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Chapter 1714: Apex Predator.

The enemy was in front of her, kneeling, and momentarily vulnerable.

Who knew how long that vulnerability would last? The demon would most likely regain his bearing a heartbeat later.

Everything inside Rain screamed for her to attack, to throw her body forward and slay the abomination before that happened. After all, she could not be sure that there would be another chance later.

Adrenalin flooded her bloodstream, and her heart thundered feverishly. Her pupils widened, her mind drowning in excitement, fear, and frenetic urgency.

But, at the same time, the memory of the teacher's arrogant voice rang in her ears:

«Bruise? What do you mean, it will leave a bruise? Listen, disciple… you should be grateful to your kind and gentle teacher for educating you so tenderly! The last time I made such a mistake, I was stepped on by a mountain. Not that left a bruise!»

It was the mark of a skilled warrior to keep a cool head in the middle of the fiercest of battles, And so, she suppressed her excitement, ignored her fear, and cast away her sense of urgency.

«Don't be greedy… greed will get you killed. It is a sin, and only those strong enough to bear the consequences have the right to be sinful… Rain did not abandon her caution and attacked calmly.»

The tip of her black sword slid into the seam of the Huntsman's breastplate, plunging deep into his side.

This time, there was very little resistance. Unlike her javelin, the dark tachi pierced the demon's flesh almost effortlessly.

But instead of leaning into the thrust or twisting the blade to wreak more damage, Rain immediately pulled it back and jumped away.

And just in time.

Although the Huntsman seemed momentarily dazed, and his weapon had been destroyed, his fist was already tearing the air with stunning speed. If Rain had been a split second too slow to disengage, her head would have been turned into bloody pulp. As it was, she had enough time to block with the dark tachi, and received the harrowing blow on its blade.

She was thrown backward like a rag doll. Which was the intended outcome. If Rain had been stubborn and tried to stand her ground, her body would have received the bulk of the impact. But by allowing her to be carried away, she dissipated the force greatly.

…It still hurt like hell.

It felt like every bone in her body was about to burst.

But they didn't.

Rain was tossed back into the shallow water once again and skidded in the mud. The ley water washed away her sweat and numbed the pulsing pain in her side, which felt almost pleasant.

«Ah… I need to stand up

This time, it took her a little longer to gather herself.

Feeling the mud starting to pull her down, Rain groaned and rolled onto her stomach, then staggered to her feet.

The black tachi rose into a high stance, sending drops of dirty water flying.

«How badly did I wound him?»

It had to be a pretty terrible wound… the black sword created by her teacher was even sharper, deadlier, and much more frightening than she had imagined. If the Huntsman had been a human, he would have been dead by now, his heart pierced by the dark blade.

But he wasn't… he was a Chalice Knight, a demon from the retinue of an ancient titan that had haunted these lands for thousands of years.

So, even though the wound Rain had delivered him was ghastly, it was definitely not enough to bring the abomination down.

She had done something equally important, though.

She had destroyed his axe, effectively disarming the horrid demon.

Looking up, Rain stared at the Huntsman

The abomination was still kneeling, his hands resting in the mud. Fetid blood was spilling from the seams of his scorched armor. The bestial snout of his snarling helmet seemed even more terrifying now, and there was dark liquid flowing from between the green fangs.

«Come on

Disarming the Huntsman was not that important, in and of itself. Sure, without the great battleaxe, his reach would shrink, allowing her to engage the abomination in melee. But he was more than strong and ferocious enough to tear her apart with his bare hands. Rain could hold out for a few seconds and survive a handful of exchanges, but attempting to fight the demon up close would inevitably result in her death.

However…

Chalice Knights were not simple abominations. These towering, armored warriors of the bygone era harbored a ghastly secret.

Rain had not learned that secret from talking to the Awakened who had ventured into the forest and faced its fearsome overlord. Instead, it was something that everyone in Ravenheart knew… that she had known from the day Seishan, Queen Song's daughter, killed the terrifying leader of the Chalice Knights.

The tales of that battle had spread far and wide in the Song Domain. More than that, detailed Information about the surviving abominations was provided by the town hall when it issued the extermination missions.

The bestial helmet of the Huntsman was no mere decoration. It hinted at his true nature… because all Chalice Knights were shapeshifters.

There was a rabid beast living in each of them, and when the ancient warriors faced a powerful enemy or was in danger, that beast came out.

The dreadful demon that she had been fighting so desperately did not even show the true extent of his harrowing power, yet.

