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Battle of Ascension by HotIce

Humanity is trying to overcome a crisis that has occurred on Earth, but all effort has become... Read more
Humanity is trying to overcome a crisis that has occurred on Earth, but all effort has become futile.

In the face of a dead end, waiting only for the destruction of the Earth, a voice suddenly rang out broadcast to the whole planet.

Ding!!!

«Battle of Ascension Phase 1: Preparation, begin!»

Ding!!!

«Battle System will active after Phase 1 starts» Collapse
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    yashraj69
    00
    I liked it welldone
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    skyvino
    30
    Trash, dumb, coward, weak mc
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    Nicolas2472
    31
    I am not going to go into the plot because I barely read until chapter 3, but it is impossible , the grammar is terrible, it is as if a child had written. To give you an idea, there are things like this "Elmira was scared, her son had been in danger recently and now her son wanted to go back to hunting, she didn't know if her son was going to be okay" and so constantly, you lose neurons reading this
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      Tugx
      40
      Bro the example you gave us has 0 grammatical issues, it is written in a way that's hard to read but that's all tbh
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        Nicolas2472
        31
        grammar is part of linguistics that studies the structure of words and their accidents, as well as the way they are combined to form sentences; includes morphology and syntax, And in this case I mean that the sentences are terribly poorly structured, it is not pleasant to read something where the same structure is repeated constantly as if a child were writing.
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          Tugx
          20
          True true, thought u meant that he had miss spelled it or something similar
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    t11r
    10
    nice one
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    Ntzxo
    12
    Don't bother with this one. Translation sucks; I might've bear through the rough translation if the story was good but it's not. This novel got nothing new or interesting[b][/b] just lines after lines of crappy cliche MC.
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    GameContentReader
    60
    in short an stupid and idiot mc
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      green killer
      21
      can you specify? I'm interested in history but I hesitate to read it, I don't want to waste time on a trash history
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        GameContentReader
        70
        a system suddenly appeared on earth and well u know the world have become apocalypse or post apocalyptic then the MC is hunting? (I dont remember if he and his friends is hunting or anything)on outside of the city and then they encounter a high level monster( from the normal human view) then his friend sacrificed himself to save the stupid MC and then the mc crying after going home and swore that he will become stronger to Protec blah blah blah then he use his new attribute 'luck' and discover a cave that contained a dragon bloodline( its a high level dragon bloodline) then the fcking MC.. he have a stats of a high level player(idk if it's player called them) and have a pressure and fearing a low level monster and cant fight a several of the monsters and if anyone have his high stats they can easily kill the monsters

        I can't narrate anymore...
        just if you don't want a fcking stupid, idiot, sissy MC then don't read this promise trust me
        IDK if the mc have a character development on the latter chapter cuz I drop it around chapter 30

        (sorry for the bad and wrong grammar) peace.
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