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Unfortunate Hero's Retirement Life by HotIce

At the most unfortunate day which also the luckiest day for Xing Heero, his village was attacked by... Read more
At the most unfortunate day which also the luckiest day for Xing Heero, his village was attacked by a specter. He lost family, his childhood sweetheart, he lost everything. However, on the same day, the strongest man called Saint picked him up as his disciple.

After years of training under the strongest man, Saint. To fulfill his Grandfather’s dream to be a Great Hero, Heero started his career as a Hero. Heero was determined to kill specter and would not let any child experienced the same experience as him.

However, maybe he had used all his luck to get the strongest man as his Master. Somehow, all of his achievement was stolen by the other heroes. The unfortunate event kept happening to Heero which led all of his achievement being robbed by the other Heroes.

In the last of his unfortunate event, he tried to kill God Specter, but it only ended him up sealed in Eternal Ice. The last moment before Heero lost consciousness, he vowed he would retire as Hero.

«Father! Mother! I will be obedient! I will stop to be Hero and continue our family line, please release me from this Eternal Ice!» Collapse
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    ShadowPrimus
    00
    I just loved it. The storys premise is good, and i love the way MC holds a certain values as a top priority. It has a lot of daily activities and is a nice slice of life story. The characters are developed step by step and you can see them develope more as the chapters go by... The ending was rushed but it didnt't spoil the story for me.
    So to recap, good slice of life with touching scenes. Nice story for relaxing and enjoying the day. It lacks in action departement and has a rushed ending but all in all 4/5.
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    Xadro
    12
    I couldn't stand reading it anymore after 18 chapters, there is nothing that stands out in this story. It's just plain terrible, from the writing to the pacing to the characters.
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    Jedi
    01
    If you can get past the bad spelling this book is OK

    Super op main character
    but the ending was really rushed it jumped all over the place and was really hard to read
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    fen
    fen
    42
    I finished it, but didn't enjoy it.
    This story feels like a slice of life trying it's best to be an action story and falling flat as a result.
    There's an interesting premise and potential for a good story but it just never delivers on its promises.
    The hero is too broken OP from the beginning to the point that it's not a satisfying action story, and there's nice quirky slice of life moments that could shine if given more time, but it's like the author needed the story to be an action one so it's back to bland fight scenes almost immediately.
    My biggest gripe is that nothing is ever paid off. There are scenes which build in intensity but the drop just never happens. Any more would be spoilers, but this novel felt like bad trap music.
    There's actually an entire epilogue arc which is a huge rarity, given most stories usually have a single chapter or even a paragraph, but when that felt rushed and I was left disappointed at the end
    There's a bunch of grammatical errors and spelling mistakes as well, but none that jarred me so badly that I dropped.
    This is at best a 2.5/5.
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    Dorbrim
    00
    Отличное чтиво. Как по мне лёгкое и приятное для глаз и мозга
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    Natsu-gildarts
    51
    Acc to WN

    Grammar is not for a lot of people. But the novel's decently liked.

    Also, #Panic# this novel is completed.
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      panic
      20
      Thanks!
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