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Immortal长生不死

Once I’ve become Immortal, my attempt to conquer the world shall begin.

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Once I’ve become Immortal, my attempt to conquer the world shall begin.

I, Zhong Shan, in order establish a supreme heavenly dynasty, must marshal all the luck that I can gather to cleanse my own karma. Then I will have the strength to fight heaven itself, create a new world, and live forever.

First: Fate

Second: Luck

Third: Feng Shui

Four: Cultivate Inner Virtue.

Five: Fame

To gain eternal life.

To obtain fame, one must establish a heavenly dynasty and amass the luck of the world!

To cultivate inner virtue, one must establish holy sites and accumulate an immeasurable amount of merit!

To cultivate Feng Shui one must learn to communicate between yin and yang and control the powers of heaven and earth!

To cultivate luck! To cultivate fate!

Ask the whole world, who can have eternal life! Collapse
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    Viriti
    10
    Translation makes it difficult to reach 10 damn chapters. Mtl would cause your brain to rot with how the name of 1 sect or 1 person has about 40 thousand different names. Then there's the idiots who translate several volumes in, cant even try reading that because the first couple volumes translation
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    sevensevens
    20
    B tier, we also have to be fair with the rating because the novel is old.

    (book 4/ch200+) This novel is a very classic xinxia story, but instead of the MC being young he is experienced. The focus is on strategy, politics and relationships more than adventure. Fights are not too drawn out and overall the pacing is good but the word count padding is thicc. Harem tag is not to be ignored and when I say that here we have alot of cliche, believe me. The MC has a golden finger but it is actually fairly well balanced and not OP. His talent is mediocre and he makes up for it with resources. Alright lets not say too much, fellow daoist if this is your first novel I will recommend it greatly. As for experienced readers you will know from the tags, all I can say this story is well written and has an interesting plot with many cliches. It is an older novel so there are no parodies of other novels. If you want to just experience some nostalgia this is for you.

    There is one plot hole in the first 200 chapters that I found so far


    WARNING! If you have cultivated the dao of MTL --> Do not read the translation posted on ranobes. It is so bad anyways. Read this novel on novelhi. All chapters are available (MTL)...
    https://novelhi.com/s/index/Immortal


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      Jack_Nat_Mikhail
      00
      Hi fellow reader. Could you share any A tier or high B tier novels pls?
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        sevensevens
        10
        Sword of Coming

        Grasping Evil

        Here are two that are recommended less often. Keep in mind most novels have a strong perceived drop in quality after around chapter 200-300. This is partly because as a reader you get used to the authors style and receive less stimuli from the same patterns and partly because the author might be struggling to release new chapters on the fly as the pre-written arcs run out.
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    just from reading the synopsis I'm exhausted already. like dude you're immortal, take it easy
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    The last Daoist
    00
    Quote: Nargeon
    Damn this is an old one from 2010 even

    What is the name of the novel in mtl???
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      Nargeon
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      The name of what novel
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      AndreesM
      00
      Read the first comment there is a link
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    Víteliú
    12
    rank C
    I read a little, after a few chapters the author seems to lose what little creativity he had, and fills the work with clichés and useless scenes
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    ricardo2
    61
    I've only read the first 20 chaps but I think that they perfectly encapsulate what this novel is about.

    Summary - The MC is an 80 year old guy who transmigrated to a cultivation world 50 something years ago and built a commercial empire. He's basically a legend in the business and everyone knows his name. Unfortunately he started cultivating late and missed his chance to breakthrough to the Xiantian stage. The story "starts" for real after he gets a pill and breakthroughs which sets him on a path to immortality.

    Good points - as of now, the MC has the attitude of an 80 and he does not really lust after beauties and even considers some of them kids. He's not a monk but he's a respectable and controlled person.

    The mc is fiercely devoted to growing stronger and developing as a cultivator despite being an old man which is quite nice to read about as well.

    Bad points - the only downside so far is that the translator keeps too many terms in chinese; techniques, places, statuses, etc., which makes it difficult to follow the story sometimes. There are footnotes but ranobes does not have them unfortunately. The dialogues are also in bold which can be annoying.

    As of now it's a solid 3.7/4 out of 5. Solid read.
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      Nargeon
      31
      keeping terms in pinyin makes it really painful, worst case of this is Way of Choices/Ze Tian Ji
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    Huh… didnt expect that a novel from 2010 would be picked up, quite an old one
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    pranavisololeling
    20
    I'll prolly get married and have a child or two when this gets fully translated
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      Nargeon
      70
      there was a novel which would take 55 years to translate at the pace it was going when I did the math
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        pranavisololeling
        00
        Tf kinda novel is that?
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          Nargeon
          10
          I think it was The Greatest Showman
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            pranavisololeling
            00
            The synopsis actually looks pretty good but translation is so slow
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              Nargeon
              10
              yeah the novel itself isn't bad, but 2500 chapters + slow translation is actual torture
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                The last Daoist
                00
                Bro what is the name of the novel in mtl
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                  Imm011
                  00
                  长生不死
                  below the title it has raw name of novel
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    Nargeon
    20
    Damn this is an old one from 2010 even
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    ricardo2
    00
    I'll be back to review this after reading some chaps. hokage
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      arrogantyoungmaster
      10
      brave poison tester. I salute you
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      Nargeon
      20
      ping me when you're ready to review since OG cultivation novels are usually kinda interesting
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        ricardo2
        20
        Review is done hokage
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          Kash24
          00
          How was it.?
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            ricardo2
            00
            Lol, read the review, it's here.
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