But now… now that his axe was destroyed and his blood was pouring into the mud, he would.

And that was Rain's best chance to kill him.

Out of there, in front of her, the kneeling Huntsman let out a husky growl. His limbs flinched, as if struck by a painful convulsion.

Then, his growl grew into a deafening roar.

The demon's armor cracked… no, it was his bones cracking underneath it. His spine bent, and dark fur suddenly burst from the seams of the rusted armor.

Long claws tore through the metal of his gauntlets.

The transformation had started.

It seemed gruesome, and gruesomely painful. It was also deeply frightening — not only because Rain knew that the unleashed beast would easily rip her to shreds and devour her, but simply because watching something human-like suddenly change into something Inhuman was terrifyingly appalling.

None of that mattered to her, though.

What mattered to Rain was that, from what she knew, the transformation of the Chalice Knights took some time to happen. Even if it was just a couple of seconds… in a battle, those seconds were like an eternity.

She had been waiting to stake her life on that eternity the whole time.

As the Huntsman's bestial roar reverberated across the burning swamp, Rain dashed forward.

Her steps were light and swift.

Before the demon could assume his true form, before the echo of the roar was swallowed by the shadows…

She reached the kneeling abomination and brandished her black sword.

The dark blade hissed coldly as it cut apart the world.

And also the Huntsman's neck.

The darkness nestling in the crack of his visor gazed at her silently as his grow abruptly stopped, and the bestial helmet flew into the air, a fountain of dark blood spilling from it in a spiral as it spun.

It was a clean cut. The horizontal slash was performed with perfect form, thanks to the countless thousands of practice swings she had performed under the watchful guidance of her tutors.

The Huntsman's severed head fell into the water and sank into the swamp with a ripple.

His towering body swayed slowly, and then collapsed.

…Rain swayed, as well, and sprawled in the mud next to it. The tension drained from her body, but so did all her strength.

She breathed hoarsely, staring at the distant sky.

The flames were dying down, but she was still surrounded by terrible heat.

«Well… it's good. I won't freeze to death yet, at least

In the smoky silence that followed, a sudden noise resounded, sounding indescribably misplaced in this hellish scene.

It was the sound of applause.

Rain tiredly turned her head and stared at her teacher, who had finally deemed it necessary to crawl out of her shadow.

His voice was unnecessarily loud.

«Congratulations! You have slain an Awakened Demon, Chalice Knight!»

He smiled and added quieter, his tone turning warm:

Well done.»

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    Dummybaron
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    Wouldn't it be great, to rest for a few months while being absolutely safe, with nothing terrible happening?

    Well set the timer guys, because we getting absolutely damned by Fate &
    Bad luck soon.
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    DanielPlay
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    I'm a little disappointed, I thought Rain would awaken soon or that it wouldn't take so long to form a soul core. I confess that if I were her, I would have preferred to challenge the first nightmare. 😂😂😂😂
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    Damba
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    Молодец, Рейн welldone joy
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    1715: There Are No Washing Machines in Ravenheart.

    «Well done…»

    Rain had just killed an Awakened Demon, but hearing her teacher's praise was strangely just as validating. Or rather, it made the act of slaying the Huntsman feel more meaningful… in any case, it was a nice feeling.

    Too exhausted to move and hurt all over, she simply lay in the mud and rested. Her gaze was directed at the sky, which was as empty as her mind. Feeling too lazy to think, Rain simply stayed still and savored the moment, unbothered by the encroaching cold.

    By then, the ghostly flames had been mostly extinguished, with only a few small tongues of fire dancing here and there above the ravaged swamp.

    While she was spacing out, her teacher disappeared somewhere. Soon, he emerged from the shadows, carrying her bow, backpack, and other things she had left on the outskirts of the forest.

    Placing most of it on the ground, her teacher then walked over and carefully covered her with her winter coat.

    «Here, don't catch a cold.»

    Rain smiled faintly, enjoying the warmth.

    Her teacher, meanwhile, approached the corpse of the Huntsman, looked at it curiously, and gave it a little kick. Then, he circled it slowly, mumbling some nonsense in a hushed tone:

    «Chalice Knights… Chalice Knights… wait, don't tell me. Were these the poor bastards who drank Jade Queen's nectar? Soon, there was nothing but bestial need left… huh, they might be. What fools! Even my little sister knows not to drink everything given to her by shady characters…»

    «It's you… you're the shady character!»

    Rain wanted to scoff, but then decided against it.

    Instead, she asked:

    «Teacher… can I Awaken now?»

