100 chapters I've read is worth to put this as a: C-LN Trash-Novel.
    Read it at your own risk.

    PS: This is probably my very first C-LN trash-novel, where the MC is actually female.

    [Personal Recommendation for similar genre:]

    If someone is willing to spend time to read this, they might as well read: Rebirth of the Malicious Empress of the Military Lineage, or The Eldest Daughter Reborn. Both are shorter and well written, and the overall is excellent. The face-slapping is in no way as childish as this one, the stories are inspiring, and characters are well developed.
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      SeriousReal
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      so many labels and tags, you trying to replicate a hud or something?
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