White Online by Alekzi

Me lo acabo de termir, el final esta de llorar o reír, pues queda la duda de como logra obtener su poder si fue por la muerte blanca o por la diosa primordial, aun que yo creo que fue por la subclase novelista. NO LO SE 🤣😭🤣😭🤣😭🤣😭🤣😭🤣😭

boring read
mc is very bland
first 50 chapter have no direction
the side characters keeps repeating how mc is a genius, but the mc hasn't really done anything. if you're not into mc that does things half ass. i suggest not to read it
you will only get annoyed

just reposting ny review for comparing the massive contrasting ratings. did it get amazing out of the world becomi g a godly scripture later on or ratings are being manipulated again?
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no direct spoiler review but there are subtle hints and the obvious were said.

it takes about 300 chapters to fully setup the characters and positions, settings and factions. every few chapters mc needs to mention his tragic trauma which in ways was self harmed again. every mention of fml they end up talking about her toes for reason unknown. Every enemy acts exactly the same, crude tasteless swearing and guarantee publicly unacceptable behaviour.

Then it hits through rock bottom, leaving enemy alive while mc is still vulnerable, got publicly praised for getting beat up by a grunt he slain before in public while revealing a nvr to be revealed trump card with no gains for doing so[ btw mc took a gun to a swordfight for that one]. He does the same thing by revealing his fathers major secret which can effect humanity for the worst, while providing the media himself via cops.

mcs every step is an exercise to shoot himself and everyone around him in their proverbial foot. The antagonist in the novel are just thugs made stronger by mc, after that its the typical genre enemy in fantasy.

combat was written poorly usually its written per tempo and if needed a perspective change it will change with the conflicts morale.
This novel outright skips range when convenient and at time reduced to turn based descriptions with mc having more turns and enemy moves would assume mc is just there to show if he recieve a hit or not. Not as jarring if its melee but mc uses a rifle so range and tempo is paramount.

I read a ton of bad novels but never had one butcher my tolerance as efficiently as this one. Even the display pic, his face shows be creamed himself.

I need a spoiler

Started off strong.. then after like chapter 280ish.. all down hill. I just kept reading and reading hoping it would get better. However it did not. It's like Cultivation Online but written by someone with an IQ of like 50

The last part of the novel feels rushed, but still a light read, it's fun if you're bored from heavy plot novels. This novel does a brilliant job in keeping you joyful. I do hope that he finishes his martial art system novel though, that felt much more intriguing.

I read up to 355 how is this historical?