    She knew the answer, of course, but hearing it again would give her confidence.

    He smiled.

    «Well. You've already made great progress and learned how to sense your essence. I'm pretty sure that absorbing the soul shards of this demon will be the final straw and serve as a catalyst to make your essence Awaken. Of course, that alone won't make you an Awakened.»

    Her teacher looked at the mud with a finicky expression, then reached into the shadows and pulled out an opulent wooden chair out of them. Placing it on the ground, he sat down and let out a satisfied sight.

    «The problem is that there will be no vessel to store your essence, and no bridge between your soul and your body… at least that is how I understand it. However, you will be able to control your essence — and by controlling it, you will be able to create such a vessel, which is itself the bridge. A soul core. It will require time and effort, but with your level of enlightenment, I am sure that you will manage splendidly. When you do form a soul core… that is when you'll undergo a rebirth and become Awakened.»

    Rain listened to his voice silently, then sighed.

    «…How long will it take?»

    Her teacher chuckled.

    «I have no idea. That wholly depends on you… but, from what I am told, learning to control essence is the hard part. Forming a soul core is relatively easy, albeit tedious. So… a few months? A year? We'll have to wait and see.»

    «I bet I can do it in a day.»

    Rain didn't voice her defiant thoughts and smiled.

    «What comes next?»

    Sitting comfortably on his luxurious chair, her teacher smiled.

    «Ascension is a step of rising above one's mortal nature. You will have to accumulate power by improving the quality of both your soul essence and your body. That can be achieved naturally, by slowly refining the essence, or by slaying powerful enemies. Once your essence reaches a qualitative change, the last step is to reform your soul core. That's… a bit tricky.»

    He shook his head.

    «The easier part of the process is learning how to access your Soul Sea. The harder part… sadly, it requires the knowledge of a soul refining technique. In the past, many such techniques were known to us humans, but sadly, that legacy has been lost. These days, everyone simply relies on the Nightmare Spell.»

    Rain raised an eyebrow.

    «So, what? I can't Ascend? Should I just go and jump into a Nightmare?»

    Her teacher furrowed his brow.

    «Can't Ascend? Who do you think your teacher is? Of course, you can Ascend! The fact that no one else has a soul refining technique doesn't mean that I don't, or that I can't invent a new one from scratch.»

    Rain turned her head and stared at him dubiously.

    «So does he have one, or is he going to invent one?»

    Well, it didn't really matter to her now. She was not even an Awakened yet, so Ascension seemed distant enough to not feel real.

    Even the Awakening…

    Rain sighed.

    «…I still want to challenge a Nightmare.»

    She had decided that she wouldn't, but that didn't prevent her from fantasizing about becoming a carrier of the Nightmare Spell.

    Her teacher stared at her somberly.

    «What? Why?»

    She pursed her lips.

    «I just want to, okay? Fine, it's great that i can form a soul core and Awaken! But will i really be an Awakened? What kind of Awakened doesn't have an Aspect? Not to mention… not to mention that I won't be able to receive any Memories from the Spell! All those Awakened in Ravenheart are walking around in suits of shiny armor and wielding enchanted weapons. Clothes that clean and repair themselves! Quivers that never run empty! Best of all, they can just summon and dismiss their equipment instead of having to lug it around while climbing mountains!»

    The Path of Ascension was too laborious without the Spell. Rain was willing to accept that finding her Aspect and Flaw would take her a long time, perhaps even longer than becoming a Master.

    But the Memories… simply not having to launder her clothes would be worth it!

    Her teacher suddenly laughed.

    «So this is what it's about? Memories?»

    Rain glared at him for a few moments, then gestured weakly to herself.

    «A weird apparition like you might not care, but look at me… soot, ash, sweat, swamp water, mud, blood, and gods know what else! This is what I have to deal with after each hunt. There are no washing machines in Ravenheart, either! I'll need to wash it all by hand or pay a laundress… that's after I pay the healer to patch me up. And speaking of patching things up, these clothes need to be mended, too!»

    Her teacher shook his head, laughing.

    «Oh… oh, I see. So it's not devastating enchantments and mystical powers that you envy, you just don't want to do laundry…»

    She opened her mouth, speechless.

    «That's not true!»

    He smiled crookedly.

    «It's not?»

    Rain gritted her teeth.

    «…I also don't want to carry all that weight on my back!»

    Her teacher leaned back and laughed again.

    «Unbelievable…»

    After having his fill of laughter, her teacher shook his head and stood up. Looking around, he picked up a piece of charred wood and scribbled something on it with his nail.

