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The Soul Keeper by Dweia

The smell of blood invaded my nostrils. I watched helplessly as the woman standing over me raised... Read more
The smell of blood invaded my nostrils. I watched helplessly as the woman standing over me raised her sword. I was completely drained, I had no mana left, no items, nothing. As the crimson tendrils held me down by my arms and legs, all I could do was wait for my death.

As the sword drew near, I felt the last bit of courage I had disappear. I was going to die. Alone. In this god forsaken place filled with evil. And for what? To protect those ‘friends’? The same people who mocked me, took advantage of, and used me?

Oh, who am I trying to fool? I was here only because of my own greed. Because I wanted to be useful to someone. Because I wanted to that group to need me. To value me. To have a reason to keep me around. How naïve I was, thinking that power would grant those wishes. All it did was help build a wall between me and everyone else.

The sword approached. I saw the purple light reflect off the sword’s blade. After everything I went through, I hadn’t expected my death to be by the hands of another player. I saw her smile, but this time I didn’t think it was beautiful. It was an ugly smile because it was genuine. She was enjoying watching me die. She was enjoying killing me.

The sword struck my chest and pierced my heart. I let out a scream of pain and agony. The pain was so real, all of this was so real. It shouldn’t be, but it was. What should have been a simple game had become my new reality — all of our new reality. A reality filled with magic, war, blood, and death.
My vision darkened as the pain slowly faded. I felt the last of my vitality leave my body. It felt cold. I wondered to myself, when would I stop being? When would my thoughts disappear?

Soon, I saw those words I feared for all this time appear before me. «DEATH», in the pale blue font the game always used. They remained suspended in the air for several seconds. It was over. After a long time of fighting, grinding, and exploring, it was finally over. I had died. This was the end of my story.

Suddenly, words before me shifted and changed into something different. I took a shallow breath as I heard a faint heartbeat. Collapse
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    NomeTheGnome
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    I didn't make it past 50 chapters, because the MC can't say no in clearly awful situations.
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    Homie_Reader
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    Tbh, this novel was not that good in my opinion. It's something that can pass the time but you'll feel irritated and frustrated. The concept of the novel wasn't bad at all and had a lot of potential. However, the author wasn't able to make that potential shine well enough. The interaction between the characters was borderline idiotic. These guys kept keeping secrets from each other even when they didn't have to. Even a herd of Buffalo would have better communication with each other than the characters in this novel.


    The MC took way too long to have some form of development. He kept gaining new abilities but his mind didn't grow at the same rate. For a good number of chapters, Kai kept "flinching" at everything. Like seriously, he had more than enough strength to decimate a huge boulder and he kept flinching like a rabbit in the wild. He was the embodiment of a pushover and remained one till the end.
    . It was frankly annoying.

    After reading up till ch. 228, I got an epiphany: I didn't need to read all the words. All I had to do was scroll through the chapter and grasp the key points and move on, and that's what I did. Towards the ending, it seemed the author gave up and wanted to wrap it up quickly.

    In conclusion, like I said at the start, this isn't bad. I respect the author's effort. But if you wanna read it, better hope your patience holds up cause you'll be relying on it for the most part of the novel.

    Edit: After posting this, I realized my review is pretty long. Sorry about that lol
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    Coolfishy101
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    It’s good but the ending/ epilogue is a bit disappointing
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    greenstorm
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    This is one of those novels where the mc is confused as he doesn't know whats going on which means you the audience don't know whats going on, i suppose this is meant to draw you in but this achieves the opposite effect with me especially when the mc just gets tossed around by ppl more powerful than him.

    It seems like it gets better after ch105 and everything will start making sense after this...but i'm out i'm here for enjoyment and have spent the past 100 chapters being too irrated to continue.
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      sixcentum
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      yo, valid. A book shouldn't require 200,000 words before it gets good.
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    ID:entity:Kelvin
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    Weird but
    GOOOOOOD
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    Landlord
    20
    Synopsis with a taste of Prologuecheerful
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