Pay to Win: Uchiha in KonohaP2W • 我宇智波：分裂木叶

Author realized pay to win was too op after first few chapters so he dropped the concept mid novel and picked up another eastern Qi Luck coins gimmick for improving MC but this was discarded too very fast. also OC was very boring so the majority of story is around original characters playing comedic gag roles and reverse roles.

One of the better naruto fanfics, if a bit misleading. Despite what the title might imply, the pay to win system aspect of the novel is not relevant at all, if anything, it's just there to add some flavor to the novel. The beginning chapters might focus a bit more on the p2w system and the mc's status sheet, but once yoru gains powerful talents, the p2w is barely ever mentioned again(this happens before even reaching the middle point of the novel) and yoru's status sheet completely disappears, so around the 100 chapter mark you no longer get to see the mc's powers properly expressed.
As long as you keep in mind that this isn't a system novel, you can find enjoyment within - the author offers a subverted approach on the narutoverse that was quite entertaining, portraying the world's politics, conspiracies and various characters in a new light - what you thought was good, might have been evil! The author's disdain towards naruto himself and various other characters was entertaining, since the author doesn't just hate on these characters, but properly justifies why they are wrong and for what reasons(although sometimes his bias is a bit too heavy). Some of my complaints are that, aside from dropping the p2w system in the gutter somewhere along the way, the author seems to be overly verbose at times, repeating the same thing, just from different perspectives. Also, there's a harem, and even if it doesn't bog down the story too much, they're obviously just there to satisfy the author's vanity - having the character he created bang all the hotties. It's a bit cringe how blatant it is, but since it's not a big part of the story, i feel it could have been worse.
In conclusion, a fun novel! Bit heavy on politics and conspiracies, but a good read regardless. A solid 3.9 out of 5 - sometimes things got a bit dodgy due to the author's bias, but still alright.
P.S: The author did shikamaru and naruto dirty, dear god, i was straight up traumatized...if you know, you know, i won't spoil it, but goddamn. 🤢🤮

Dropped at ch 268
It started off as a solid 4.5⭐ but by the time I dropped this it was barely 1⭐

It's starts interesting a system where mc can exchange currency for gold to gain power magically. So, since mc is quite poor he cannot fully utilize it and since the conversation rate from Ryo to gold is so shit he's effectively gained this reputation of being greedy for money. However once Mc gains a position where gaining funds is actually easy author suddenly completely throws the whole system bit in the bin and now we only learn about mc having upgraded his abilities when ever he shows them off to the next enemy. This... read like absolute shit. It's confusing. Also, the author heavily focused on politics of everything but later he even abandoned that too and nominally it became I have the bigger fist and the world bend over backwards to fit my idea without much of any reason why things are like they are. The focus is all over the place and arguably while the story progress mc character gets warped more and more into someone really unlikable.

В моменте он становится слишком скучным

It started nice but politics keep happening in like every chapter(currently read till chapter 71) and that made me start to loose interest. You don't feel attachment to characters here.

I swear to God this novel is unexpectedly good. You would not think that this was written by a chinese author. Names are all japanese and no chinese motherf#ckkers in a japanese novel... finally. He is also trying to keep it logical. I really recommend it. currently chapter 36.

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