    His nail cut the wood like a diamond blade.

    A few moments later, he nodded in satisfaction and tossed the piece of wood to Rain.

    «Here, catch.»

    She raised a hand and caught the piece of wood, then hissed quietly when her side pulsed with pain.

    «Ouch…»

    Bringing the strange gift to her face, Rain studied the letters carved on its surface.

    They read:

    «You have received a Memory.»

    She frowned.

    «What's this?»

    Her teacher shrugged with a smile.

    «Treat it as a Memory coupon. What, did you think that only the Spell could reward people with Memories? Well, wrong! Your teacher is awesome, so he can make Memories just fine. Let's see… you killed an Awakened Demon this time, so I'll make you an Awakened Memory of the Third Tier.»

    Rain blinked.

    «You can make Memories?»

    He returned to his chair and grinned.

    «Sure! And, unlike the Spell, I'll even customize it to your liking. More than that… listen, I really don't want to badmouth the competition… but the Spell, it really has no imagination whatsoever. Why limit Memories to powerful weapons, enchanted armor, and mystical tools? There are so many mundane things that would make for an amazing Memory! That bodysuit of yours? I'll Memorize it, no problem. Do you want a pillow that is always cold or a magical toothbrush? Your teacher can make that happen, as well.»

    He looked at her with a smug expression.

    «Hell, I can even make a roll of toilet paper into a Memory. If you don't go overboard, it will never run out.»

    «Why the hell is that bastard talking about toilet paper…»

    Rain stared at her teacher for a while, then blinked a couple of times.

    «Are you telling me that you have been able to create Memories this whole time?»

    He nodded.

    «Strange question, but yes, sure.»

    Slowly, Rain's blood started to boil.

    «So why… the hell haven't you made me any Memories, then?! Was watching me suffer fun for you?!»

    He glanced at her with an offended expression.

    «Huh? What are you talking about? I was always planning to arm and equip you. It's just that you are still a mundane human. Until you form a soul core and Awaken, your soul can't even contain Memories. Blame yourself for being so slow! What's so hard about becoming the first human in history to Awaken naturally, huh? Do I ask for much?!»

    She took a deep breath and turned away, staring at the sky again.

    «What an insufferable, cheapskate deity! Who… who can make Memories…»

    Slowly, a few grandiose thoughts entered her mind.

    After a while, though, Rain sighed.

    «Well, It's good enough. Teacher is amazing! Sure, I won't have an Aspect, but having Memories is already great. Receiving them directly from someone Instead of earning them from the Spell is a little weird… I guess, it's not much different from how Legacies Inherit Memories from their clans, though.»

    Her teacher frowned, then chuckled suddenly.

    «Hey, now that I think about it, aren't you a Legacy yourself? Your big brother can provide everything a Legacy clan can, and much more on top of that.»

    She looked at him scornfully.

    «Oh? Teacher is like a Legacy clan now? So, do you have a Legacy Relic, then?»

    He tilted his head with a smile.

    «A bunch of them, actually.»

    Rain blinked a few times.

    «Does he really?»

    Actually, she wouldn't be surprised.

    «…Well, what about a Citadel, then?»

    He grinned.

    «A Citadel? Sure, I have one of those… it's a huge temple built of black marble, shrouded in eternal darkness, Granted, it's a bit of a fixer-upper, but what can you do? My Citadel is almost as old as the universe. The ambience there is great.»

    She stared at him silently.

    «That's great. Speaking of great, since it's teacher, there has to be a Supreme in our clan, no doubt. Should I consider myself royalty? Might as well, right?»

    Her teacher coughed in embarrassment.

    «Ah… well… technically, our clan doesn't have a Sovereign at the moment…»

    Rain's eyes gleamed with triumph.

    «His capacity for nonsense has a limit, after all!»

    «…but we do have a Supreme Devil. I used to bully the little bastard a lot in the past, but now that he's all grown-up, it's not very fun.»

    She took a deep breath, turned away, and stared at the sky.

    The sky was indifferent and beyond reach.

    «…I give up.»
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      1716: Grain of Sand.

      After a while, Rain felt rested enough to move. She rose from the ground with a grimace and went about taking care of her wounds.

      Her teacher had made a fire from the splintered remains of the twisted tree, so neither of them had to freeze in the cold. Rain disinfected the cut on her side, then wrapped it tightly in a clean bandage. That would have to do until she returned to Ravenheart and found a healer.

