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Becoming the King of A New Filthy World by Alex_morg

When Lucas was having drinks with his friends at a bar a strange girl approach him at a bar and... Read more
When Lucas was having drinks with his friends at a bar a strange girl approach him at a bar and asks Lucas some strange questions.

He didn't think much about that question I mean what could possibly a girl can do and just tell her his ideal world dream but he didn't have thought that by answering this questions, he's on his way down an insane rabbit hole.

But he awaken in a different world almost exactly like his own, but where he have the ability to freely use any woman as he wish for without anyone seeing it as anything other than completely normal, and where anyone will accept any word he say as a truth to be listened to.

Which leaves him only one in this world of casual free use: to become king. Collapse
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    AhasRiba
    20
    Lmaooo from around chapter 330 it was a complete rip-off of a certain Korean webnovel named My Onahole Academy
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      Jadebeautyhunter
      10
      drop the link to read it wiseacre
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      Deden
      00
      Sir this old man need the link 12
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    hillsidejohn
    90
    Don't bother.

    Story development
    The plot is pretty straight forward; man finds himself able to do anything and have people treat whatever he does as "normal". The twist (somewhat) is that whatever he chooses to do with his newfound talent is supposed to slowly bleed into the world and also becomes normal.

    Part of the manifestation of his powers is just him saying something and people agreeing (since it's normal). And he uses this to get money and have as much sex as he wants.

    Writing quality:
    IT'S BAD. At first it's alright but in a few chapters, AI writing WITHOUT EDITING becomes involved. Paragraphs devolve into something like this:

    The girl with big boobs was giving him a blowjob. While giving him a blowjob, the girl with big boobs, had a nice ass. The girl with the nice ass looked at him, while giving him a blowjob.

    Yeah, try nutting to that you sick grammar pervert.

    World Background:
    I don't know about transmigration tag since I never got to that part nor was there any hint of it getting there. It was just "normal America" as far as I remember, he even went to an anime/cosplay convention.

    Character Design:
    Male lead is just a normal guy. "Female lead" if you could call her that seems to be a powerful being that seemed to just like the ML and gave him his powers. Apparently because she likes how depraved he is or something. Other girls are basically just holes.

    Conclusion
    As I've said, don't bother. You can't fix this type of problem. If the grammar/syntax is bad, then you can fix it in your mind or skim through it to get the gist. But when paragraphs have repeating sentences, that's not something you can fix. A bad sentence at least takes just as much time to read (basically) as a good sentence, but a sentence that keeps paraphrasing and gets repeated multiple times is just an utter waste of a living brain cell.
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      Arbiter
      31
      I don't think one needs to be seriously invested in order to enjoy a smut novel. Writing quality, plot... while it would be better if those things were good, it doesn't matter that much. Just enjoy! thrill
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        hillsidejohn
        04
        I don't think you've read far enough. At some point, it become AI written drivel. I've read smut where it's obvious that the author's first language isn't English and I never mention it. This one paraphrases the same sentence twice or thrice in a single paragraph. I just don't remember at which chapter it starts and I don't know if it stops. It was quite enjoyable for what it is at first, but when each sentence you read is literally the previous one in a different order, over, and over, and over again, I prefer the broken English.
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          SeriousReal
          00
          maybe the author was "method writing" trying to convey his busyness on the moment for raw, real writing where he tries to send his mind image telepathically with inferior vocabulary combined with on moment impaired body functions. lol
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        SeriousReal
        10
        The girl with big boobs was giving him a blowjob. While giving him a blowjob, the girl with big boobs, had a nice ass. The girl with the nice ass looked at him, while giving him a blowjob.


        well you dont take much to please, a hole anywhere is still a hole by definition aMirite?
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          Arbiter
          10
          Huh? Your are quite amusing despite your name, lol.
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    _MENICE_
    21
    The novel got poetic in 140+ chapter making me cringe
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    Zarackkk
    40
    My review of this "masterpiece" is simple - Degenerate shit for horny freaks.
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    maximux
    50
    some nasty shit we have here...
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    Night Edge
    20
    Sauce for the thumbnail, anyone?
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    Andre
    190
    This is plagiarism, the original author Nidoranduran wrote this and posted it free on HF to read [Completed Story], but this guy alex_morg posted it on WN and made a profit from it.
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      Jadebeautyhunter
      20
      #panic# possibly update links I guess
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      Night Edge
      21
      HF?
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        Yober
        50
        Should be HentaiFoundry, unless I'm mistaken.
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      hillsidejohn
      00
      But that story only has 10 chapters?? (haven't read either)
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    Zopeee
    40
    Its just below average smut with nothing else dont read if you expect something else
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    YMDB
    20
    The only thing good about this novel is the thumbnail.
    And the smut ............. kind of ....... a little bit.
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    YoungDaoistAntabax
    11
    Dont use brain it useless
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