      Usually, she would have been lamenting the need to pay one, but there was a sizable reward promised to anyone who managed to slay the Huntsman. Not only could Rain afford a decent Awakened healer, but there would be enough coins left for her to replace the broken javelin, and maybe even upgrade a few pieces of her equipment.

      «No, wait… actually, I don't need to worry about that anymore?»

      Rain still had hope of Awakening swiftly. Even if she failed to do it before returning to Ravenheart, there would be no more hunts in the next few months — she already had everything she needed to form a soul core, so the best course of action would be to hole up in a safe place and patiently work on becoming an Awakened.

      Once she was an Awakened, her mundane equipment would not be of much use. She would be able to draw a much more powerful bow, wear armor crafted from much heavier mystical materials, and even wield Memories.

      Her entire arsenal would need to be changed. She would have to purchase a lot of things.

      …Suddenly, Rain did not feel rich anymore.

      She was so poor!

      Full of sorrow, Rain put on her winter coat and approached the remains of the Huntsman. She stared at it for a while, then glanced at her teacher.

      «Should we harvest his armor? It should sell for a lot of coins.»

      He scratched the back of his head.

      «Who's going to carry it all the way back to Ravenheart, though?»

      Rain sighed.

      «How can a deity be so useless?!»

      «…Yeah. Still, we should take the axe blade, at least. To prove the kill at the town hall.»

      That axe blade alone would sell for a hefty amount of coins.

      She fished the giant blade from the ground and attached it to her backpack. Her teacher, meanwhile, looked at the remains of the dreadful Chalice Knight and clicked his fingers.

      Several shadows suddenly rose from the ground and sliced the carcass apart, cutting the rusted armor like paper.

      Raid didn't look at the bestial features of the corpse as she harvested the soul shards and sat down, staring at them solemnly.

      There were three of them… the glimmering crystals were not too large, but to her, they meant the world.

      «This is it, then.»

      She had been striving desperately to reach this moment for four long years. Those years had been full of pain and hardship… but also joy, satisfaction, and fulfillment. And now, the final stretch of the road was right in front of her.

      Her teacher sat on the ground across from her and smiled with encouragement.

      «Go on. You worked hard to be here.»

      Rain looked at him, remained silent for a moment, and smiled back.

      «I did.»

      With that, she unsheathed her knife and crushed the soul shards one after another with its pommel.

      She felt a stream of power flowing into her soul. And then… her soul suddenly surged.

      Rain struggled to describe the way she felt with words, It was as though her entire body was suddenly permeated by a cool, vibrant, nurturing flame, However, that flame simply passed through her flesh, unable to touch it.

      «W-what… what is happening?»

      Her teacher was looking at her with keen interest. The gaze of his onyx eyes was strangely intense.

      «I can see it. Your essence is Awakening. It is as though your soul, which had been dim and drowsy, is suddenly coming to life. A soft radiance is spreading, and it is lively.»

      He remained silent for a moment, and then spoke in a calming tone:

      «Try to control it. Guide it throughout your body, following the roadmap of your major blood vessels. Your blood is circulating because of your heart… but you don't have a soul core, which is like a heart for soul essence. So, for now, you'll have to substitute it with your will.»

      Rain took a deep breath and closed her eyes, imagining the map of her body. She could feel her essence flowing freely, chaotically, with no shape or form. So, she slowly extended her will and tried to guide it.

      She had never been able to control her essence before. It had always felt like trying to push a boulder to the top of a mountain… the boulder was dead weight, it was cold and reluctant to move. The moment she lost concentration, even a little, it rolled back to where it had come from.

      But this time, her essence felt alive and responsive. It followed her guidance, flowing slowly in a complicated cycle, At first, there was a lot of chaos and colliding currents in its flow, but as Rain deepened her concentration, the torrent of her soul essence grew increasingly stable and orderly.

      Her teacher chuckled in amazement.

      «Wow. On the first try? You're doing great!»

      Rain did not open her eyes.

      «So… how do I form the core?»

      His voice was calm and confident, like an anchor that she could use to keep steady:

      «The method is simple. Once you can make the essence circulate freely, increase the speed. Make it rush like a mountain river. Then, increase the speed even more, until it's spinning inside your body like a raging whirlpool. Make it condense under the pressure of its own weight and the pull of the rotation. You don't need to form the entire soul core all at once… one grain of sand is enough. Next time, you will create one more. And then one more. Sooner or later, the density of your essence will reach a critical point, and a soul core will be formed.»

      Rain smiled.

      She could imagine it vividly… it was a beautiful process. Like stars and planets forming from incandescent stardust.

      She concentrated fully, making the essence circulate faster, and faster, and faster. The greater its speed, the more willpower she needed to keep the raging force of the whirlpool under control.

      «Come on.., a little more…»

      She could feel a condensed mass of energy slowly forming in the place where her heart would have been. It was not solid yet, but also not as ethereal as the usual state of soul essence. More like… a shimmering liquid.

      And at the very heart of that mass, where the pressure was most crushing, something solid was slowly being born.

      A tiny crystalline gemstone… so small that it could only be called a grain of sand.

      «Ah!»

      Rain opened her eyes and shuddered, her entire body drenched in sweat. The whirlpool of essence dissipated, and she sprawled on the ground in utter exhaustion. Her chest rose and fell heavily, as if she had just run a marathon.

      The mental fatigue was even worse.

      Her teacher raised a fist.

      «Success! You did great!»

      But Rain was full of bitter disappointment.

      «A single grain of sand… did I really boast that I'll form the soul core in one try? Ah, so embarrassing! Thank the gods I didn't say it out loud!»

      How long would it take her to create enough of these tiny gemstones for them to merge into a core? A month? A year?

      Rain wanted to groan.

      …But doing that would undoubtedly make her teacher way too happy, She couldn't let the enemy win!

      She sighed, and then slowly sat up.

      «I'll stay home for an entire month, let mom pamper me, and work on Awakening slowly!»

      Disappointed? Who was disappointed? A whole month… or even several months… of doing nothing and being spoiled rotten. No biting cold, no blood and sweat, no hideous abominations and revolting corpses. Just eating well and meditating in peace. It was a dream come true! Wouldn't it be great, to rest for a few months while being absolutely safe, with nothing terrible happening?

      «It sure would!»

      Her teacher suddenly looked at her with suspicion.

      His onyx eyes narrowed.

      «What is this… I sense a familiar disturbance. Hey, you didn't just think something stupid in your head, like 'finally, the worst of it is over' or 'that demon is definitely dead, nothing bad will happen… did you?»

      Rain raised an eyebrow and put on an innocent expression.

      «No? Why would I? Only a complete fool would think something like that in the middle of the Dream Realm.»

      He studied her dubiously for a moment, then exhaled slowly.

      «Well… good, And, you know, don't use such harsh words. Some people — very smart people — were known to make small mistakes like that in the past. Anyway… time to head back to Ravenheart, then…»
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        Evinie
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        Crap, I didn't know she would have no aspect... I guess we will have to wait until she finds it herself without the Nightmare spell.
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        Kiber
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        Спасибо вам за главы, Рейн сделала это ДА, Старший брат наверняка в душе очень горд за свою сестричку cat
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    Kiber
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    Главы...
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    ArMiks
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    slow day today 😑
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    hell 2011
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    I really like this sidestory.

    Always wanted to read a novel where after going through all the inheritances and masters, the MC himself leaves an inheritance and teaches his own disciples. This sidestory scratches that itch.
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      MXSTIC
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      Bro read top tier providence, Mc has a lot of students and the story actualy is about what problem they bring to the MC
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        ArMiks
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        as well as a heck ton of misunderstandings lol
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    Gato369
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    Los capítulos son tan jodidamente cortos que duelen sigh
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    Ryuk
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    Chapters about rain are fillers change my mind
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      rekicchi
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      No one would change your mind because no one cares about what you think anyway.

      (Stupid opinions should be kept inside at all moments)
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        Ryuk
        310
        I dint find them interesting , sunnys plan about visiting all the citadels pf deamons is alot more interesting ,
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          Vernaidia
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          Again, no1 cares ethsky
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            Ryuk
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            Dear ,I care ,if some one gives an effort
            Like you care enough to reply
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      NachoMetKaas
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      I would read an entire separate book about rain being trained by sunny’s shadow
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      Xtro_1
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      not really, they expand on the story outside of sunny’s main pov
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      bpolonifis
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      Well it is easy. What's the next step for Sunny and Nemphis ? To reach sovereign level without the spell helping them.
      Then in order to persuade the reader that it is logical and achievable i must present some elements working in this direction such as the water civilization where each asscented on their own.(Idea)
      The snake king who was a sovereign (idea of success). The explanation as to why there is the need (Nemphis,Cassie, Sunny), Sunny's need to ascent without the spell.(Reinforced Idea) And finally someone doing it and proving it possible Rain.

      It's just good writing. It could be worse without each element but faster it's pick and choose.
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